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Re: Holding The Letter
« Reply #15 on: May 30, 2008, 05:46:15 AM » by milner place

This is so well picked and deservedly so. May I add how great it is to have someone from the great and ancient civilization of China with us on the forum.

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Re: Holding The Letter
« Reply #16 on: May 30, 2008, 01:25:50 PM » by EB

I love love

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Re: Holding The Letter
« Reply #17 on: May 31, 2008, 09:54:58 AM » by Vasile Baghiu

Powerful poetic effect, in just a few words.
Vasile

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Re: Holding The Letter
« Reply #18 on: June 01, 2008, 11:06:00 AM » by MichelleBethCronk

Excellent pick! How wonderful to see this here on the front page - a joy each read - xo M

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Re: Holding The Letter
« Reply #19 on: June 01, 2008, 04:24:58 PM » by joseph lofgren

Although I don't dig using "heart" twice in such a small poem, I like this one. Might I suggest "chest" as a replacement for one?

Best,
Joe

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Re: Holding The Letter
« Reply #20 on: June 04, 2008, 03:55:34 AM » by Brian Edwards

My chest beats faster?
Replace my chest?

Sorry Joe, I disagree. Using 'heart' twice and getting away with it adds to the poem's charm.
Enjoying reading this every day richard.

B.

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