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  Re: Poppy Seeds Walnuts & Raisins
« Reply #360 on: October 16, 2010, 02:13:30 PM » by Dax







you're a marvel, Chasan
a consumate artist. Verily.
Thank you.


Dax




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« Reply #361 on: October 18, 2010, 10:56:47 PM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #362 on: October 21, 2010, 07:58:22 AM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #363 on: October 21, 2010, 10:41:13 AM » by Dax








bravo, bravo!

"even if you do gotta"
I miss you, too



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« Reply #364 on: October 23, 2010, 08:08:36 AM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #365 on: October 24, 2010, 08:46:42 AM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #366 on: October 24, 2010, 12:59:34 PM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #367 on: October 24, 2010, 10:35:57 PM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #368 on: October 25, 2010, 03:42:51 AM » by Dax







Thank you, Chasan

As a member of the maladjusted, can I say how pleased several of these latter posts made me feel. Quite different from some opportunists, sorry, other macabre professionals that tell the rest of the lost to hoppit elsewhere for their feast of macaroni.

I myself wander about such guilty aspects as which end of a dog is the business end, or what makes Shakespearian double-Dutch and blue cheese Danish, or how to spell Machiavellian without a smile on my face. But some folk have so many certainties about life don't they. I mean, is there a masterpiece left in the free world for them to crusade over any more, indeed— just think, no more Parisian crossroads for generations to come by the looks of it. To be sure, Gertrude.

Well, Chasan, as for me, I had to bring my priceless joy to your attention once more, just imagine. And you're not even an asset, nor agent of the Chinese government— don't tell me, free does not make you cheap either, right!

These lastest poems would be good in any book— really! (ps: Will that do? You can PM me when you get a minute free from the bathsalts, okay. I'm off out all day walking in the hills: Long Mynd Hike, with my cleaner 10/4)

Sincerely


Dax








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« Reply #369 on: October 25, 2010, 11:33:09 PM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #370 on: October 26, 2010, 02:29:03 AM » by Dax








brilliant madrigal, Chasan

  *  *  *

I've been studying, yes
studying
weather forecasts, really
Up.
Left. Right. Forward. Reverse.
Down.
etc., etc.
sum-feel-good lingo, a kind of snuff knock-off
so forget the coldblooded FB machismo
stick with lipgloss & chic as a tool, BBC
when things look downright dirty, repeat
over and over, this spot feels less cool
probably for the next few days or so

I'm trying to get, well
rather academic sounding, enough to be
someone in Publix at that weekend jamboree
one we have so much fun with, well, that someone
told me I need to do one big book a year, at least
this, then, would qualify me as a lifer with a Mach number
any deathrow candidate would envy, trade even
O I so want to wake from this makeweight existence
like watsitname Gregor Samsa, fit for aught on the web
but deep down, really, really down
I'm not that significant in any shape or form
— no one is, I guess

love you  



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  Re: Poppy Seeds Walnuts & Raisins
« Reply #371 on: October 26, 2010, 01:05:19 PM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Dax on October 26, 2010, 02:29:03 AM




brilliant madrigal, Chasan

  *  *  *

I've been studying, yes
studying
weather forecasts, really
Up.
Left. Right. Forward. Reverse.
Down.
etc., etc.
sum-feel-good lingo, a kind of snuff knock-off
so forget the coldblooded FB machismo
stick with lipgloss & chic as a tool, BBC
when things look downright dirty, repeat
over and over, this spot feels less cool
probably for the next few days or so

I'm trying to get, well
rather academic sounding, enough to be
someone in Publix at that weekend jamboree
one we have so much fun with, well, that someone
told me I need to do one big book a year, at least
this, then, would qualify me as a lifer with a Mach number
any deathrow candidate would envy, trade even
O I so want to wake from this makeweight existence
like watsitname Gregor Samsa, fit for aught on the web
but deep down, really, really down
I'm not that significant in any shape or form
— no one is, I guess

love you 



d




Re: Poppy Seeds Walnuts & Raisins
« Reply #368 on: October 25, 2010, 03:42:51 AM » by Dax

Thank you, Chasan

As a member of the maladjusted, can I say how pleased several of these latter posts made me feel. Quite different from some opportunists, sorry, other macabre professionals that tell the rest of the lost to hoppit elsewhere for their feast of macaroni.

I myself wander about such guilty aspects as which end of a dog is the business end, or what makes Shakespearian double-Dutch and blue cheese Danish, or how to spell Machiavellian without a smile on my face. But some folk have so many certainties about life don't they. I mean, is there a masterpiece left in the free world for them to crusade over any more, indeed— just think, no more Parisian crossroads for generations to come by the looks of it. To be sure, Gertrude.

Well, Chasan, as for me, I had to bring my priceless joy to your attention once more, just imagine. And you're not even an asset, nor agent of the Chinese government— don't tell me, free does not make you cheap either, right!

These lastest poems would be good in any book— really! (ps: Will that do? You can PM me when you get a minute free from the bathsalts, okay. I'm off out all day walking in the hills: Long Mynd Hike, with my cleaner 10/4)

Sincerely


Dax


dear Dax

i believe you should begin to bundle all your comments through out the circle
they would make a fantastic publication.

and i shall indeed email you
but today the sun is shining and i must celebrate along with the colors.

a warm smile
silent lotus

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« Reply #372 on: October 30, 2010, 08:31:58 AM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #373 on: November 02, 2010, 10:09:54 AM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #374 on: November 05, 2010, 10:32:52 AM » by silent lotus
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