By Cheryl.Leverette, Apr 19, 2017.
Colostrum still drips
from my breasts
and you're fucking
the bitch next door.
Oops. Made some edits. I must be still asleep. I know better.
A lot shown in these four lines, Cheryl. I like this very much.
Tks, Ben. I'd hoped for that.
Nice work... sad, because it is so believable.
Not sure title is working with the body of the poem. Unless you are describing him as th fuck of the century. But then I still come back to that means the best sex ever. Some clarity needed I think.
Well I was hoping the title could go in several directions. I'll think about how to clarify it.
Thanks so much, Mike.
I can't help but reply to this one, even though I'm on ignore.
It just doesn't ring true, if you found out the father of your child was fucking a woman next door, there's no way you would have ever called her a lady. Now the title, I know is a usual and customary Cheryl device. And it worked. Please for the love of God, call her something other than a lady lest some of us think it's we who've been fucked by your story.
Maybe The [last] fuck of the century? otherwise I struggle to link title and content. C
Maybe think a little more about it? It doesn't really matter to me how the title is interpreted but I do want to leave it open for now. Thanks, C.
Tks @Michael Barry for the like.
I feel like this would be a great part of a longer poem. Not sure the title does much for the piece itself, but it does tempt a click.
Thanks for making me look up "colostrum."
Yeah, I'm still thinking about what I want to do. Tks!
1/9 of all words devoted to "fuck"....that's hard to do and still say something
Hey that's a cool thought. Tks, Tim!
Cheryl + fuck + something dripping = Featured Poem.
p.s. that was no lady next door.
I don't know! You decide.
Crack me UP ! Cheryl you're such a bad bad girl
Great poem. I hope they put it on the front page.
Well of course! Thanks, James.
I love Frank Sinatra's 'New York'.
Tks, Dan. Hope you're doing well.
wouldn't it work with "your having sexual intercourse with the woman next door"
I know it knocks everything about, but the F word seems to be there for the sake of having it there.
Tks @Jay Gandhi
Lady = perhaps bitch?
Agree with above -- the title confuses IMO.
Tks, Ton. Yeah bitch is more appropriate.
Can't handle me, can you?
Forgot the smiley face.
Happens often here, Michael. You get used to it.
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