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Twinkle, Twinkle
« on: November 17, 2008, 12:09:36 AM » by Tom Riordan

Experiment where each poster replaces one of 17 words of this poem, so it keeps evolving by twinkling. Each poster cannot re-post until at least 4 other people have posted, and your word includes any punctuation mark following it.

Twinkle, Twinkle

word word word word word
word word word word word
word word word word word

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #1 on: November 17, 2008, 02:43:36 AM » by Dax

Twinkle, Twinkle

word word fragile word word
word word word word word
word word word word word

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2008, 02:55:28 AM » by brian_edwards

Twinkle, Twinkle

word word fragile word word
word word word word word
word word word word quiver.

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« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2008, 10:02:05 AM » by larry jordan

Twinkle, Twinkle

word bold fragile word word
word word word word word
word word word word quiver.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2008, 10:19:39 AM » by jamesthomashoward

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word word word word
word word word word quiver.

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« Reply #5 on: November 18, 2008, 04:00:25 PM » by Tom Riordan

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word arm word word
word word word word quiver.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #6 on: November 18, 2008, 06:08:54 PM » by Sue Lozynskyj

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word arm word word
word word word souls quiver.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #7 on: November 18, 2008, 06:31:21 PM » by Mike Barrett

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word arm word word
word word tiny souls quiver.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #8 on: November 18, 2008, 11:17:26 PM » by Yvonne Garcia

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile word word
word word arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #9 on: November 18, 2008, 11:21:46 PM » by MichelleBethCronk

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs word
word word arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

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« Reply #10 on: November 18, 2008, 11:28:44 PM » by Tom Riordan

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs word
listen word arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #11 on: November 19, 2008, 03:19:12 AM » by Sue Lozynskyj

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen word arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #12 on: November 19, 2008, 11:45:23 PM » by Tom Riordan

Let's see if we can pick up some momentum by revising the groundrule so that you can post a word change after 4 intervening posts or, let's say, at least 1 intervening post and 8 hours. (For 2 or more players!) ~Tom

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm word word
told word tiny souls quiver.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #13 on: November 20, 2008, 12:55:04 AM » by Lavonne Westbrooks

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm word worlds
told word tiny souls quiver.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle
« Reply #14 on: November 20, 2008, 12:58:34 AM » by brian_edwards

Twinkle, Twinkle

under bold fragile webs toads
listen and arm free worlds
told word tiny souls quiver.

[so, Tom, are you in charge round here? Good. What's the deal with the rules? Can we change others' words or only edit our own? Not sure this is gonna work without some changes . . . . .]

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