PoetryCircle
Contemporary
Poetry
Forum
Welcome,
Guest
. Please
login
or
register
.
«
PoetryCircle
•
The Writing
•
Editors' picks
• Topic:
For A Friend Who Quit A Job Which Did Not Suit
»
Thread
Tools
Print
(Read 417 times) [
1
]
For A Friend Who Quit A Job Which Did Not Suit
«
on:
September 03, 2008, 09:57:37 PM »
by
Jonathan Bracker
Life is no Gauguin.
We are not found displayed near the mangroves,
Composed at tasks.
The sand the ruffled sea once hemmed
Is disarrayed. Somewhere around
Are the footprints of Margaret Mead.
The dogs slink out beyond the ornate frame.
It is a Mondrian. In cubicles
We fit at desks before our altared phones.
The secretaries bring in offerings
And we are beached
Unless we grab our coats,
Reach down our hats and canes
And shuffle out, Toulouse-Lautrecs,
Into Parisian streets of where we live.
Logged
Re: For A Friend Who Quit A Job Which Did Not Suit
«
Reply #1 on:
September 10, 2008, 06:58:01 PM »
by
Lynn Doiron
This needs another visit up front -- too good to just slip into the hinterlands without reviews! Pick worthy, I think, but will just send back up for the moment.
good 'un, jonathan.
lynn
Logged
My blogs:
http://lwww.lynndoiron.wordpress.com
for memoir/journal/poetry
Re: For A Friend Who Quit A Job Which Did Not Suit
«
Reply #2 on:
September 10, 2008, 07:04:29 PM »
by
Lavonne Westbrooks
I never saw this and I'm so sorry! This is a fine poem. I fell right into the first line and out into the Paris streets.
Logged
(Read 417 times) [
1
]
Jump to:
Please select a destination:
-----------------------------
The Writing
-----------------------------
=> Editors' picks
=> Submit your poetry
=> Submit your prose
=> Challenges
=> Journalese
=> Front page
===> Front page archive
===> Archive 2010
===> - Archive 2011
-----------------------------
The Community
-----------------------------
=> Introductions
=> Discussions
=> Off topic
=> Interviews
=> Sights and sounds
=> Notices
-----------------------------
The Site
-----------------------------
=> Editors
=> Questions
Member
Tools
Home
Help
Calendar
Members List
Statistics
Login
Register
Latest
News
Like us on
Facebook!
Site
Stats
191351
Posts
18135
Topics
1518
Members
Latest Member:
William F Dougherty
Support PoetryCircle
PoetryCircle | Powered by
SMF 1.1.15
.
© 2005,
Simple Machines
. All Rights Reserved.
Simplicity
design by
BlocWeb