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More work by Mark Prisco
  1. Mark Prisco

    Mark Prisco Well-Known Member

    she runs down the
    sand with her
    shoes in her hand.

    II
    by a deft play of light
    we’re sat beside
    the broken sea..
     
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  2. Desiree Wright

    Desiree Wright Alphabetter

    A sucker for the sea side.

    Like the image, and the
    sea as something broken.

    Thanks. D
     
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  3. Mark Prisco

    Mark Prisco Well-Known Member

    thanks Desiree
     
  4. Ben Stubbs

    Ben Stubbs Well-Known Member

    I don't see the relevance of the deft play of light.  If you were running down the sand surely you would reach the sea easily enough without it.  Small quibble, much enjoyed.
     
  5. Mark Prisco

    Mark Prisco Well-Known Member

    thanks Ben. I'm looking at her, seeing myself beside her. transforming the potential into actual. something like that
     
  6. Ben Stubbs

    Ben Stubbs Well-Known Member

    P.S. Sat=sitting?
     
  7. Ben Stubbs

    Ben Stubbs Well-Known Member

    Our posts overlapped.
     
  8. Mark Prisco

    Mark Prisco Well-Known Member

    i don't know, i suppose. why?
     
  9. Mark Prisco

    Mark Prisco Well-Known Member

    freaky
     
  10. Ben Stubbs

    Ben Stubbs Well-Known Member

    Sat means somebody or something sat you there.
     
  11. Mark Prisco

    Mark Prisco Well-Known Member

    thanks Ben. that's alright.
     
  12. James Spears

    James Spears Well-Known Member

    Mark- Truly enjoyed
     
  13. Mark Prisco

    Mark Prisco Well-Known Member

    thank you James. just a little baby poem
     
  14. Ben Stubbs

    Ben Stubbs Well-Known Member

    Falling into place now, Mark.  I like it.  I think sat in this case is bang on.
     
  15. Mark Prisco

    Mark Prisco Well-Known Member

    im glad you do. thanks again, Ben
     
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