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The fuck of the century

By Cheryl.Leverette, Apr 19, 2017.

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  1. Cheryl.Leverette

    Cheryl.Leverette Reading poetry, editing media

    Colostrum still drips
    from my breasts
    and you're fucking
    the bitch next door.
     
  2. Cheryl.Leverette

    Cheryl.Leverette Reading poetry, editing media

    Oops.  Made some edits.  I must be still asleep.  I know better.
     
  3. Ben Stubbs

    Ben Stubbs Well-Known Member Supporter

    A lot shown in these four lines, Cheryl.  I like this very much.
     
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  4. Cheryl.Leverette

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    Tks, Ben.  I'd hoped for that.
     
  5. Michael Ashley

    Michael Ashley Fuckwit Extraordinaire Editor

    Nice work... sad, because it is so believable.

    Mike
     
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  6. Michael Ashley

    Michael Ashley Fuckwit Extraordinaire Editor

    Not sure title is working with the body of the poem. Unless you are describing him as th fuck of the century. But then I still come back to that means the best sex ever. Some clarity needed I think.
     
  7. Cheryl.Leverette

    Cheryl.Leverette Reading poetry, editing media

    Well I was hoping the title could go in several directions.  I'll think about how to clarify it.

    Thanks so much, Mike.
     
  8. Anna Ruiz

    Anna Ruiz I have the same religion as that tree over there. Supporter

    I can't help but reply to this one, even though I'm on ignore.  

    It just doesn't ring true, if you found out the father of your child was fucking a woman next door, there's no way you would have ever called her a lady. Now the title, I know is a usual and customary Cheryl device.  And it worked.  Please for the love of God, call her something other than a lady lest some of us think it's we who've been fucked by your story.
     
  9. Cameron McClure

    Cameron McClure 50:50 Supporter

    Maybe The [last] fuck of the century? otherwise I struggle to link title and content. C
     
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  10. Cheryl.Leverette

    Cheryl.Leverette Reading poetry, editing media

    Maybe think a little more about it?  It doesn't really matter to me how the title is interpreted but I do want to leave it open for now.  Thanks, C.
     
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  12. Jay Dougherty

    Jay Dougherty Well Worn Supporter Editor

    I feel like this would be a great part of a longer poem. Not sure the title does much for the piece itself, but it does tempt a click.

    Thanks for making me look up "colostrum."
     
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  13. Cheryl.Leverette

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    Yeah, I'm still thinking about what I want to do.  Tks!
     
  14. Tim J Brennan

    Tim J Brennan Well-Known Member

    1/9 of all words devoted to "fuck"....that's hard to do and still say something   ;)
     
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  15. Cheryl.Leverette

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    Hey that's a cool thought.  Tks, Tim!
     
  16. Anna Ruiz

    Anna Ruiz I have the same religion as that tree over there. Supporter

    Cheryl + fuck + something dripping = Featured Poem.

    How extraordinary.  

    p.s.  that was no lady next door.
     
  17. Douglas Goodwin

    Douglas Goodwin "We don't hate you. We don't even care."

  18. Cheryl.Leverette

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    I don't know!  You decide.
     
  19. James Stephen

    James Stephen Well-Known Member

    Crack me UP ! Cheryl you're such a bad bad girl  :kool:
     
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  20. Douglas Goodwin

    Douglas Goodwin "We don't hate you. We don't even care."

  21. Daniel J. Flore III

    Daniel J. Flore III Well-Known Member

    Great poem. I hope they put it on the front page.
     
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  22. Cheryl.Leverette

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    Well of course!  Thanks, James.
    I love Frank Sinatra's 'New York'.
    Tks, Dan.  Hope you're doing well.
     
  23. Michael O'Regan

    Michael O'Regan New Member

    wouldn't it work with "your having sexual intercourse with the woman next door"
    I know it knocks everything about, but the F word seems to be there for the sake of having it there.
     
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  25. Ton Romus

    Ton Romus Well-Known Member Supporter

    colostrum!

    :eek:OMG!

    Powerful. Tight.

    Lady = perhaps bitch?

    Agree with above -- the title confuses IMO.

    !Enjoyed*

    ~Ton
     
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  26. Cheryl.Leverette

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    Tks, Ton.  Yeah bitch is more appropriate.
     
  27. Anna Ruiz

    Anna Ruiz I have the same religion as that tree over there. Supporter

    Coward.

    Can't handle me, can you?

    Forgot the smiley face.  :)
     
  28. Tim J Brennan

    Tim J Brennan Well-Known Member

    Happens often here, Michael. You get used to it. ;)
     
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  29. Michael Ashley

    Michael Ashley Fuckwit Extraordinaire Editor

    To picks :)

    :dance2:
     
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  30. Douglas Goodwin

    Douglas Goodwin "We don't hate you. We don't even care."

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