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The Calendar
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May 05, 2012, 02:35:39 PM »
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William Antcliff
Days when I follow you,
“but” by “but”.
Days when you follow me,
tut by tut.
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May 05, 2012, 02:45:36 PM »
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Peter R
Quote from: William Antcliff on May 05, 2012, 02:35:39 PM
Days when I follow you,
“but” by “but”.
Days when you follow me,
tut by tut.
This is lovely, Will. Says so much in those few words, and delightfully too.
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May 05, 2012, 03:02:59 PM »
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Tom Riordan
What great little parades, Will! Very nice.
Puzzle by the buts in quotes and not the tuts.
Tom
Quote from: William Antcliff on May 05, 2012, 02:35:39 PM
Days when I follow you,
“but” by “but”.
Days when you follow me,
tut by tut.
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May 05, 2012, 03:07:03 PM »
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William Antcliff
Thanks Peter! Much+delightfully. I will take that,
.......with a little skip. Thank you again.
Will
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May 05, 2012, 03:11:26 PM »
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William Antcliff
Tom,
thanks...
I did not quote the tutting partly because it gives slight variation, but, more importantly...I am not sure the act of tutting is an act of using a word. I genuinely don't know. I wouldn't put waving in quotes..closer to that? Interesting.
I wonder what Peter thinks?
Will.
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May 05, 2012, 03:16:29 PM »
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Peter R
Yes:
tut
a sound,
but
a word
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May 05, 2012, 03:19:01 PM »
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Tom Riordan
ah.
can see the "tut" being accompanied by a finger side to side finger wag
can also see the "but" accompanied by a forward finger wag!
I agree though, will defer to Peter's best judgement.
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May 05, 2012, 03:20:37 PM »
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William Antcliff
Thanks Peter
Will
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May 05, 2012, 03:24:24 PM »
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William Antcliff
Tom,
Yes I can imagine the forward finger wag!
Still, I think the world does not need more quote marks, so...
"Parades". I liked that Tom.
Will
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May 05, 2012, 03:35:25 PM »
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Peter R
No problem, guys. Feel free to consult me on not only fine punctuational points but also, having been in the roofing trade, any queries about your cleats or overhang.
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May 05, 2012, 03:40:44 PM »
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Roger Fizzerton
Will,
Really nice! Works so well, content and form in perfect harmony.
Enjoyed, and one that will stick in the memory bank.
:)
Roger
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May 05, 2012, 03:45:22 PM »
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William Antcliff
Peter, do you know if there has ever been a poem about a roofer? I draw a complete blank on that.
Will
Quote from: Peter R on May 05, 2012, 03:35:25 PM
No problem, guys. Feel free to consult me on not only fine grammatical points but also, having been in the roofing trade, any queries about your cleats or overhang.
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May 05, 2012, 03:52:47 PM »
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Tom Riordan
http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/booksblog/2011/aug/19/edinburgh-book-festival-william-letford
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May 05, 2012, 03:56:11 PM »
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William Antcliff
Ah...yes Tom.
My sister - I now recall - mentioned something about him (her in laws being of Edinburgh). Thanks, I'll look into him.
Will
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May 05, 2012, 03:57:24 PM »
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Roger Fizzerton
Quote from: William Antcliff on May 05, 2012, 03:45:22 PM
Peter, do you know if there has ever been a poem about a roofer? I draw a complete blank on that.
Will
Have you seen my piece, 'DIY advice, taken from local paper', in submit you prose? I wonder if Peter could check it out for accuracy?
:)
Roger
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