Experiment where each poster replaces one of 17 words of this poem, so it keeps evolving by twinkling. Each poster cannot re-post until at least 4 other people have posted, and your word includes any punctuation mark following it.

Twinkle, Twinkle

word word word word word
word word word word word
word word word word word

Twinkle, Twinkle

word word fragile word word
word word word word word
word word word word word

Twinkle, Twinkle

word word fragile word word
word word word word word
word word word word quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

word bold fragile word word
word word word word word
word word word word quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word word word word
word word word word quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word arm word word
word word word word quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word arm word word
word word word souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word arm word word
word word tiny souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs word
word word arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs word
listen word arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen word arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

Let's see if we can pick up some momentum by revising the groundrule so that you can post a word change after 4 intervening posts or, let's say, at least 1 intervening post and 8 hours. (For 2 or more players!) ~Tom


Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm word worlds
told word tiny souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm free worlds
told word tiny souls quiver.

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[so, Tom, are you in charge round here? Good. What's the deal with the rules? Can we change others' words or only edit our own? Not sure this is gonna work without some changes . . . . .]

Well, Brian, I started the thing and am trying to get it off the ground. Start-up rule is that you can replace any one of the 17 words. What do you suggest about changing?

--carried forward from Brian's last post:

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm free worlds
told word tiny souls quiver.

LOL I say ditch the rules and we just play.
Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm free worlds
told when tiny souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm free worlds
told unsong tiny souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm free worlds
told unsong hard souls quiver.

I certainly don't mind if that's okay with most. Whatever kind of play is fun. ~Tom

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm free worlds
kill unsong hard souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm hungry worlds
kill unsong hard souls quiver.

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and tongue hungry worlds
kill unsong hard souls quiver.

Extinguished Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and tongue hungry worlds
kill unsong hard souls quiver.

Extinguished Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and tongue hungry worlds
where unsong hard souls quiver.

Extinguished Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls quiver.

Extinguished Twinkles

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls quiver.

LOL - I must have stared at that entry for 15 minutes before I noticed the change! Of course I had just gotten up and wasn't wearing my glasses and barely had half a cup of tea in me! Very cool.

Extinguished Twinkles

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls hurrah.

Extinguished Twinkles

under bold spider webs toads
listen and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls hurrah.

Extinguished Twinkles

under bold spider webs tilt
listen and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls hurrah.

Extinguished Twinkles

In bold spider webs tilt
listen and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls hurrah.

Extinguished Twinkles

In bold spider webs tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls hurrah.

Extinguished Twinkles

In hairy spider webs tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls hurrah.

Extinguished Twinkles

In hairy spider webs tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls cower.

Extinguished Hurrahs

In hairy spider webs tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls cower.

Extinguished Hurrahs

In hairy spider webs tilt
wings and tongue-hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls cower.

Extinguished Twinkles

False bold spider webs tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls hurrah.

False bold spider webs tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls twinkle.

Extinguished Twinkles

Cough bold spider webs tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls twinkle.

What a fantastic upheaval of a change that is, Lynn!

James

Extinguished Twinkles

Cough bold spider webs, tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls twinkle.

Extinguished Twinkles

Cough black spider webs, tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls twinkle.

Extinguished Twinkles

Cough black spider webs, tilt
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls choke.

Blame yourself, James!  I was wondering what to do and looked up a notch and saw Cough in your signature line and thought, Cool. 

Extinguished Twinkles

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls choke.

Ejaculated Twinkles

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard souls choke.

Ejaculated Twinkles

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard cocks choke.

(Sorry...)

you two! go to the naughty step...

Ejaculated Wrinkles

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and tongue hungry worlds
where unsung hard cocks choke.

I would, but I just can't.  [Although the company would be good on that naughty step.]

Come on Lynn;

you
know
you
want
to!

Why be?

Ejaculated Twinkles

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and hold hungry worlds
where unsung hard cocks choke.

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and hold hungry worlds
where unsung hard cocks choke.

Oh, I can't post, Michelle et al. Not yet. It's too good right now as it is. Time to pause, ask silent lotus to give a benediction. ~ Tom

;)

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and leash hungry worlds
where unsung hard cocks choke.

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and leash hungry worlds
to unsung hard cocks choke.

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and leash hungry worlds
to unsung hard cocks.

What's that about?  You dropped a word!  I'm tellin' -- Tom!  Tom!  She dropped a word! 

There's one in every poetry circle.

ha ha ha -- [read as deep, loud, belly laughs]
you meant "her" -- right?

He better mean me! I like being The One.

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and leash hungry ears
to unsung hard cocks.

whoa - now there's a picture. :)

You all deserve to be banned!





:)

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and leash hungry ears
to unsung hard vampire cocks.

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and leash hungry ears
to unsung soft vampire cocks.

I vant to...

Ejaculated Threads


Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and prick hungry ears
to unsung soft vampire cocks.

Yvonne, I'm rolling on the floor. Tom

Yvonne is my mom, Tom ;)
I'm Lavonne LOL.

You weren't supposed to tell, Lavonne. Just for that, you're grounded.

LOL!

Ejaculated Threads


Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and prick hungry ears
to unsung vampire cocks crow.

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and prick hungry ears
while unsung vampire cocks crow.

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and prick hungry ears
while Balinese vampire cocks crow.

You do all realize, this might never end. It will be passed down to the future generations of Poetry Circles, where Tom Riordan is considered lord of the Twinkleverse.

Hail be to thee Tom Twinkle,
who led the lewd from word to word,
who taught us how to fix and tinker,
who led us to the vampire cocks he heard!

May this epitaph be etched on your tomb, Tom.

James

Mike & James, the Twinkleverse thanks you. Now, where shall we go? T.

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings and prick hungry ears
while Balinese vampire cocks crow.

oh i like

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider webs, spit
wings of prick hungry ears
while Balinese vampire cocks crow.

Ejaculated Threads

Cough black spider tobacco spit
wings of prick hungry ears
while Balinese vampire cocks crow.