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  "this edition"
« on: March 28, 2008, 11:27:16 PM » by Scott Douglas
"this edition of the Morning News"

"we love you and show the real world. 
your own life is illusion.
you are powerless.
we can show to what to aspire.
give us your anger and we
will tell you where to express.
you are powerless..........

next is Buffy with sports and weather  ........ " 

............ and that's The Sedition of the morning news.





"the sedition" ?




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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2008, 06:38:39 AM » by Dax

Hi Scott

Welcome — I can see you have good taste! Bueno


"bastard tongues
bastard lips, jargon
spoke by sailors and slaves

generations, turn-on
— to find out stuff
then, alas, get put-on

a hoax, is a hoax
 — is a hoax, or innate
Chomsky thread"


— DR


Don Ricardo is the author of “Falls From Pidgin Lofts — What They Mean.”
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2008, 08:49:16 AM » by Scott Douglas

:)

I like your poem and thanks for the welcome.

 
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #3 on: April 03, 2008, 09:52:19 PM » by Scott Douglas
I wrote the following in a boring meeting at work today.
It's great to write poetry in meetings.
Everybody thinks you are interested in what they are saying because you are frequently writing.
The trick is to look up once in a while and appear interested.



a Perfect day

As lost as
a gull in the fog,
fog in a cloud and
a cloud on a perfect day.
As despised as
sleet in a breeze,
a breeze in the wind and
wind on a perfect day.
As lonely as
a shadowed moon,
the moon at noon and
midnight on a perfect day.





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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #4 on: April 04, 2008, 07:55:08 AM » by Dax

            Indeed

in a boring meeting, I wrote
work today, at the following
 — write poetry, in meetings

    "it's great to look up"
the trick, Everybody thinks 
   is to appear interested                 

you are interested, because
they are saying, once in a while   
you are frequently writing —

        And in what?

                                        .  .  . 

a Perfect day

As lost as
a gull in the fog,
fog in a cloud and
a cloud on a perfect day.
As despised as
sleet in a breeze,
a breeze in the wind and
wind on a perfect day.
As lonely as
a shadowed moon,
the moon at noon and
midnight on a perfect day.


                                      .  .  . 



Memo To Scott

This has been a perfect day. The new surveillance CCTV has (as you did imply it would) proved to be a success — DR's wet-dream! He rang to say he would be back from Miami, Monday next.

His #1 concern is the question of copyright. He needs a feasibility ASAP, on the correlation of low-level b/s vs. strategic collective poems. It may be worth your time to find an exit strategy, plus a few kind words in prep. for collateral damage.

Also, I need you to sign, or at least initial, your future input — it has become an issue, on not so perfect days. Have a good weekend.


Entertainment Committee
Colonia Dignidad
Chile


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Hi Scott

As you can see, today is a good day. I love your work and company, most of all I understand. Words. Words are black nails — bury me standing. Bon dia, amigo!

— DR   
 
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #5 on: April 04, 2008, 04:44:59 PM » by Scott Douglas

            Indeed

in a boring meeting, I wrote
work today, at the following
 — write poetry, in meetings

    "it's great to look up"
the trick, Everybody thinks 
   is to appear interested                 

you are interested, because
they are saying, once in a while   
you are frequently writing —

        And in what?

                             

 


why I say not in such style.

very nice.



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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #6 on: April 04, 2008, 04:47:29 PM » by Scott Douglas
now what can we do with this ?

talking sport at length with the boys in the cafe only to avoid talking the important topics that we should but know nothing about.
a pretty girl sits close only to expose the married man's hypocrisy.


talking sport at length with the boys in the cafe only to avoid talking the important topics that we should but know nothing about.
a pretty girl sits close enough to expose Married Man's Hypocrisy.




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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2008, 06:58:52 AM » by Dax







now can
we 
do this
with

"Amaya Ballet"

What?


"talking sport at length with the boys in the cafe only to avoid talking the important topics that we should but know nothing about.
a pretty girl sits close only to expose the married man's hypocrisy"


Para Scott
                 sin el cual  .  .  .


Scott — sport took a hike when I first hit a lung shot with a Park Drive — a staple British smoke. That was back in the day, when a boy choked on his own disability and a farmer could call a frost a frost without a stutter.

Those five final words of yours — boy-o-boy. You can do this, Scott. Try, anyway. Think "Carmen" or at least the thrust of its performance — self-set somesuch of a place. What do you say from the pit of your soul about its fantasy dance — this rattle snake and the torment of a bull.

Meanwhile, I must bang the board with a wild lady from Brazil and some boys from Kansas City — catch you later, then  .  .  .

— DR
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« Reply #8 on: April 05, 2008, 12:35:49 PM » by Scott Douglas
Carman, Carman, who knows of such ?
sound thinks too much that is of another, I think.
the wake, in every second, offers pure sponge gold.
will the offer cease when it is held, will the offer stand ? 
all moments have scarcely become anew.
until I can know the dust beneath my feet,
I have no use of Carman.
   
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Carman, Carman, who knows of such ?
the wake, in every second, offers pure sponge gold.
will the offer cease when it is told,
will the offer stand ? 
all moments have scarcely become anew.
until I can know the dust beneath my feet,
I have no use of Carman.
   
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« Reply #9 on: April 05, 2008, 12:39:34 PM » by Scott Douglas
talking sport for two moments too much
hides the fear of nakedness.
men are always afraid of nakedness. 
a pretty girl sits close, exposing the
Married Man's thin veneer.




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« Reply #10 on: April 06, 2008, 05:28:37 PM » by Dax
Carman, Carman, who knows of such?
sound thinks too much that is of another, I think.
the wake, in every second, offers pure sponge gold.
will the offer cease when it is held, will the offer stand ? 
all moments have scarcely become anew.
until I can know the dust beneath my feet,
I have no use of Carman.

 
What a character this narrator must be
whose denial, denial, denial, I read
so disturbs me, still. I thirst
 — for Carmen
!garra!


Bravo, son
 — you're too modest, Scott
Smashing. Thank you
Good to have you here


Dax
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #11 on: April 06, 2008, 10:00:34 PM » by Scott Douglas
floating upon this cloud,
feeling no pain, surrounding
tumultuous humanity.
that part needs its lovers,
needs its poets.
needs the rain.


a pretty girl, to
the married man's bluff,
sits close.
life, too abundant
for one strike.



good fences make good neighbours
good neighbours return the football.





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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #12 on: April 07, 2008, 06:56:49 AM » by Dax
Down To Earth


We dare not say, too loud
the girl stood too close
or that guitarsonanta she held
had the toque, tourists love it
pellizco pimples and all — common
gitano — gypsies say, Jucal
for such a look

!Acais!

Her eyes, blackened, thousand year
nights, had it all. Her children
mother, sister, all stood near
with cold potatoes, ready to kill
— marelar, marelar, marelar
ready to run beyond the fields, where
rivers and fresh fires sang !Chalar!


— Dax
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #13 on: April 07, 2008, 07:14:07 AM » by milner place
Great.

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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #14 on: April 07, 2008, 01:14:11 PM » by Scott Douglas
somehow close, a pasture away,
the exotic, the madness swirled in Spanish,
knows her tango. 
the lie of fences and vegetation
comes to mind.
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #15 on: April 07, 2008, 01:53:50 PM » by Scott Douglas


Memo To Scott

This has been a perfect day. The new surveillance CCTV has (as you did imply it would) proved to be a success — DR's wet-dream! He rang to say he would be back from Miami, Monday next.

His #1 concern is the question of copyright. He needs a feasibility ASAP, on the correlation of low-level b/s vs. strategic collective poems. It may be worth your time to find an exit strategy, plus a few kind words in prep. for collateral damage.

Also, I need you to sign, or at least initial, your future input — it has become an issue, on not so perfect days. Have a good weekend.


Entertainment Committee
Colonia Dignidad
Chile


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dearest sir-vent

if the leg horse was not so encumbered with the whitewash of undone and undoable laundry, this fear would be consumed with intended banefulness.
in light of the heavy, upon my already depleted pen, I request meeting taken at your enticement.
the issue of who or whom, depending upon your level of enlightenment and education, shall carry the added mass.
- etched upon the whiteboard.

no rhyme intended
   

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« Reply #16 on: April 07, 2008, 04:18:33 PM » by Scott Douglas
floating upon this cloud,
feeling no pain, surrounding
tumultuous humanity.
that part needs its lovers,
needs its poets.
needs the rain.



the rain

mist invades every private inch,
enough so as to convince garment
to revoke its desire to cling -
and part - as memory does of
long ago.
slowly : tenderly.
in this way, the artist inhabits cloud,
using sparks of brilliance to startle inhabitants below -
jarring memories of greatness.
Earth needs its lovers,
its poets -
needs the rain.



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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #17 on: April 07, 2008, 04:27:01 PM » by Dax

Snap — beautiful, Scott

Here we must not say
— not a lot happened

There is an artist
 — among us, who
waxes, for fun
with paper roses


 Dax
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #18 on: April 07, 2008, 04:39:21 PM » by Scott Douglas

thank you for the rain.

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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #19 on: April 08, 2008, 11:56:46 PM » by Scott Douglas
the Solution

daily, early doves awake him, 
to examine the beauty of his still sleeping wife.
only his dreams contain such vision.
this is the moment, daily,
he remembers to make waking hours
- ones of peace.

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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #20 on: April 09, 2008, 10:46:20 PM » by Scott Douglas
the moth

the moth on the desk
lead the annual parade for Spring's arrival.
barely remembering, it awkwardly stumbled
through air. the summer breeze
was in its wind - in the effort
of its wings -
the sound of barbecue,
the smell of the pool.

why did I kill it ?
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #21 on: April 10, 2008, 05:12:57 AM » by Dax

               Night


We tried to sing, to survive
the dogs, once striven came biting
legs and arms, up and down — as God
saw fit — the sun shone.


— DR
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #22 on: April 10, 2008, 07:00:22 AM » by milner place
sol
y
sangre


asi es


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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #23 on: April 10, 2008, 06:53:41 PM » by Dax
I owe a debt of gratitude to Scott
 — for his gusto and glee. He makes
my life a brighter place.

I seldom show it, but for what it's worth
— a sincere thanks to you my friend.

It's fascinating how the same silence
shatters in quite different ways — you
have a fan, Scott.

Dax
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #24 on: April 10, 2008, 10:14:45 PM » by Scott Douglas
poetry - the language beyond word.
-thank you.
the puffy cloud surrounding  humanity.

poetry - as good as words can get
-thank you.
beyond the debate of storm clouds.


encouragement - soft
as mist from a thousand mile waterfall.




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« Reply #25 on: April 10, 2008, 11:26:39 PM » by Scott Douglas
12:45

the power cut around 12:45,
don't know why.
the clock awaits me -
tomorrow, tomorrow.
this day is for fantasy.
sensing the delay, the neon signals
his demand - then warning - flashing -flashing -
reminding - anger - confusion - worry -
embarrassment - flashing
-pleading - pleading - pleading.
Got him !
it's that moment when factory worker finds
pink obsolescence in the mail slot -
all that remains of his flashing is yesterday, 
tomorrow will again be for clocks -
but today....

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12:45
the power cut at 12:45,
don't know why.
the clock awaits -
tomorrow, tomorrow.
this day is fantasy.
sensing delay, the neon signals
demand - then warning - flashing - flashing -
reminding - anger - confusion - worry
- embarrassment - flashing
- pleading - pleading - pleading.
Got him !
it's that moment when factory worker finds
pink obsolescence in the mail slot -
all that remains of his world is yesterday,
tomorrow will again be for clocks -
...but today....

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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #26 on: April 11, 2008, 05:37:17 AM » by Dax

    caesura of pure awe


I'm what they call a memory keeper
I never got to bathe in yoghurt soap
or drink soy through a straw, but I did
they say, steal a chicken from a house
before — a long, long time before.


— DR 


Extract from: Bastard Gitanos, by Don Ricardo
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« Reply #27 on: April 11, 2008, 08:19:46 AM » by Scott Douglas
poem - as good as words can get.
words - order yours today.
terms available.

step write up.



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« Reply #28 on: April 11, 2008, 08:48:24 AM » by milner place
Pinche ladron, Don Ricardo! Sinverguenza!


Don G
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #29 on: April 11, 2008, 12:58:18 PM » by Scott Douglas
fully aware of the attractive quality of magnets,
the writer,
anyway,
proceeded.
words draw - ironically.
inked intent forms .
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« Reply #30 on: April 11, 2008, 04:49:37 PM » by Dax

 

          Senor Scott y Don Guillermo


A garnish of damnation in the gazette of friends
poets, pols, with the exception of one or two hacks
makes is worth a thousand smiles — not to mention
credible copy, for a garrulous toad like me, I take
no laurel, or lust after whores, just give me the nod
and by levy — I'm yours.

          — Don Ricardo Reyes-Dax
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« Reply #31 on: April 11, 2008, 08:07:02 PM » by Scott Douglas
the idea of "poet" seemed absurd
to this writer of short yet precise notes
and rebuttal of half truths. the one voted
most likely to misspell "aluminum".
speaking at times, mid sentence stalled - speakers block -
the audacity of polish on prose
- (his demons prodded.)
to one whom never kept a diary - never
felt to express in first person singular.
the prisoner imagined the chains to be silk
long enough to find letters forming words.
   
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« Reply #32 on: April 11, 2008, 09:33:45 PM » by Scott Douglas
she pours her heart with frightening
brilliance, staggering invention - free.
the tap is on - flooding.
But who has need of dry feet ?
well, here's my story. I've seen the thin ice.
I've taken the dangerous route seeking passion,
using patience.  poetry has warmed
my beloved's eyes -  my words draw silence.
not of invading emotion, the silence of
dawning confusion - my beloved's eyes - a sunrise
away and a culture deep.
how exotic.
where is the tap ?
who was the damned plummer that tightened  ?





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« Reply #33 on: April 12, 2008, 05:41:43 PM » by Scott Douglas
the manner in which to play a drum
since before man could speak 
- or even cook his kills
has been discussed, ad nauseam.
as in any hunt, you don't approach timidly
- there is enough instinct left in the drum to sense this.
you need to know "why" you are punching the skin
and there is no time for epiphany in mid-fight.
the drum is primal - wood, skin and steel.
elements devised in primordial Mind.
they gave with dignity and chase, 
pounding and fire.
the drum responds only to these virtues.


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the manner in which to play a drum
since before man could speak 
- or even cook his kills
has been discussed, ad nauseam.
as in any hunt, a timid approach is not advised
- there is enough instinct left in the drum to sense this.
you need to know "why" you are punching the skin
and there is no time for epiphany in mid-fight.
the drum is primal - wood, steel and skin.
elements devised in primordial Mind.
they gave with dignity and chase, 
pounding and fire.
the drum responds to these virtues - only.



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« Reply #34 on: April 13, 2008, 08:05:02 AM » by Dax
Hi Scott

Good job.

Eg of what to be on the lookout for:

the manner in which to play a drum
has been discussed, ad nauseam,
since before man could speak 
- or even cook his kills.

 Look:

the manner in which to play a drum
since before man could speak
 — or even cook his kills
has been discussed, ad nauseam

                         What flows in the English river is often splashed about for affect!

 — smashing, Scott.


Dax
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« Reply #35 on: April 13, 2008, 08:14:24 AM » by Scott Douglas
much friendlier.

- experimentation must be the idea.

I think I shall steal that toot-da-sweet.
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« Reply #36 on: April 13, 2008, 08:57:34 AM » by Dax

Yeah. Any time Scott. I mean if you want some input about your stuff just say the word — then take with a pinch in good faith. The eyes of the world are upon you — foes and copycat stealers, friends and readers, strangers, moms. Be yourself, true to form — quotes beware! The future. The past. Scott be on record — me, I drive a truck.

 — Tomas 
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« Reply #37 on: April 13, 2008, 11:05:38 AM » by Scott Douglas

Any input you are willing to give - is a gift.
- or anyone else.

SkaaDee(at)gmail.com

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« Reply #38 on: April 13, 2008, 10:52:52 PM » by Scott Douglas
sacred ground

entering slumber
is as treading sacred ground.
the air thickens and time slows.
the same air a Buddhist monk
might breath upon approaching a Master.
by day I see the well meaning father
in him. but by night - he is perfect.
at night, the bedside becomes
sacred ground.

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« Reply #39 on: April 14, 2008, 10:08:25 AM » by Dax
I feel the need to grab a shovel
or climb a mountain, or hear the song
on a wind with whiffs of tea — then
cut to size.

  Women of Darjelling   
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« Reply #40 on: April 15, 2008, 01:33:29 AM » by Scott Douglas

 Think "Carmen" or at least the thrust of its performance — self-set somesuch of a place. What do you say from the pit of your soul about its fantasy dance — this rattle snake and the torment of a bull.



Canadians have siphoned their passions
into more controllable things
like hockey and Springs.


[expressionism seems impolite and gauche.
we are impressionists, as in,
"here's my impression of an unarmed American with healthcare.".  ]
 
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« Reply #41 on: April 15, 2008, 09:57:02 AM » by Scott Douglas
of Carman, snakes and bulls

a clean, crisp guitar cutting chatter.
only-child's play day screams of delight.
the thrill of the fight - denied.
the unexpected rhyme.
Tom Waits moving among the words.
these are things that stir.

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« Reply #42 on: April 15, 2008, 10:11:31 AM » by milner place
Down in the forest
something stirred.
Was it a dame
or was it a bird?

State the alternative
preferred,
with reasons
for your choice.
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« Reply #43 on: April 15, 2008, 02:55:56 PM » by Scott Douglas
I've read the name. 
I think it's a play.
Is it about
Carmen McRae ?
I sense its passion
I think it's of love
but my heart was
listed above.


A room filled with chatter
is dissonant vibration.
a crisp guitar will
focus imaginations.

I wish the world
a youth like mine.
an only-child
deserves play time.

Ego and pride
reign our days.
The truly wise
walk the other way.

You know better than I
when the gods move the hand
an unexpected rhyme
is from another land.

Tom Waits is clever,
he twists a mean phrase.
he lives the life
others only portray.

I don't prefer -
I wouldn't know how
my flower grows
with dung from a cow.


My friends, plead your case
what need have I for her ?
when my life is richer than
nineteenth century fir.


(now we've done it,
I'm unprepared to stop
to spend the rest of day
spewing rhyming slop.)
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« Reply #44 on: April 15, 2008, 10:23:58 PM » by Scott Douglas
do you love your poems as I love mine ?
regardless of which stage of evolution they are in. 
regardless of how silly or confused.
 - love them unconditionally -
as parents love their children ?


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« Reply #45 on: April 15, 2008, 11:56:09 PM » by Scott Douglas
Yeah. Any time Scott. I mean if you want some input about your stuff just say the word — then take with a pinch in good faith.

How about I show you something I'm working on and we tear it apart.
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« Reply #46 on: April 16, 2008, 03:56:33 AM » by Dax

  — fill your chops, Scott
Though, I may sound hip
or just plain dumb, may we
rest in peace.

               Please take note: A#

  — I talk via my mouth
from the heart. Wellness.
If I go AWOL for several days
panic not, leave that to me.


Dax
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« Reply #47 on: April 16, 2008, 07:17:36 PM » by Scott Douglas
what can be done about this ?


surrender to mammon


What is it about chomping teeth that disturbs ?
at his partially bald head - I glance.
with eyes only, it need be heard. intense.
a ritual sacrifice of sustenance.
but is it ?
it could be something in need of address,
in myself - into reality, manifest.
these people often are.
do I despise the consumption of food ?
- but - the manner, unabashed and absolute,
in which he flosses teeth
between reading the journal and
feigning production, compels disdain.
his phone calls with feet up for all the world to see.
the cubical has become his home not a prison.
it must be this - he is the embodiment of my failure.
he is my surrender to mammon.



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« Reply #48 on: April 16, 2008, 08:27:07 PM » by Scott Douglas
or could start from scratch.

I had this idea while out for a walk with my son tonight.



I tried to tell my son that the river is talking
he already believes it is not
I had so much to learn from him.
where does the time go ?
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« Reply #49 on: April 17, 2008, 12:49:59 AM » by Scott Douglas
context.

poetry site alone
the ground of nine thousand
feet past - great !
three weeks gone, nobody home
mine the only play in town
as others look on.
eerie and inspiring.
running amok to regain activity.
something very strange -
happened
but for now it is a ghost town.



Upon a Ghost Forum


My poetry is in how I take
this forum, twisting and turning like
worms before dawn. if you look on you'll see me
spreading wings. ghosts, welcome to my town.

I'll need to be jailor, jury and judge.
the tired even now look with fear.
On a personal dare I've become Fred
Astaire on a highwire dancing around -
with the edgiest act in town.

I'm sure I'll be tagged a malcontent
running amok. the apparitions
in the mist will watch me rhyme f---
freedom seldom goes unabated for
long. the informed know
I'm taking this forum.

I'll wear a demon but dress a saint
and pose as the Pusher of Man.
I'll be planting wild flowers and
watering brown green ,
riding twisted bikes left here for Spring.
I may be a saviour
- but for now -
I'm taking this forum.
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« Reply #50 on: April 17, 2008, 04:15:33 AM » by Dax
this one needs some context.
I googled a poetry site and arrived at one
with 3000 users and 95000 posts.
great !
but in the last 3 weeks there has been
only two poems posted other than mine.
There is always about 3 users looking on.
A few people have responded to threads I have started.
Very eerie and inspiring.
I'm running amok trying to regain activity there.
I sense something very strange has happened
but for now it is a ghost town.



my poetry is in how
I take this forum,
twisting and turning,
duels at dawn.
spreading my wings -
welcome ghosts to my town.

I'm the mayor and jury, jailer and
judge - the condemned look on
and fear. I'm Fred Astaire
on a high wire, dancing around
- the loneliest act in town.

a malicious malcontent running amok
the ghosts beg me to rhyme the word fuck
but freedom can't go unabated for long
the well informed know I'm taking this forum.

I'm the devil - a demon - the pusher of Man
very few of us really understand.
I'm planting wildflowers and
watering the green. gathering
twisted bikes left here in Spring.
I could be a saviour - but for now -
I'm taking this forum.

 


Simply Because


to me this is everything
the elitist with their tones
of etiquette and polite
autos-da-fé is not—

Tango!

dance on, the cantina
swells dried pork and wine
I spot blood, come break
some dust soleá por bulerías


— DR
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« Reply #51 on: April 17, 2008, 04:17:25 PM » by Dax
what can be done about this ?


surrender to mammon


What is it about chomping teeth that disturbs ?
at his partially bald head - I glance.
with eyes only, it need be heard. intense.
a ritual sacrifice of sustenance.
but is it ?
it could be something in need of address,
in myself - into reality, manifest.
these people often are.
do I despise the consumption of food ?
- but - the manner, unabashed and absolute,
in which he flosses teeth
between reading the journal and
feigning production, compels disdain.
his phone calls with feet up for all the world to see.
the cubical has become his home not a prison.
it must be this - he is the embodiment of my failure.
he is my surrender to mammon.




 
What can be done with this?
 
Ask unto thee
 
Where is Abel, thy brother?
 
— I know not


Firstlings & The Fat Thereof 
[/size]

They stand in dirt and beg, go hungry, you see them for miles in rain — it's a ritual, for millions. At a glance, a light flickers. These people. Those people. But I am different. I must be insane. And they are not sunflowers .  .  .   
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #52 on: April 17, 2008, 09:15:31 PM » by Scott Douglas

you're a paella food fight.

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« Reply #53 on: April 18, 2008, 12:10:39 AM » by Scott Douglas


Firstlings & The Fat Thereof  [/b] [/center] [/size]

They stand in dirt and beg, go hungry, you see them for miles in rain — it's a ritual, for millions. At a glance, a light flickers. These people. Those people. But I am different. I must be insane. And they are not sunflowers .  .  .   




forever before me, the mirage.
the work of others - the show - to paste upon
the very ones that are to be robbed.   
lined in the rain so thieves can claim.
soldiers - soldiers - soldiers.
the sedition of the morning news.
 


 
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« Reply #54 on: April 18, 2008, 08:03:41 PM » by Scott Douglas
ever since Cain raised his hand
spirit weaves exotic sand
tipping quills of ancient plans -
blood inked with that of his brother.





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« Reply #55 on: April 19, 2008, 05:16:39 AM » by Dax








Sinner & Saint


We

Plunder

On

Parole

Via

Limitless

Time



— DR     




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« Reply #56 on: April 19, 2008, 06:01:36 AM » by milner place





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« Reply #57 on: April 19, 2008, 08:30:56 AM » by Scott Douglas
We
   we
      we
         wewe?weehehehe he he hehehehthee thee theesheshe she she
                                                   she  she she shesheshe?shebebe be be be
                                                                                                  be be bebebe free
                                                                                           

me ?
me
       

                                                                                   
                                       
                                 
                                             
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« Reply #58 on: April 19, 2008, 02:04:49 PM » by Dax





 
thankyou, newthingers.



Jesus Was a Gook
 — no one gives a shit

for:

Ron Ridenhour
Milgram Experiment
Pinkville, Victims

Us!



dr

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« Reply #59 on: April 19, 2008, 07:01:05 PM » by Scott Douglas
.


you you you youyouyouysyousyousyous us us us.





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« Reply #60 on: April 23, 2008, 04:42:26 AM » by Dax

Hi Scott

This is fun. Being on the same level as the pavement hurts. This is for boys in care like me.



Honest


Santa, tell me the truth
— cus no one else does

A Christian had it nailed
— none has since

I feel sick

Don't lie to me
— I'm not in the mood

I see!


— Ricardo Reyes-Dax
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« Reply #61 on: April 23, 2008, 08:15:40 AM » by Scott Douglas
fun is good


if you wanna dance,
you gotta wear pants.
don't take a chance
if you're gonna dance.




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« Reply #62 on: April 23, 2008, 04:02:59 PM » by Scott Douglas
expecting skies

I'm with the rain - the storm -
the violence freely born from
blood and nature.

darkness takes the day with
mother nature's violent rage
like robbers take a bank with bangs and warnings.

I hold expecting skies when
birth water darkly breaks
with breaths and countings.

I watch the infant rain in the
midst of birthing pain and
await the cries of clapping.

a birth is like a storm
with the husband waiting on
the goddess slaving.

the slap of sparking cloud
brings song and breath aloud
with scream pained thunder .

from the uproar taking place
the sun reveals his face to
the spellbound father.
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« Reply #63 on: April 23, 2008, 08:03:47 PM » by Dax
 Hi Scott


 I've often been along the Offa —  on business  :-X  of course. Thx for the Offer, slpendid. I'll be seeing you amigo —

DR
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #64 on: April 23, 2008, 09:08:56 PM » by Scott Douglas

your energy is my food
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« Reply #65 on: April 25, 2008, 12:06:28 AM » by Scott Douglas
whispers

Can the heart be found at the
cinema with breezes and buttered
air ? hope takes the nightly seats
with longings and a prayer.  
vision guides the writer's
scheme so magic spells
the actor's dream.
Are promises kept at the cinema
whispered on that screen ?
I think our pen moves the words
the screenwriters dream.
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« Reply #66 on: April 25, 2008, 05:23:47 AM » by Dax






E Cord


You make it sound so sad
 — tears on wood and fingernails

 — it's a minor thing, to understand
neither man, nor woman, but dark shadows


*
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  Re: "this edition"
« Reply #67 on: April 28, 2008, 10:18:08 PM » by Scott Douglas

excellent poem.

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« Reply #68 on: April 28, 2008, 10:18:36 PM » by Scott Douglas
in the wind


Green and gold hold sway
beneath the red, white and blue in this
black and white world.

in the sky and on workers' backs
there will be stars and stripes forever.

what's up the pole is on the ground.
what's on the ground is busy minds.
what's on those minds is green and gold.

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« Reply #69 on: April 29, 2008, 04:17:32 AM » by Dax
Hi Scott

 y tu, caio




Holy See


I was force-fed on encyclical pie
filled with papal pulp, they were round
and always aimed at me, the only stray
it seems, in the flock — one with a rather
thick crust, stuck out — that spoke
of subsidiarity. It was during the Cold War
when a union of two Poles set a world free


*  



— DR



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« Reply #70 on: May 02, 2008, 01:52:02 AM » by Scott Douglas
Women hold all the cards,
but one and
play all the other jokers
just to fill their straight,
inside of course.

Everyone is waiting to see what
you are going to do and want to be
a part of the play.
This is man.

All the world is a stage -
coach
with a bar car.
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« Reply #71 on: May 02, 2008, 04:21:43 AM » by Dax






Hi Scott


NB: We now enter a deep dark cave. I hear the distant voice of G

The Maker, at Creation's birth,
With living things had stocked the earth.
From elephants to bats and snails,
They all were good, for all were males.
But when the Devil came and saw
He said: "By Thine eternal law
Of growth, maturity, decay,
These all must quickly pass away
And leave untenanted the earth
Unless Thou dost establish birth" --
Then tucked his head beneath his wing
To laugh -- he had no sleeve -- the thing
With deviltry did so accord,
That he'd suggested to the Lord.
The Master pondered this advice,
Then shook and threw the fateful dice
Wherewith all matters here below
Are ordered, and observed the throw;
Then bent His head in awful state,
Confirming the decree of Fate.
From every part of earth anew
The conscious dust consenting flew,
While rivers from their courses rolled
To make it plastic for the mould.
Enough collected (but no more,
For niggard Nature hoards her store)
He kneaded it to flexible clay,
While Nick unseen threw some away.
And then the various forms He cast,
Gross organs first and finer last;
No one at once evolved, but all
By even touches grew and small
Degrees advanced, till, shade by shade,
To match all living things He'd made
Females, complete in all their parts
Except (His clay gave out) the hearts.
"No matter," Satan cried; "with speed
I'll fetch the very hearts they need" --
So flew away and soon brought back
The number needed, in a sack.
That night earth range with sounds of strife --
Ten million males each had a wife;
That night sweet Peace her pinions spread
O'er Hell -- ten million devils dead!


G.J.



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« Reply #72 on: May 02, 2008, 07:03:05 AM » by Dax
Women hold all the cards,
but one and
play all the other jokers
just to fill their straight,
inside of course.

Everyone is waiting to see what
you are going to do and want to be
a part of the play.
This is man.

All the world is a stage -
coach
with a bar car.



Noise


the bazaar surrounds are razor wire
the deck is loaded too, a fat man
in a sailor suite, has a gun inside his shoe
"make me an offer," his girlfriend asks
she knows he can't refuse — a nowhere
man, "the bum has nothing to loose"
Irvin Ehrenpreis, got a big surprise
from Texas, a ten gallon style with gold
to a pair of fives, then shots rang out
and Irvin fell to rock'n'roll, ruin where
his head used to be— so fortune telling
ain't much fun to a downtown girl, or we
tv and horny men under, say, five-feet-three


 — LA
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« Reply #73 on: May 02, 2008, 08:45:39 AM » by Scott Douglas
With blurry eyes
within Plato's cave
I raise
my sight to Sol
and wave
while looking beyond
the valley of the shadow of death.



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« Reply #74 on: May 02, 2008, 12:20:19 PM » by Dax






notes to cavemen:
the only sound left



oil and rag, worthless smiles
gospel, accordion too, down rivers
of a million deeds, undone, I can't
lie forever, got so few alibis —

pharisee, pharisee, phoney pharisee
if you prize peace, you got to fight a war

how does it feel to be slaves of the gun
to be at one, with so many braves
with so many gone, in so many graves —

till there's only one
not even me




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« Reply #75 on: May 02, 2008, 12:46:46 PM » by Scott Douglas

beautiful.

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« Reply #76 on: May 02, 2008, 12:48:40 PM » by Scott Douglas
the New Rage


I must assuage
my rage
in this nihilistic age
where rage is all the rage
... with reason.

Some thoughts have come of age
on this wicked world stage
which may soon engage
... us.

If a soldier shuns his wage
and refuses to engage
I see him as a sage
... and a hero.

I believe it is most sage
to expose then turn the page
with no need to cage our
... sons and daughters.

Peace is the New Rage.
Get used to it.
Engage.
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« Reply #77 on: May 02, 2008, 02:38:26 PM » by Dax
!Y tu, Scott. Bien! My pleasure.






More Than Loss and Gain 


tumbled down dumpty, shatters of rain
you said words that mean nothing, empty clouds rolled by
the heart under my window, fell in tiny pieces of pain

you want me back and perhaps horses will sing

no measure of love made me mad or the situation insane
so there's no chance, ever, or joke to be spun     
to put head before reason and go through this hell again

sorry for the hurt — it's done


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« Reply #78 on: May 03, 2008, 05:28:39 AM » by Dax






jugalbandi


the advice other than
"being me - ways to deceive"
is never crystal, to be honest
the tango is as close as you get
so close, in fact, I believe slaves
call it 'coro-pregón'; no not one
it takes two; unison, or emotional
truth of key players, me and you
call and response, time in sounds
a glance, the motion, tidal waves
fingers that love those curves, legs
angles, extremes — free-fall flamenco

!baile!
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« Reply #79 on: May 03, 2008, 11:22:30 AM » by Scott Douglas
it's a great way to be.
you go to do something but never arrive at destination
or even remember what it is you were looking for.
I was fetching a microphone cord when I couldn't resist the drum set on the way.
ah yes -
this seat holds me with the pride of a father
bringing home the kill to his excited tom tom sons.
as I peer at the drums they seem to remind me of the life we've shared.
of the exciting ways to use the molecules we've been given from birth
- what can be done with them -  and
we needed each other because
a drum can't play itself.

as I began reintroducing myself to each of the drums and cymbals,
even the cowbell, they started shaking me the Latin way.
the hot, low cut, swirling, short skirt streets of
San Paolo  in the afternoon - that's where I was.
at least in my mind -
at least ?
I'm not sure if I would enjoy those streets anymore than I was already
except for the unpredictable new
that can change the permanent brew
of memory.

after I had eaten my fill of that dripping Samba stew
I wanted to strut my heightened 'yea yea' on
the streets of New York at night.
although there's always light.
The sophisticated sway of the swing beat
with the in your face - why can't I - snare counterpoint
presented itself.
it's Birdland all over again.
I'm playing for all the boys who offered this up.     
You'll never die - I remember.
it's a great way to be.

now where was that cord ?


********************************   

it's a great way to be.

the way across the room seems a mile. 
You don't arrive at the destination or even remember
what it is you were looking for.
I was fetching a microphone cord when
I couldn't resist the drum set on the way.
ah yes -
this seat holds me with the pride of a father
bringing home a playmate for
his excited tom tom sons. 
as I peer at the drums they seem to remind me of the life we've shared -
what their sound meant to me at specific points in my life.
- exciting ways to use the molecules
 we've been given - what can be done with them  -
 and we needed each other because
a drum can't play itself.

as I began reacquainting to each drum and cymbal,
even the cowbell, they started moving me
the Latin way.
the hot, low cut, swirling, short skirt streets of
San Paolo  in the afternoon - that's where I was.
at least in my mind -
at least ?
I'm not sure if I would enjoy those streets anymore than I already was
except for the unpredictable new
that can change the permanent brew
of memory.

after I had eaten my fill of that dripping Samba stew
I wanted to strut my heightened  'yea yea' on
the streets of New York at night.
although there's always light.
The sophisticated sway of the swing beat
with the in your face  - why can't I snare
overcame me.
it's Birdland. 
I'm playing for all the boys who offered this up.     
You'll never die - I remember.
it's a great way to be.

now where was that cord ?
 


 

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« Reply #80 on: May 03, 2008, 12:38:06 PM » by Dax










that little
yaha-ahee, andréa
close, very close
only you, you know how
stuck to my thumb, sting
it begins, then swells, hooded 
unashamed — black cobra crawls
for the kill —  triumph of trumpets
red, gold, strips of blue glass, darkness
 — till dawn


baby that's jazz    



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« Reply #81 on: May 03, 2008, 12:57:09 PM » by joseph lofgren




More Than Loss and Gain 


This one has a great resonance with me. Wish I had the guts to print it out and use it.

Best,
Joe

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« Reply #82 on: May 03, 2008, 01:05:22 PM » by Dax


  fill your boots, Joe — honest! My treat.
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« Reply #83 on: May 04, 2008, 06:35:34 AM » by Dax







Save Planet Earth


leave the litter alone
look if you will
at the clichéd limbs
in small dresses
that heel on love
and fear and bills
don't tell us how to speak
or where to go, while you
hide behind high fences
then nurture stone

omen


 — DR
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« Reply #84 on: May 05, 2008, 02:41:28 PM » by Scott Douglas
you're a mystery tingled with lime
spraying jazz across the page
as a battle in some quasar
known only to a mind
aware.
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« Reply #85 on: May 05, 2008, 03:07:06 PM » by Dax







Hi Scott

This is good clean
slash-n-burn
imprimatur fun.

I'm glad someone
other than ourselves
reads "this edition"
stuff.

I admit
to being a little
upside-down of late
must need a tiswin drop
— a pound of flesh —

I laugh twicely.

later dude
must get my head
round

an
august remate
— of nylon & wire —


Dax
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« Reply #86 on: May 05, 2008, 07:34:39 PM » by Scott Douglas
oh, I'm not much of a poet
but I've got ideas.
crazy, nutty ideas.
crazy, nutty, magical ideas.
heavy, flashy, profound, taxing ideas.
silly, twisted, crazy, wild and nutty ideas.
I'm not much of a poet
but I've got ideas ...

... and a pen.
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« Reply #87 on: May 06, 2008, 03:36:55 AM » by Dax






Tinker's Pie-Patch


take a line, cast on the fly
see it gliss and hare swish by
— makes no sense of this, morning
mist from another county — my
lucky me, to be apart of such

curls of cheese and cherry-rich
bird dot about, that remind me not
of ink-jets and chores, or even
the homespun yarns of trout
not yet won


*



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« Reply #88 on: May 06, 2008, 04:09:58 AM » by Dax
oh, I'm not much of a poet
but I've got ideas.
crazy, nutty ideas.
crazy, nutty, magical ideas.
heavy, flashy, profound, taxing ideas.
silly, twisted, crazy, wild and nutty ideas.
I'm not much of a poet
but I've got ideas ...

... and a pen.




Hi Scott


I love the roundness of this major key
the fingers beholden to a merciless mind
strung by its profound totems, when in all
the trigger has emptied, they become sausages
— delicious instruments of poetry


rodrigo



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« Reply #89 on: May 06, 2008, 10:57:19 PM » by Scott Douglas
Chaos

Into a room I'm pushed -
filled with talk pollution and
music pain, enough to scatter a sieving brain.
Pervasive faces and peacock dresses
shuttled me among grinning suits of leisure
as a bead would tumble through a kaleidoscope
seeking form. 
I pour them the attention they seem to crave
to satisfy their lascivious thirsts.
I have no choice.
This cocktail carousel  is hypnotic
and I'm drinking Alzheimer and stares.
The ritual seems to time loop
and someone walled the door and
the pervasive faces want to know
me more and more.

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« Reply #90 on: May 07, 2008, 03:57:39 AM » by Dax






Notes To Myself


I thought the roses perfect
they arrived, still, perfect
in every way, a blessing —
I miss a garden, mornings
spent, upended in arrogance
of life a thousand miles high

*

I was introduced to a girl
whose birthday party
her mother said, could be
her last — to a be God
one has to be empty

*

next month, my guitar arrives
from Spain, a year is an age
to wait — a life form

it wants sun

the blood of Andaluz will run
— this butcher needs a bull
O
we shall not lie idle
for shade


*



dr
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« Reply #91 on: May 07, 2008, 02:23:55 PM » by Scott Douglas





Notes To Myself


next month, my guitar arrives
from Spain, a year is an age
to wait — a life form

it wants sun

the blood of Andaluz will run
— this butcher needs a bull
O
we shall not lie idle
for shade


*



dr


cherish the lumber which gave its life
to be held by a higher love.
still in shock, the army
boots and chainsaw buzz
gave way to your warm hand. 
 
 
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« Reply #92 on: May 07, 2008, 03:07:30 PM » by Scott Douglas
To SLM


Your honey yin sweetens my coffee
like a prom promise on a school night.
I've noticed that the grass is only as green
as the fence is high.
So, it is with new eyes,
daily,
that I will see -
and see only
you.
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« Reply #93 on: May 08, 2008, 09:49:19 AM » by Dax






Eskimo Dan's Last Poke


from the caves of my nose
the last southern wind, sad to be
a headstone in Nome, with nuggets all gone
from a well-oiled pan, now this grave
is wot remains, of that steamship
bone-broke stampede, the devil
ruin of a man

1868-1902

R.I.P



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« Reply #94 on: May 09, 2008, 07:31:19 AM » by Dax








Hate Hand Me Downs


belly fat, you said
was the sign on a pool
of triple-ex idiots
fed by truck

— at pig-outs

they speak, you said
of sick kids, the chic
anywho, chiselers that care
who-fucks-who

— at pig-outs

that's über cool, you said
for others, blacks and fools

but for the likes of us
die-hard standards
that break all rules, is tight
and just as cheap, you said

s-o-s
— for a change, let's eat in
by candle



dr


homenaje al niño ricardo
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« Reply #95 on: May 10, 2008, 04:30:16 AM » by Dax






Hi Scott


You had me fret
Owl and the Pussy
must sing, to odd
sounds of a small
guitar
You are
You are
What a beautyiful
Pussy you are!


Right

Rocket Man Lyrics
find, listen
speak to me


And I think  .  .  .



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« Reply #96 on: May 10, 2008, 05:53:01 AM » by Dax





Houston We Have A Problem


As I lay here all alone
left to wonder, then
what's gone wrong, feeling sorry — 
b-a-b-y why don't you come home
It's gonna be a long long time
till you're in my arms again —

loving is a fools game, b-a-b-y
tell me when, you're coming back
home, I don't understand you're
gone, just say the word, tell me why
things must be like this, b-a-b-y
It's been a long long time, too long

I want you here by my side, else
you're not the man and this heart
ain't no wonderland, let's say sorry
for all those things unheard, b-a-b-y 
It's been a long long time
alone b-a-b-y, no no no



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« Reply #97 on: May 10, 2008, 09:39:51 AM » by Scott Douglas









that little
yaha-ahee, andréa
close, very close
only you, you know how
stuck to my thumb, sting
it begins, then swells, hooded 
unashamed — black cobra crawls
for the kill —  triumph of trumpets
red, gold, strips of blue glass, darkness
 — till dawn


baby that's jazz    






from the amazing sparkle that has been conjured
by you,
this is the rarest gem within the chest.
it's doesn't sound as a trumpet,
it is a trumpet,
moving and polished. 
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« Reply #98 on: May 10, 2008, 12:09:11 PM » by Scott Douglas
If you need someone to come down
and tell you there is a God -
then there isn't a God.
it doesn't really matter anyway,
I'm pretty sure He's forgotten about the Milky Way.
I mean, He's got so many.   
But He did leave a least one clue
and I'm sitting in it,
beathing in it.
look around
look down.
Tell me where you do not see God.
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« Reply #99 on: May 10, 2008, 12:45:59 PM » by Scott Douglas

Look at me.
I'm a musician convinced to become a techy who
is really a philosopher trying to be a poet.

Now I ask you,
is not Earth the land of opportunity.
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« Reply #100 on: May 10, 2008, 05:55:49 PM » by Dax
Look at me.
I'm a musician convinced to become a techy who
is really a philosopher trying to be a poet.

Now I ask you,
is not Earth the land of opportunity.




Hi Scott


I've took to writing in Courier New
size-14-shoe, only my sight is not
even, without welders and milk bottle
it's a modest fall these days

am I not a whore

also

I was born with no concept of theft
nor was any of my kin, many tried
to learn of course, fat chance
since many jails and mass-graves
help foster the universal need for
the segregation of chicken farms
and denial of basic rights human
for gitanos, but not for guard-dogs
and pigs — we dance and sing, still

earth mother
has all the property
she needs
no guns

I own nothing
but
chair a share

now
I ask
how
wrong
is that

me, I love
whenever
it's that simple


dr 




I've just got in
from Miami, my maestro
did well, we smoked
long black cigarettes
on a ballcony
and spoke of women


*
 
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« Reply #101 on: May 11, 2008, 04:44:52 AM » by Dax





Board of Corrections
Oxford



If
voices carry
the
curious
trace
of
birthplace
virtues
and
vices
the
way we read
and
find flaws
with
who is right, who is wrong
I
imagine
then
inner and outer
to be
over
either, or
aside
aspects of denial and sex
is
me at all

*

Discuss



NB: This is a test 3 hour paper for those inmates that have chosen
 to pile higher and deeper than other prisoners.


Sponsored by Lifetime of Hope & The Joseph Brodsky Foundation for Boys
   




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« Reply #102 on: May 11, 2008, 10:24:23 AM » by Dax






door ajar, inside
hidden blushes, blossoms
 — lessen suspicions





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« Reply #103 on: May 11, 2008, 01:19:56 PM » by Scott Douglas
the smile of a mask hides
the mask of a smile
on a face confused.
be careful
the faces may be mirrors.
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« Reply #104 on: May 11, 2008, 10:05:14 PM » by Scott Douglas
boom and pop

I get like this with the beating of a drum.
Take that ties that bind !
this fire burns
rope.
thank you Taiko.
thank you god of sizzle.

the work of the stick is not downward -
attempting to return to Earthly systems
where the worm and compost scrounge -
the focus is upwards
flowing from wand
to sky.

the boom and pop is not a show,
it is real -
as real as anything loved.       

the Taiko master knows
she is not to accept praise
- it is the sizzle.

I will not praise
I will not worship
I will not even clap.

Instead, I will throw
myself into the stream
and hope it takes me.
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« Reply #105 on: May 11, 2008, 10:23:11 PM » by Scott Douglas
fun is good


if you wanna dance,
you gotta wear pants.
don't take a chance
if you're gonna dance.




.



a child's life is all methane gas and candy.

if you're gonna skip
make sure you strip
you don't want to trip
if your gonna skip.
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« Reply #106 on: May 12, 2008, 05:11:36 AM » by Dax





door ajar, inside
hidden blushes, blossoms
 — lessen suspicions





dr




duende


When I was
small
a jar of wire
taut cross glass
we sang and twang
my thumb "alzapua"
down sprang up, hearts
could race, I never knew
what tiny sounds would do
no metronome, trebles let's
make it nine, then twelve's
then my, a beat so strong
tri-tri-tri-tri, repeat six
times beneath harvest moon
the joy it brings, just then you
spoke the words, it all can true

guitarra

¡baile!

guitarra

jondo

pulgar

¡Olé!



dr


it's a jungle out there
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« Reply #107 on: May 12, 2008, 05:22:32 PM » by Dax


Hi Scott

Cast your eyes on this, only a stone throw from Andaluz (Spain), now what a great time you could have doing both — hope you don't mind, but file this away in your head. Just in case you lose the house, missus and kids, or walk out one day for a breath of air. Like me, I got on a push-bike (cycle) one day and ended up in the mountains half way round the world. Then another time, I ran a 100 miles in six days in Sikkim, to the backdrop of the five highest peaks on the planet — God made me an omelette on the top of Everest.

 

New York Times

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

May 11, 2008

Music Issue | Rockin' the Casbah
Rockin’ the Casbah

By STEVE DOUGHERTY


FROM his perch on a rooftop terrace near the crenelated western ramparts of the walled city, a visitor from England watched the sun set in spectacular display over the Atlantic Ocean. As it disappeared on the cloudless horizon, the sun’s rays cast a golden glow on a rising crescent moon decorated on the eve of the summer solstice by a silvery alignment of planets and stars.

“Nice touch, that,” quipped Bill Corbett, a 39-year-old London photographer, D.J. and music fanatic whose visit to Essaouira, an exotic, wind- and sun-swept Moroccan city on the northwest coast of Africa, for the 10th-annual Gnawa and World Music Festival, would prove a transforming experience. “This really is a midsummer night’s dream.”

And one with an exhilarating soundtrack — courtesy of 25 Moroccan Gnawa musical brotherhoods, whose exuberant, hypnotically rhythmic and joy-infused music drew an estimated 400,000 fans from Morocco and across North Africa, Europe and North America to Essaouira (pronounced ess-ah-WEER-ah) last June for the five-day festival. Midsummer revelers heard more than 30 other jazz fusion, rock, reggae, African, Brazilian, Afro-Cuban and hip-hop acts from more than a dozen countries — as well as Hoba Hoba Spirit, a crowd-wowing multilingual “Moroc ’n roll!” band from Casablanca — performing on nine festival stages scattered in and around Essaouira’s walled, maze-like medina.

Unlike festivals staged, à la Woodstock, in muddy, middle-of-nowhere pastures, or worse, in vast, overheated football stadiums, the Gnawa’s setting, in a small, friendly and almost impossibly picturesque, wind-cooled seaside city, is as magical and mesmerizing as the music.

“I thought about going to Glastonbury,” Mr. Corbett said of the popular rock festival outside London that was being muddied by cold, drenching rains as he spoke. A sharp-featured, good-humored fellow, my new-found friend was ensconced on the roof terrace at Taros, a watering hole popular among tourists and expatriates, as well as a surprising number of Moroccans who felt unconstrained by Islam’s admonitions against alcohol. “Why see a bunch of boring new rock bands when you can see amazing ancient ones?” he said.

He made a sweeping gesture that took in the stars, the moon, the walls of the ramparts silhouetted against the sky and the gleaming superstructure of the main festival stage below on the Place Moulay Hassan, Essaouira’s central square. “And in a setting like this?”

We were both still buzzing after catching an 11 p.m. concert by a Gnawa group led by the maalem (master musician) Abdenbi El Gadari, on a small festival stage in the Marché aux Grains (Grain Market), a square enclosed by colonnaded arches where, until little more than 100 years ago, slaves were bought and sold at auction.

A descendant, like almost all Gnawa musicians, of black African slaves who for centuries were brought across the Sahara to serve the sultans, pashas and wealthy families of Morocco, Mr. Gadari sat on a floor cushion at the center of a stage covered with lush, colorfully patterned Moroccan carpets. Arrayed around him were more than a dozen members of his musical brotherhood: drummers, steel castanet players, dancers and singers who wore ankle-length white satin robes and tasseled fezzes beaded with white seashells.

With the commanding presence of the American Delta bluesmen with whom he shares musical roots and mojo, the maalem thrummed and plucked bluesy figures on his guimbri — a three-string lute, much like a bass guitar — and sang a gospely call and response in a rich baritone.

The music built slowly to an exhilarating crescendo of intricate rhythms and cross rhythms created by propulsive beating on hand-held drums and large, tambourinelike bendirs, staccato hand claps and the incessant, syncopated clack and clatter of the steel castanets. As the spirit moved them, musicians put down their instruments and stepped to the front of the stage to dance, displaying footwork and moves that resembled those of their African-American cousins, from the Temptations’ stylized line steps and James Brown’s knee drops to hip-hop’s exaggerated lopping turns, as well as whirls, leaps, back flips and hussar-like two-legged kicks that defied choreographic categorization, not to mention gravity.

Like all Gnawa brotherhoods, Mr. Gadari’s group performed music that for centuries was played only in secret spirit-possession and healing ceremonies called lilas that have evolved from ancient African animistic and Islamic Sufi rituals. The brotherhoods continue to perform in such religious rites — though only in strictly private gatherings — in which conjured healing spirits are said “to mount” the possessed, who whirl and writhe in ecstatic trance, during which they often cut or flail themselves with ceremonial daggers or iron batons.

“To me, these spectacles are filled with great beauty,” Paul Bowles, the expatriate American composer and writer who spent much of his life in Morocco, wrote of often bloody ceremonies that most Westerners would find gruesome to behold, “because their obvious purpose is to prove the power of the spirit over the flesh.”


“YOU’RE American?” the unsmiling young Moroccan manning a closet-size shop in the Spices Souk demanded. I balked, wondering if it would be wise to say I was Canadian, as advised in a post on a travel blog by a countryman concerned, as I was, about anti-American sentiment stirred by the war in Iraq, 3,000 miles east.

Though not an Arab country, Morocco is a Muslim nation with a diverse population and a long history of tolerance and openness to the West. It is a monarchy, and its present king, the 44-year-old Mohammed VI, has liberalized many of his long-ruling father’s more repressive policies. A far less severe form of Islam is practiced there than in more conservative and puritanical Muslim countries, where an event like the Gnawa Festival — with music fans, foreigners and Moroccans alike, dancing and singing in the streets and where women wear whatever they want — would be unheard of, if not illegal.

But there were bombings in Casablanca in 2003 and 2007, and the State Department’s warning in its information about traveling to Morocco that “the potential for terrorist violence against American interests and citizens remains high” gave me pause.

But my anxieties evaporated as soon as I arrived in Marrakesh, where the cab ride from the airport to my hotel in the center of the red-hued medieval city was a senses-jolting experience. Minicabs and motorbikes sped through ancient streets filled with horse-drawn carts, donkeys laden with bulging sacks and pedestrians dressed as though they’d been plucked from the streets of Jerusalem at the time of Jesus.

The next day, after a two-and-a-half-hour cab drive west through forbidding desert landscapes where funnel clouds of brown dust rose in the distance and a goatherd sought refuge from the blistering sun in the nearly nonexistent shade of a lone and scrawny tree, I arrived in Essaouira. Its sprawl of white homes and apartment buildings was spread along low hills overlooking a broad, blue bay and the tall, sand-colored walls that enclosed the medina, the heart of the old city.

“You will love Essaouira,” a young Moroccan woman who is studying architecture in Florida assured me before I left. “It’s magical.”

I understood what she meant after a single afternoon and evening walking around the medina, with its dramatic, castlelike battlements where ramparts bristle with cannons pointing out to sea, its dark, serpentine alleyways, hidden courtyards, graceful archways and sunny, colonnaded squares and its souks selling spices, oils, aphrodisiacs and the makings of potions said to cast spells.

At first glance a bewildering maze of circuitous, tunnel-like side streets, the medina, commissioned by an 18th-century sultan and designed, by a French architect, Theodore Cornut, with two wide boulevards as central axes and thoroughfares linking three main gates, soon proved easily navigable.

From the humanlike cries of gulls reeling in the cloudless skies and the cooling Atlantic trade winds whistling through the streets and rustling the crowns of the ancient palms, to the staccato chatter of street musicians’ steel castanets and the muezzin’s musical, mystical call to evening prayers, the city was alive with sound even when the festival stages stood silent.


After an hour of aimless wandering, I found myself in the Spices Souk, where the young merchant demanded to know if I was an American.

“Yes,” I finally replied. “I’m from New York.”

“You came all this way to visit my country?” the man exclaimed. With that, he poured heaping tablespoons of powdered saffron into a plastic bag and handed it to me.

“This is a gift — for America,” he said with a smile. “Here. Take it. And now come in for a glass of tea.”


“I was 19 and a hippie among thousands of them who came to Morocco in those days,” Loy Ehrlich, a French guitarist who is an artistic director of the Gnawa Festival, recalled of his first pilgrimage to Essaouira in 1971.

Then an out-of-the-way, off-the-tourist-map town with no rail or regular bus service, no good roads to accommodate it if there were and only a handful of hotels, Essaouira, formerly known by its Portuguese name, Mogador, was beloved by Moroccans for its beauty, its near-perfect climate — even in the depths of the African summer when the interior swelters, ocean breezes sweep clouds from the sky and keep the so-called Windy City pleasant in the day and cool at night — and its friendly inhabitants. (“Essaouira people always smile,” said a Gnawa fan from Fez).

Artists like Bowles, who visited in 1959 while recording Gnawa music for the Library of Congress, and Orson Welles, who spent nearly two years there off and on in the late 1940s and early 50s filming “Othello,” using the city’s ramparts, hammams and arched gateways as a fitting North African backdrop for the tragedy of the Moor, were also charmed by the city’s beauty.

But it was a sojourn by Jimi Hendrix, the guitar idol who vacationed in Essaouira in 1969, a year before his death, that inspired visits by Mr. Ehrlich and countless other musicians and fans, many of whom believe that Hendrix’s song “Castles Made of Sand” was inspired by Borj El Baroud, the ghostly, turreted remains of a Portuguese fort decomposing off the beach south of the city. Like most of the legends surrounding Hendrix’s brief visit, when he supposedly spent weeks jamming with local musicians and fathering children among his many lovers, the story is a pipe dream. Hendrix, who arrived without a guitar and spent a single night or two in the Hôtel d’Îles with his girlfriend, recorded the song two years before he arrived in Morocco.

It was Hendrix’s star that Mr. Ehrlich followed to Essaouira. But it was Gnawa music that transfixed him when he arrived. Terminus of the ancient desert trade routes to Timbuktu and sub-Saharan Africa, where the Gnawas’ enslaved ancestors had their origins, Essaouira remains home to the largest concentration of the musical brotherhoods in Morocco.

“When I first heard Gnawa, it was like a discovery, like something was revealed to me,” Mr. Ehrlich said. “I felt the power of the music and its connection to the blues. The Africans who were brought to America created the blues; those sent to Morocco created Gnawa. It was like two worlds mixing — the African and rock ’n’ roll.”

Performing on the third night of the festival with a group formed for the occasion in homage to Hendrix, Mr. Ehrlich led the Band of Gnawa (after Hendrix’s Band of Gypsys), a cross-cultural mix of musicians playing electric guitars, guimbri, bendirs, electric keyboards and castanets, through renditions of Led Zeppelin’s “Immigrant Song” (with a maalem in emerald satin channeling Jimmy Page on his guimbri), as well as Hendrix’s “Stone Free” and, yes, “Castles Made of Sand.”

“In a crazy world where rich and poor, black and white, Christian and Islam are divided,” Mr. Ehrlich said, “musicians try to create something to unite the world.”

In keeping with that creed, he rewrote the refrain of a familiar Beatles singalong. “Come together, right now,” the vast crowd gathered on Place Moulay Hassan sang along with Mr. Ehrlich’s Band of Gnawa, “Essa-Weer-Ah!”


“IT’S positively biblical,” Bill Corbett marveled on the last day of the music festival as he sat in the shade of a tree outside L’Horloge, a popular cafe on a side street near a graceful clock tower. “Everywhere you look you see Marys and Josephs and wise men.”

He was watching the passing scene of colorfully turbaned men in ankle-length tunics, caftans and djellabas; brightly robed women, some in burqas and niqabs, some veiled and others with their hair wrapped in elaborately rolled silk head scarves (hijabs). Mr. Corbett, who arrived from England wearing a T-shirt and cutoffs, now looked quite New Testament himself in a long, white hooded djellaba, a knitted skullcap and sandals.

Besotted by Essaouira’s beauty, he would extend his stay for a week after the festival ended, fall in love with a Muslim woman and return a month later to court her and to explore the possibilities of starting a business exporting Essaouiran argan oil to Britain.

“I came for the music,” he said, “and found the magic.”

A WORLD OF MUSIC, AND A BEACH

The 11th edition of the Gnawa Festival (www.festival-gnaoua.net) will take place June 26 to 29. Admission to performances on outdoor festival stages in and around the medina is free.

Visas are not required for Americans traveling to Morocco, but visitors are advised to check the State Department international travel information online at travel.state.gov for up-to-date security information.

While almost all Moroccans speak French, many also speak English.

Essaouira is a small city with limited hotel accommodations; unless you are willing to barter with residents for spare bedrooms or sofa space or to sleep on the beach, be sure to book early. Most accommodations are sold out well before the festival begins, but you’re bound to see dozens of men and boys shake key rings at passing cars as they come into town, a signal that they have rooms to rent.

Because Islam takes a dim view of alcohol, it is kept out of sight, served only in hotels and restaurants that cater mostly to tourists, and never in sidewalk cafes or restaurants. Brown-bagging is almost unheard of and no beer, wine or liquor is sold at festival concessions, with the happy result that the high spirits of Gnawa are generated by the music and not the bottle.

Even so, the large festival crowds coursing through the narrow streets of a city with chronic poverty and unemployment attract pickpockets and drug dealers among other petty criminals.

GETTING THERE

Royal Air Maroc (www.royalairmaroc.com) flies from Kennedy Airport to Marrakesh through Casablanca. Fares for the festival week start around $1,450 round trip.

Essaouira is a three-hour bus ride from the Marrakesh rail station on the Supratours (www.supratours.ma) express bus. At festival time the fare is 65 dirhams, about $8.65 at 7.5 dirhams to the dollar; no reservations are taken. Taxis from the Supratours bus terminal usually make the drive in less than three hours for the equivalent of about $50.

At Bab Marrakesh, the main gate to the medina, porters will load your bags into pushcarts and guide you to your hotel in the medina for 40 dirhams.

WHERE TO STAY

The chief attractions at La Casa Del Mar (35, rue D’Oujda; 212-68-94-38-39; www.casadelmar-essaouira.com) are dramatic views from the whitewashed roof terrace of sunsets and offshore rock outcroppings. While clean and affordable (doubles in high season start at 750 dirhams), this small bed-and-breakfast is in a sector of the medina behind the crumbling north ramparts, where visitors should be cautious after dark.

The Palais L’Heure Bleu (2, rue Ibn Batouta; 212-24-78-34-34; www.heure-bleue.com) offers spacious, sumptuously appointed rooms, fine courtyard dining (prix-fixe dinner is 60 euros) and a rooftop swimming pool, as well as a hamman, Morocco’s version of a Turkish steam bath. Doubles from 300 to 540 euros.

With its stone archways, lush courtyard and wrought-iron balconies, the Riad Al Madina (9, rue Attarine; 212-24-47-59-07; www.riadalmadina.com ) looks like a colonial-era haven that might have inspired Graham Greene. Doubles are 814 dirhams.

Riad le Grand Large (2, rue Oum-Rabia; 212-44-47-28-66; www.riadlegrandlarge.com) is, despite its name (the big big?), a small hotel with friendly management and quiet, simply furnished rooms. Doubles from 550 dirhams, with breakfast.

Villa Maroc (10, rue Abdellah Ben Yassin; 212-24-47-31-47; www.villa-maroc.com) features simply furnished but charming rooms with wood-beam ceilings, common rooms with fireplaces and a roof terrace overlooking one of the main Gnawa Festival stages on Place Moulay Hassan. Doubles from 950 dirhams.

WHERE TO EAT

Le Mogadorien (7, place Chefchaoni; 212-24-47-49-50; www.lemogadorien.c.la) is an inviting, well-lighted grotto of graceful archways and comfortable dining alcoves serving traditional fare, including excellent tagines, fish soups and colorful salades Morrocaine. The three-course menu is 175 dirhams. Alcohol is not served.

Taros Cafe (2, rue de la Skala at Place Moulay Hassan; 212-24-47-64-07; www.taroscafe.com) is housed in a restored mansion, complete with a dark-wood library-cum-dining room. It is better known for its music than its food ( I had soggy prawns, an O.K. Moroccan salad and crème brûlée); meals cost 250 to 300 dirhams. On the rooftop terrace, rocking American music by bands and D.J.s helps make this perhaps the most popular bar in town.

Dar Loubane (24, rue de Rif, off Place Chefchaoni; 212-24-47-62-96) offers wonderful beef curries (95 dirhams), fish tagines (115 dirhams) and Moroccan salads (42 dirhams) in an eccentric setting: the courtyard of an 18th-century mansion filled with kitschy, eye-bending artwork. Much of it was collected in the flea markets of Paris by the Casablanca-born proprietor, Jean-Claude Dulac, gregarious host to lively gatherings of the young and hip, locals and tourists alike.

Cafe L’Horloge (Place Chefchaoni; no phone) provides a shady refuge from the heat and tumult of the medina. The service is friendly, if not exactly like clockwork; a cheese omelet and sweet mint tea set me back all of 25 dirhams.

Snak La Mouette (110, rue Mohamed Ben Abdellah; no phone), one of countless storefront snack shops in the medina, was a favorite of locals and festivalgoers, many of whom lined up at 2 a.m. for delectable post-concert chicken and pepper sauce baguettes (35 dirhams).

(STEVE DOUGHERTY has written extensively on popular music, including an article on Bob Dylan’s Minnesota for the Travel section.)



Thanks to the NYTimes.com for the educational use of this article — DR


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« Reply #108 on: May 12, 2008, 08:03:38 PM » by Scott Douglas

didn't your journey
begin and end
with you ?









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didn't your journey
begin and end
with you



Hi Scott


I've been trying to figure out
why this question bothers me
to the point of denial and want
I looked up absolutely, the tiny
part a penis played, black holes
and liquids, toxins and being, well
lucky not to be mashed down with some
other body parts; so what determined
that I should be me and my journey
was to start the night before my mother
ate chicken raw; it's a mystery to me
I mean, had she saw fit to lie down
with just any PoW, imagine the fuss
in Ghetto 24 when news broke that Lucia
had smuggled bread elsewhere for enjoyment
or whatever; destiny is such a fine pall
I guess the only excuse is that at the age
of reason I chose not to run away — and I
for the time being at any rate, am who I am


Ruci Dax
Warsaw, 1943



(romantic notes on love as a many splendid thing - first draft)
before men turned eco and straw into fashion

   
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« Reply #110 on: May 16, 2008, 10:54:32 AM » by Dax






throw away


the last one, you said
I thought of blossom and poem dust
white as before a strangers tread
made hopscotch popular, it was March
not quite spring, as yet the dogwood's
made poor flamingos to the throng of Starbuck
fans and a cold family that wanted work, even
from a mud-puddle in a bright summer dress


*


dr



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« Reply #111 on: May 17, 2008, 10:31:47 AM » by Scott Douglas
Quote
I've been trying to figure out
why this question bothers me
to the point of denial and want

there is no reason to let a question like that bother you.
a perfectly valid response is, "no, my journey involves the outside world".
but I would argue that the outside world acted only as a catalyst to change something inside.

for myself, my journey to greater fulfillment involves
- filtering my shadow
- taming my ego
- enlightening my darkness.

some of my more enlightened moments occur when I'm working in the garden.



By the way
thanks for sharing some of your experiences.

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« Reply #112 on: May 17, 2008, 06:24:56 PM » by Dax






Hi Scott

Good to hear your voice again


journalese/timeout


work ethic/job: useless

interests:

tatt zapped, licca chan (barbielike), him (my dude), us, fuckin, fart jokes, pissin into holy water, kidnapping kids, yelling, serial-seclusion,  classic cunt-style hair dye, cinephile, voyeurism, everything you never wanted me to be, cure for the side effects sleepin cupcakes, rural decay, dryhumping, veganism, Shinigami, autopsy body modification, dental nurse with a sadistic spit sucker instinct, harsh honesty honey, push-up barista bras, rivet culture of an armadillo wrangler, graphic-black toenail polish, playing drums in the buff, anything US Weekly, all-American bitch shit, roboraptor fuckwad theorist

location: lost

There is a long list above of things to say — some cute, some clever: anything US Weekly, all-American bitch shit, rural decay, everything you never wanted me to be, stuff like that. But then, the head of modification holds open this mouth of sadistic spit, which smells to me like the virtues of serial seclusion and fucking funny fart jokes gone bad.

The fragrance: is not me

I wanted to walk for a while with such words and pick-up on their tribal spin. The voices echoed from skulls and vibrant bones an industrial black, a counter arc of art that says
all is mass production shit, albeit tear-wet brutality. I saw a girl by a stream lay with a wolf under a full moon and silhouettes. She has killed and the wolf approves. She holds the knife. He laps at blood. Life and death, in convenient black and white nail polish — I love the truth of this, but despise the Parisian bottling  .  .  .


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« Reply #113 on: May 18, 2008, 08:49:24 AM » by Dax














fingal fort


took place, befide
a blind man's face
to fight the bailiff
John, King Buffalo
and Danifh truce
bygone, Cormac son of Art
— the poets
whofe bufinefs it is
to pleafe, by Heaven
begone


(Old Irish humour, in History)


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« Reply #114 on: May 18, 2008, 09:04:50 AM » by silent lotus





throw away


the last one, you said
I thought of blossom and poem dust
white as before a strangers tread
made hopscotch popular, it was March
not quite spring, as yet the dogwood's
made poor flamingos to the throng of Starbuck
fans and a cold family that wanted work, even
from a mud-puddle in a bright summer dress


*


dr





Dear D
I truly enjoyed this one.....
a warm smile
silent lotus
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« Reply #115 on: May 23, 2008, 07:23:39 AM » by Scott Douglas
greetings friends

I've been fighting a foe most hideous
yet legion and tiny.
Its desperation for existence can be felt
throughout my body in the way it surrounds my lungs
and is now taking siege of my sinus. This is a battle
it must not win.
The army that is me deals with this foe
in a most peculiar way.
It escorts in sweat and vivid dreams while the world sleeps.
I can smell the battle,
soak in the corpses and
assess the progress,
as any general would
upon dawn.



...  and how are you ?
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« Reply #116 on: May 23, 2008, 12:48:38 PM » by Dax







Hi Scott

good to have you back among commensals
and the hunker downers, between whom
friendship is the foundation of more
than idle fancies (it has been said)


instead, let glad tidings be the sight
and sound of fate and fortune and from went
to where it led (come what may, I myself
cut a feral throat astray), but for you
kind Ski, all is good news — adieu

cross me fifty bucks
mite artful tune
did, mister


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« Reply #117 on: May 30, 2008, 03:45:43 PM » by Scott Douglas
the Wall


I cut the grass as a soccer field,
the roar of the crowd on his face
said thanks -
but it's not enough.

I repotted the flowers near
our hanging garden.
the lift it gave her was apparent -
but it's not enough.

there's a wall I climb,
daily,
at the foot of my bed.

I rearrange my surroundings
so beauty will work its way in
like a fortune cookie in champagne.
but these things are never enough -
for me.

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« Reply #118 on: May 30, 2008, 04:28:06 PM » by Dax


Hi Scott,

Good to hear your voice in splendid form. Thank you, sir.

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« Reply #119 on: June 06, 2008, 11:41:20 PM » by Scott Douglas
In light of recent darkness
and temporary writer's block
I sense this need to check in.
Energy builds and my time is not yet up.
Certain moments,
my head splits and words parade
as if awaiting cue. 
That is the only time to write.
One hundred words can be arranged
a thousand ways
a dozen times a day
in vain
without that
one spark.

 
I would like to link to a truly great poem.

 http://poetsanctuary.proboards47.com/index.cgi?board=SpotlightArchive&action=display&thread=92523
 
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« Reply #120 on: June 11, 2008, 11:18:37 AM » by Scott Douglas
I'm drawn to this pain
like a moth to a flame
fulfilled as it flickers.

Bolts,
like lightning,
splash the promised land
with bursts
upon my mind
like single thought water balloons.

Is this clear ?
Do you also get wet and flicker ?
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« Reply #121 on: June 13, 2008, 11:32:02 AM » by Scott Douglas
never come back,
boy.

don't.

the chips and clothes
sleep,still, on the floor
where a wild night
hustled

but

it's someone else's game
although your hearts are big.


the diamond coin saw
the straight flush
as it landed on its edge.

they both suited
and saluted you
as you folded
and left.

wander in gardens,
scuffle in mud,
tromp in the rain
to a place where enthusiasm
never meets lack
and failure is merely having a tank
with something left,

and never come back.




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« Reply #122 on: June 15, 2008, 11:11:47 PM » by Scott Douglas
off balance
slowly falling
a single finger could put it right.

I

unplugged
broke the silver cord 
of the pendulum used by hypnotist's
and Moguls.

yet 
no
genuine
and
deliberate
path.

save
this feeling.



**************************************

(when a poem really sucks, minimize it)

you know that moment when
you're off balance,
slowly falling
and all you need is to put a single finger on something stable,
semi-stable or simply on a different path,
to take your place once again
in the world of the upright ?   

well

that is my life.

ever since I unplugged
from the TV,
broke the silver cord from it.
that pendulum,
used by hypnotist's
and Moguls,
I've yet to replace the illusion
with a genuine
and
deliberate
path.

the only thing that is certain is
this feeling.






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« Reply #123 on: June 22, 2008, 10:54:33 PM » by Scott Douglas
speaking of Miles,


blackbird

the spotlight hugs as gabardine,
both destined to be worn by the
Man with the horn.
the seer, aloof
In
the
Light of a warm friend,
with brass and attitude blend. his moody, brooding brew
Emits a cool magnitude, alchemy, that he invoked from
shadow to gift light. prepared with
Shoulders curled,
the blackbird takes flight
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« Reply #124 on: June 23, 2008, 12:19:29 AM » by Brian Edwards
Really nice Scott!

B.
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« Reply #125 on: June 23, 2008, 11:00:29 AM » by Scott Douglas

thanks Brian.


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« Reply #126 on: June 26, 2008, 08:40:28 PM » by Scott Douglas
infant. 
power.
not of that kind.
in its presence
respect
bombs,
reverence in napalm.

infant
power
a different sphere.
purity.
respect and
power.
     


(I'm pretty sure this is the worst poem I've ever written. :)
I'll have to check the archives.)
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« Reply #127 on: July 07, 2008, 11:20:03 PM » by Scott Douglas
America


I'm gonna' take this bat
and hit that ball
only because you dare to throw it.

America,
the dusty new horizon
for those in the game
and moving.

Fields cleared
of the growth from
a thousand years
with bare hands and dreams.

City nights hustle
with the sound of horses
reflected by lamp light
in steam.

Action -
cheering on the sound
of trumpets and violins
in dimly lit store fronts

... saying
"yes we can too." -
fudging back home melodies
into new.

I'm gonna' take this stick
and hit that bundle of tar, twine and leather
because I can
and what are you going to do about it ?





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« Reply #128 on: July 07, 2008, 11:25:57 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
Just now discovering your journalese Scott. Really interesting!
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« Reply #129 on: July 08, 2008, 09:51:50 AM » by Scott Douglas

thank you.
It's a little belligerent, I suppose, but great fun. 

I find myself rereading DR's contribution often. 

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« Reply #130 on: July 08, 2008, 10:07:07 AM » by Scott Douglas
I owe a debt of gratitude to Scott
 — for his gusto and glee. He makes
my life a brighter place.

I seldom show it, but for what it's worth
— a sincere thanks to you my friend.

It's fascinating how the same silence
shatters in quite different ways — you
have a fan, Scott.

Dax


I forgot to say

thank you.

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« Reply #131 on: July 16, 2008, 12:33:03 AM » by Scott Douglas
Inch by inch
measured in shot glasses
I pushed forward.
Thrashing the tangled never-to-be-named vines
of green and brown
I felt unafraid of the unkown
I was encroaching.
Although weary.
The bustle
leaving paths as strings
attached to tacks on police maps
must have thought me mad
in an Edgar Allen Poe - Jerimiah Johnson sort of way
although for only a short time.
I thirsted another scotch
as I laid path.
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« Reply #132 on: July 18, 2008, 03:24:09 PM » by Scott Douglas
"sexy lady.
 first
 she kisses you.
 then
 she gets naked  and rubs against you.".

his seven year old eyes just don't lie.

"most things",
to his chagrin
I calmly explain,
"are not as easy as on TV.".

but I still cover his eyes.

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« Reply #133 on: July 18, 2008, 06:17:56 PM » by Dax



Hi Scott

Emile
— and that's the plain truth

Dax
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« Reply #134 on: July 21, 2008, 01:28:37 PM » by Scott Douglas
I don't understand.

I gave up TV,
junk food and fake belief.
I no longer complain of the little things
nor fear to ponder the grand.

In exchange
I share the happiness of trees surfing wind
and the flux of meadows
attempting the impossible.

Rivers foam secrets
that were not secret
until ears stopped listening.

Elements
trapped
within wall and glass
smile upon me
within futile bondage 

but

today

so many poems confuse me.




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« Reply #135 on: July 21, 2008, 07:49:46 PM » by Dax







Hi Scott


good to hear your voice
— in tune, here once more
apropos your poetic query
which, in some circles, has
a lot going for it, as a clock
does at the stroke of midnight
or a church bell peels one back
from a nightmare — I think
the answer may lie in chimes
— an old fashioned expression
into which fools are drawn
hung and quartered for the mutual
satisfaction of seldom heard from poets
that refer to such destruction, as the shaman
would see a wino with bad feet, as symbolic of drunks
in want of a chic pair of Nike's to aid corrective jaw movement to the right
— hell, what do I know —
I do like the size-10 skew
on
this
ol'
dong
 :)


daxiwax
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« Reply #136 on: July 22, 2008, 11:43:04 AM » by Scott Douglas
As a major leaguer scribbling
on balls and programs,
your poems are cherished
yet
offered freely.
(Jose Conseco not withstanding.)
 
they are the jazz escaping
the horn
in that moment language
becomes art.


what is a poem ?
what is a poet ?
what is not a poem ?

Who is not a poet ?


 
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« Reply #137 on: July 22, 2008, 11:53:44 AM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
Who is not a poet?

Superb question.
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« Reply #138 on: July 22, 2008, 12:11:25 PM » by Scott Douglas

Isn't poetry
when the poet says to
self,
"I like the way I expressed that." ?

... but everyone
is always expressing
- self -
in all ways.

when does self expression become art ? 

... or does it matter ?
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« Reply #139 on: July 22, 2008, 12:23:36 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
"when does self expression become art ?  "

Another excellent question. To answer it, one must define art.  To define art, one must eliminate some things as not being art and, gosh darn it, I just can't bring myself to do that. :)
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« Reply #140 on: July 22, 2008, 12:31:26 PM » by Scott Douglas

:)



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« Reply #141 on: July 23, 2008, 05:55:25 AM » by Dax






Tropic of Cancer


An old lady sat in a rocker in the ruins of her home and garden (post one-of-four hurricanes in six weeks), said to me,"no sense worryin', what's done, is done, nothin' lasts long round these parts." We sat and drank our tea as if on a Sunday afternoon with sahib pasha and guests at Brideshead. To me, that day, what she said and did, was the most beautiful poetry there could ever be. The rest, I've often thought since, is cause célèbre, a window, through which good poems allow us to peer once in a while to breathe in its intoxication and wonderment. The other thing that struck me from this experience, is the fact that for all our sophistication and pomp, life as we know it changes in a heartbeat — nothing lasts long. Chic and strong, who is right and wrong, are horse dusters and fancy. This — all this round us — is about you and me, here and now — its open door — what has gone — poetry. Changement. We must never deny ourselves these things, ever.


— I love you —


Fr. Tomas
 
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« Reply #142 on: July 23, 2008, 06:22:52 AM » by milner place
His burnoose wrapped tight round him in a cold dawn, my friend Bouchaib pointed to the disk of the rising sun: "Mira, la madre de los povres".


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« Reply #143 on: July 23, 2008, 06:32:36 PM » by Dax
His burnoose wrapped tight round him in a cold dawn, my friend Bouchaib pointed to the disk of the rising sun: "Mira, la madre de los povres".


g



— hi Guillermo —


bueno, mucho grande

I see Francois Villon and hear Galway Kinnell — at work for all us lost wretches


"I know the Bohemians' error
     I know the power of Rome
              I know everything but myself"



— my one and only admission in a wrap of distraction —


just for G


ciao


dr
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« Reply #144 on: July 24, 2008, 11:07:08 PM » by Scott Douglas

Oh,
I see
you speak computer.
Bits and bytes and deliverables.
Still smile at my jokes, though.
Nice fella.

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« Reply #145 on: July 25, 2008, 08:29:49 AM » by Dax







Amnesty of MacBride


too nice about food
to take to camp
so squeamish, he would
touch a toilet
with his elbow, brave
fellow — now Maud Gonne
Sheán — would have a fit
'imaginism'
its sensibility
'let play'
from the heart, will be
political, a literary upset
or artistic form, almost
indecent some say
'east of Berlin
west of France'
when not at war, or stuck
in a trench, with rats
or the corpse of a horse
— but tread softly, Seán
no one will care, had anyone
even, known you were there
— I don't think
world-wide peace prize
or equal definition


(this poem is dedicated to a whole bunch of silenced poets, I know)


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« Reply #146 on: July 25, 2008, 10:37:04 AM » by Dax








— and it comes out here —


quasi-patterns do weave
wear the price with pride
cynical north, sanguine south
everything folds, then falls
irregular, modal, unclear
the beat goes on, have no fear
we've unashamed harmony, mother
of tonality, scores of footprints

— riff little



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« Reply #147 on: July 25, 2008, 11:01:46 AM » by Scott Douglas
breathe deeply.


let the airborne green
awaken -
yours.

let this rich current of memory
stimulate -
yours.

some balk
they take cover in plastic
and convenience 

... but ...

let foliage in the autumn of its life
and the spring message of flowers
fill -
you.
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« Reply #148 on: July 25, 2008, 12:10:05 PM » by Dax
breathe deeply.


let the airborne green
awaken -
yours.

let the rich current of memory
stimulate -
yours.

some balk
and take cover
in plastic and convenience 

... but ...

let the autumn of foliage and
spring message of flowers
fill -
you.



de

this, I like
¡grande!


d




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« Reply #149 on: July 25, 2008, 01:34:38 PM » by Scott Douglas
it's a beautiful day.
friday afternoon.
boss is gone and
I sit clicking Poetry Circle poems about
beautiful bossless friday afternoons.



have a good one DR.
or two.
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« Reply #150 on: July 25, 2008, 03:50:55 PM » by Scott Douglas
I lied.
I logged on at home -
not part of the poem.



I'm gonna open that bottle of wine -
holy shit,
that's a good first line -
and celebrate the way it should be
and toast those before  -
who are.
I won't reason
if I shouldn't or should
but
hoping also you would.
 



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« Reply #151 on: July 25, 2008, 04:30:58 PM » by Scott Douglas

A poetry wind
ripped
through my trailor park
this perfect afternoon.
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« Reply #152 on: July 25, 2008, 04:34:17 PM » by Scott Douglas
Why I began to babble
the first syllables in
the language of poetry.

http://blog.ted.com/2008/03/jill_bolte_tayl.php
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« Reply #153 on: July 25, 2008, 04:38:19 PM » by Scott Douglas
the mate

a female cardinal with mate
grasped the garden fence long enough
to rob me of sound and breath.
frozen
I cherished the seconds
until their startled egress and then returned
to my journal as my wife closed
the gate.

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« Reply #154 on: July 25, 2008, 04:43:22 PM » by Scott Douglas
take your finest pen
and proudest page
then stir with your youngest wine.
fermentation hastened
for the likes of this.
other than the actor
no artist travels lighter
and is more clandestine.
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« Reply #155 on: July 26, 2008, 05:34:27 PM » by Dax






gentlemen
of the great depression



prelude

let ezra scoff
at his chine, an easy to say host
dada drank his virgin anti war stuff down clean

interlude

and poetry not art, as an English stupidity
gushes not from the addled occiput pen
but was a poor pound of shrill and fascist dreck

close

a toast drunk in hen houses and filled to the lobus brim with mythical glory
(this bane of my devilish heart is not my cup of tea)


dr
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« Reply #156 on: July 27, 2008, 06:28:21 AM » by Dax


dear ms. english


splendid, poem. 

 — this is a beautiful piece
but would you please consider
the removal of the political
correctness that pot marks
the finesse with stress and mars
the whole damn lament, which
proves what upon my soul — that
plain jane bare bone simplicity
must forever wear stilettos
among olives and goatherds?
maybe so. but not in this case
not here. this monologue is best
left to speak for itself, as it
does, from the heart not the head

— a fine piece. thank you.

sincerely


dr

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« Reply #157 on: July 27, 2008, 10:45:56 PM » by Scott Douglas
Courage Amid the Storm

Angels fill the highways when
the demons take the beach. 
The five o'clock shadow is due soon 
to roll the beggars and the thieves. 
You try to close your eyes but
you know there ain't no peace
'cause the church bells only ring
for those brave enough to sleep.
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« Reply #158 on: July 28, 2008, 04:54:24 AM » by Dax
Courage Amid the Storm

Angels fill the highways when
the demons take the beach. 
The five o'clock shadow is due soon 
to roll the beggars and the thieves. 
You try to close your eyes but
you know there ain't no peace
'cause the church bells only ring
for those brave enough to sleep.





— really like this one ski, smashin' —




wheels go round & round


And those still beggars in repost
clutch at bears and barbie snots
never a prayer or plain thought
of how they and not that poor sop
on the tele came to be where they
and their friends are not, where
the lads in uniform, ass and elbows
perform win or loose, with the tools
they got round their waist and hollowed
out bellies stinking of shit on streets
of a place called Elsewhere-Somewhere
— but it's time for yummy a dunkin

  .  .  . flick

I can see clearly now the rain is gone
I can see all obstacles in my way
Gone all the dark clouds that made me blue
It's gonna be a bright sunshiny day
It's gonna be a bright sunshiny day

I think I can make it now my pain is gone
All of the sad feelings have disappeared
Here is my rainbow I've been prayin' for
It's gonna be a bright sunshiny day

Look all around there's nothin' but blue skies
Looks straight ahead nothing but blue skies

I can see clearly now the rain is gone,
I can see it, I can
I can see all obstacles in my way yeah
Gone all the dark clouds that made me blue

It's gonna be a bright sunshiny day
It's gonna be a bright sunshiny day
It's gonna be a bright sunshiny day

  .  .  . breaking news, pop pickers

President Nixon Steps Down

amid one of the greatest
scandles in US history.
 
Today . . .           flick!

Bye!

Have a good one!

   .  .  . Later! 


*Song lyrics by Stevie Wonder, "I can see clearly now"
— used for limited education purposes only. Thank you.


dr
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« Reply #159 on: July 28, 2008, 10:49:22 PM » by Scott Douglas
Change in the Embers


The Washington Post and TV Guide will be
the first things to engage the kindling
when the power goes out -
forever.
One giant breath from Sol.

Groundhogs and squirrels will no longer
be looked upon as a nuisance and life
will once again start deep within.

There will be rumours of kingdoms and
ill conceived plans and today's roast
and tonight's pillow will once again
take their rightful places.

I bet when early man summoned the dream
from deep within the campfire he
never thought the vision involved loss.

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« Reply #160 on: July 29, 2008, 08:51:48 PM » by Dax







concord

every now and then it does us good to take stock, but not dwell, on the turmoil of others days gone by and look at how fair such work has withstood the witches flay, william blake, poe, baudelaire, whom I admire for their stamina and being unwilling accomplices to the status quo inquisitors of the past. you carry the same seed. and, as you learn and prosper, will no doubt suffer the same sort of fate. take heart, then, share my compass. allow this epic path run its course — as iron. and let no man say they broke your heart for want of sun and castle comment. come! this is a good day to die standing
discord

fine. but why sound so Hellenistic
about others. worse, make the help
you got sound silly, even trivial
and yourself? somehow less in need
of a hand than others first imagined
my mistake, I never dole out pity
not to anyone, even lost sheep, being
fools in the first place, not worth spit
  — on a bonfire in a hurry



dr
 
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« Reply #161 on: July 30, 2008, 04:59:22 AM » by Dax







sábado rolla costa


a Very loud woman walks into wal-mart
with her two kids, yelling obscenities
at the elderly smile stood at the entry
to welcome them inside the store

the senior said with a cheer, good morning
and welcome to wal-mart. nice children
you have there. are they twins?

the woman stopped yelling long enough to say
hell no they ain't! junior's 9 and slim 7.
why the hell would you think they're twins.
are you blind, or just stupid?

i'm neither blind nor stupid, ma'am, replied
the greeter. i just couldn't believe someone
would sleep with you twice. have a good day
and thank you for shopping at wal-mart



sp/dr
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« Reply #162 on: July 30, 2008, 06:40:39 AM » by milner place
Una sonrisa por la manana

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« Reply #163 on: July 30, 2008, 10:48:02 AM » by Scott Douglas

discord

fine. but why sound so Hellenistic
about others. worse, make the help
you got sound silly, even trivial
and yourself? somehow less in need
of a hand than others first imagined
my mistake, I never dole out pity
not to anyone, even lost sheep, being
fools in the first place, not worth spit
  — on a bonfire in a hurry



dr
 


I've kept my ear to the ground
and gaze to the cars upon your every pass.
The draft of your engine and the stretch of the tracks
has  pulled me forward as "Carmen" and other commands are proffered
from the caboose or bar car -
I can tell not -
through windows or into mirrors  -
I can tell not -
perhaps Doppler is playing tricks -
perhaps fire has never understood ice
but the curse or praise of strangers is nothing to fear  - 
worn moccasins and empty flasks are.
His true foe.
You've kept mine soled and full -
thank you.
I'm aware that the master hides intent behind words and
the bull breathes in the glory of his kind only upon a waved red cape
before he losses his ear
and life.

I'm all ears.
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« Reply #164 on: July 30, 2008, 11:39:37 AM » by milner place
Where's the tail?

g/m
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« Reply #165 on: July 30, 2008, 07:55:29 PM » by Dax



Gabriel's Oboe in D


sun

    light

— fields of home

      pebbles



remorse

                  full

— no room

left



      shadows

        clouds

— anytime soon

           come d'amore




Cristo
       . rain


— forgive!


this mission 

                      .  . . 3    2    1




dr
 


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« Reply #166 on: July 30, 2008, 08:55:21 PM » by Dax






hides
tail?



toro
silhouette
on a hill

is it real
fake
could be

kind
of
steel

and
he
kills

just
for
kicks

 ::)

§

"love the pair of you guys for sure"


§

dr
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« Reply #167 on: July 31, 2008, 01:03:16 PM » by Scott Douglas
Memories of William Blake - whom I don't know

Up ahead seemed the right way to go, although
I could not understand why standing still
need be thought of as disgrace or idle pastime.
Swirled stalactite provides passage for some.
Greyness lends itself to this flushed canvas
and to it, I am familiar.

The Sun is a fable
passed down through eons
as an explanation for the gift of sight.
This bleak land holds fascination and why some call
its loneliness and dank challenges,
hell,
I don't know but 
you must watch your step
or suffer the fate on the sharp granite below.

The light bearer ahead, as he is daily, serves as a companion
to discuss pastures and glories of other realms.
Everyday he invites me to join -
we shake hands and he goes his way.
I would not say this rocky land needs me
but what holds me to its core
is that my love for it has yet to be expressed.
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« Reply #168 on: August 01, 2008, 04:48:14 AM » by Dax




womb to tomb


where

      am I

to risk

      all

that I

      want


                           to be

      with?

 
             . . .     happiness

      dans

      le

      tombeau

avec
      toi



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« Reply #169 on: August 01, 2008, 05:41:47 AM » by Dax






(for skidoodle's homework maybe)


Song for Nat

(4/4)

I see you face
— in every room
when our radio plays
— your favorite tune

R-E-M-E-M-B-E-R
I'll always remember

(chorus)


Song for Ella

(4/4)

down low gypsy-land blues

I'm comin for you

never mind it ain't true

she's comin for you

(theme)


dr
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« Reply #170 on: August 01, 2008, 07:31:58 PM » by Dax







shakespeare's krapp

1


ever since man first aped
woman by name and she, Eve
swallowed the swell of its
seed, that Adam could just be
happy and inert to the ashes
sceptic and rid the world
of Evil, as He had commanded
words have confounded us mortals


godot's illusion of total release

11


the royal society of prose, post
greek, for heaven sake, meaning
silence makers, full and fancy-free
sat still, least until roget became
plain enough to settle mob fury, and
so began the cult of round sentences
— and civil unrest


dr



the author is doing a life-stretch in sing sing
state connection facility and looks forward to an early parole
where he intends to teach english to zoo animals and extraterrestrials
— if he goes straight
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« Reply #171 on: August 02, 2008, 10:30:05 AM » by Scott Douglas



shakespeare's krapp

1


ever since man first aped
woman by name and she, Eve
swallowed the swell of its
seed, that Adam could just be
happy and inert to the ashes
sceptic and rid the world
of Evil, as He had commanded
words have confounded us mortals




Anybody who's anyone was at the 
famous Eden mansion last night
for the gala event of the epoch.
And who was that seen dancing with Eve
and whispering sweet nothings in her ear ?
why, it was none other than
prince Sustantivo and where was
her fabulous husband Adam
during all this ?
The Word has it he was at the bar
drinking cider.
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« Reply #172 on: August 02, 2008, 10:19:23 PM » by Scott Douglas
Playing drums on a Saturday night
I can hear him downstairs with the doors closed
Seven years old.
He's becoming just like me

... wait

he's becoming just like me.
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« Reply #173 on: August 03, 2008, 09:26:37 AM » by Scott Douglas
Today is the day
I'm going to install that headboard.
It's really a footboard that my wife bought
on clearance.
She's wanted a headboard for years but
a real headboard would be too large to fit into a Saturn.
I hope we don't have an argument when I try
to size it up as I fasten it to the wall
like molding.
If we ever upgrade to a queen
this facade will have to come down.
Today I feel happy.
This is the day to install the headboard.
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« Reply #174 on: August 03, 2008, 09:30:13 AM » by Scott Douglas

the above needs work.
any ideas are welcomed.
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« Reply #175 on: August 03, 2008, 11:44:23 AM » by Dax
Today is the day
I'm going to install that headboard.
It's really a footboard that my wife bought
on clearance.
She's wanted a headboard for years but
a real headboard would be too large to fit into a Saturn.
I hope we don't have an argument when I try
to size it up as I fasten it to the wall
like molding.
If we ever upgrade to a queen
this facade will have to come down.
Today I feel happy.
This is the day to install the headboard.


ski

"headboard" sounds like the same excitement one has going from lace to latin — never mind. first word that springs to mind is "toolbelt" and for clearance we must go "cheap" and then with, well, try "eco-weekend warrior" for an "outreach ministry of the goodlife" brigade. an easier flare-path is borne from past experience, looking back so to speak. pretend said mission has been done, so how did it go?

to start with, put yourself in the make-believe frame of all you have seen and never fear. this is only pretend. scribble away no stop for 10-not-9 minutes. then go from there. use the reference above. close your eyes for (1) one minute prior, and do nothing. start the clock now! good luck in the hinterland — beware of the ogre in the dark forest.

drt
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« Reply #176 on: August 04, 2008, 02:15:36 PM » by Scott Douglas
the pieces fit together like the handshake of old friends.
the palms recall the exploits.
this exotic wood could have grandiose dreams, too,
but has resigned to a humble design.

she's always wanted a handsome headboard 
but I've maintained that an old Mazda is not car enough.
so, to appease me, she found this beautiful baseboard
on the cheap.

I'll install it as molding at the head of the bed.
It will work.
she has a knack for finding value within
unwanted items.
 
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« Reply #177 on: August 04, 2008, 02:19:06 PM » by Scott Douglas
the hiss of the ventilation system
if you listen closely
sounds like a breeze -
a soundtrack to the motion picture
spanning my window.

uninhabited green and confused foam,
helplessly rush along
by the pounding force of the river
- the only motion to this picture.

packed boxes of unused knowledge
seem to wrestle-hold the ambitious cabinet into place. 
I swear the metal box would float
without the aid
because I can see no other purpose.

other items and implements which have
somehow journeyed from earth
to form sit upon my desk,
their reason to be,  only to await my attention.
 
I'm not worthy of this attention -
I can't understand the desire for it.

I would rather release the items from their bondage
return them to earth and
walk among them.

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« Reply #178 on: August 04, 2008, 10:33:59 PM » by Scott Douglas
Change in the Embers


The Washington Post and TV Guide will be
the first things to engage the kindling
when the power goes out -
forever.
One giant breath from Sol.

Groundhogs and squirrels will no longer
be looked upon as a nuisance and life
will once again start deep within.

There will be rumours of kingdoms and
ill conceived plans and today's roast
and tonight's pillow will once again
take their rightful places.

I bet when early man summoned the dream
from deep within the campfire he
never thought the vision involved loss.



Fairytales

The Washington Post and TV Guide will be
the first things to engage the kindling. Their
words will cling to the smoke, in fear,
and soar upwards panicked as a child
lost at Disneyland. The fearsome news and
trite pap will eventually be be smothered
in the benevolent cumulus, rearranged and
fall to earth in fairytales and nursery rhymes
enchanting those who look under rocks
and behind trees for mystical creatures and
the meaning of rain. When the power grid finally
goes out there will be news of the hunt
and magical stories of ancient lands
around campfires.   
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« Reply #179 on: August 05, 2008, 09:50:49 AM » by Rick Stansberger
Something to wish for.

Rick
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« Reply #180 on: August 05, 2008, 10:04:59 AM » by Scott Douglas

:)

well, I prefer to see opportunity. 

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« Reply #181 on: August 06, 2008, 05:09:08 AM » by Dax






:D


I found the headboard, Ski. I found it one of the best to date, superb voice for the clerisy, yet honest — unlike some pieces. Which for some reason, seem further way. I sense the self-interest in this piece and without question such a notion is good enough reason for me. This latest wp/mtv piece for instance, dreams sweetly beneath a shadow of the monolithic bloc that asks we take our daily copulation pill while Cardinal Smear tends to the flock faithful. The fist half of which is self-evident, more mechanical than the rest. The last half, rolls and flows and sounds natural, and is, whether intended or no, an independent style. In a way, this helps reinforce its Holy Grail: — all we need is love. Well, sweet dreams fellas! And a salute to Rick would not go amiss about now. So like most law abiding citizens, I found there is a good deal of sense in what you have us believe and also sound as if you had something valuable, some important piece of news you must share before it was to late. The staccato is telling first off, too, foot on the pedal but fearful of its power, so we tend to stop and stall. This is not a bad thing, just a point to watch out for, be aware of next time out. This happens having started something, only to return later in an attempt to recapture "that" mood, or original picture — which is futile. I like both headboard and wp/mtv. Though for me at least, the latter would have been stronger had prior deliberation took this for a spin in a proper two piece with the top down just for kicks. Thank you.   


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« Reply #182 on: August 06, 2008, 04:48:27 PM » by Scott Douglas

thanks for the help, DR.
this is very useful.

perhaps "fairytales" is too bombastic.
there's something fanciful about it though. 

you're the best
gotta run


thanks
SkaaDee


 
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« Reply #183 on: August 06, 2008, 10:42:30 PM » by Scott Douglas
listen

to that.
I have the recordings.
One friend down.
he never could understand why I was eager to trap
every rusty note, now swirling inside a box -
aimless through circular highways and
in and out of hard drives.

he'll walk again - youth does that.
For a moment, though,
tonight I saw the future,
no really.
I was old - my son a man.
he cherished
our quiet times

most.




.
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« Reply #184 on: August 08, 2008, 12:01:33 AM » by Scott Douglas
water en seul

Brecker on the hi-fi
it seems
rain hits the window it too
understands we're both inside.
remember ?
I stayed in, afraid of what I would become
the current would rush and I
wouldn't recognise myself
from a river
or
a stream

rain.

do you remember ?
Brecker on the hi-fi
and the rain still knows.
the walls crowd in in a most familiar way
different walls
but we're still together
aren't we.
it's times like this
I wonder where that water was going.
I think it's on the radio.
what I didn't leave I must have  put away.
it knows.



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« Reply #185 on: August 08, 2008, 02:48:10 AM » by Dax



— smashing
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« Reply #186 on: August 08, 2008, 08:01:05 AM » by Scott Douglas
thanks.
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« Reply #187 on: August 08, 2008, 05:14:19 PM » by Dax






Manshie


I've not been in the garden
round the post office, pub
school, played poker, or had
my identity stolen (fat chance)

my fingers are raw, nails are shot
don't understand why is that coda
so, but the keenest sparrow who cleans
this place, says — it comes with practise


— Tomas



 :)
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« Reply #188 on: August 09, 2008, 01:24:01 AM » by Scott Douglas

I'm gonna open that bottle of wine -
holy shit,
that's a good first line -
and celebrate the way it should be
and toast those before -
who are.
I won't reason
if I shouldn't or should
but
hoping also you would.
 



I'm gonna open that bottle of wine -
wine,
I know is a cliche.
I'm gonna open that bottle of Scotch -
too a cliche
but with a sailor's resolve and the potential
to find one's self at its bottom,
in the morning
sleeping with dirty laundry and piss.
This magnificent event I would like to share,
for some reason,
with my friends 
- you know who you are -
the ones who have put up with
meanderings of moths and railings
against machines - floundering - indifferences.
Somehow wine,
I mean scotch,
is a way to pause and toast the distance
magnificent journeys have come
thus far.

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« Reply #189 on: August 09, 2008, 11:34:01 AM » by MichelleBethCronk
listen

to that.
I have the recordings.
One friend down.
he never could understand why I was eager to trap
every rusty note, now swirling inside a box -
aimless through circular highways and
in and out of hard drives.

he'll walk again - youth does that.
For a moment, though,
tonight I saw the future,
no really.
I was old - my son a man.
he cherished
our quiet times

most.




.



Please post this in the submit.  I can't pick it from here.

lol  - xo Michelle
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« Reply #190 on: August 09, 2008, 01:16:51 PM » by Scott Douglas
:)
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« Reply #191 on: August 09, 2008, 10:10:15 PM » by Lynn Doiron
Scott -- oh my.  Only have time tonight to read through one page, but I am so pleased to have visited your this edition journalese.  A gift for me and I thank you.

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« Reply #192 on: August 09, 2008, 11:34:14 PM » by Scott Douglas

You're very kind Lynn.
Thank you
from myself and everyone else who has contributed.

 
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« Reply #193 on: August 09, 2008, 11:40:20 PM » by Scott Douglas
capsule


I write to you now
hunched over a typewriter
in a basement of a suburban home
on planet Earth.
I can tell you that parents
still tuck their children in with a kiss and
feeling still spills from the pens of poets -
elderly given priority on transit
and bread lines.   
I can say that thought is still given
to those abused and neglected in
the name of the whole but marches end
prematurely -
musicians are still searching
for that note - practitioners still heal.
If you find this,
I want you to know that
sunsets and Autumns are still
beheld and craftsmen still toast
their creations.
Don't worry
nor
feel shame -
enough hands have been joined.

 
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« Reply #194 on: August 10, 2008, 05:09:45 AM » by Dax







Cipher Crystal


This is extraordinary, Ski
Twain would be proud — I am

The Second Builder, whomever
— stoic embers of humankind:

Preferential Reference Cause

— parabolic, elemental force
stronger than first thought
— effects, delimit infinity


ciao, besos


— zero three
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« Reply #195 on: August 10, 2008, 06:39:24 AM » by Dax






real estate


your rooms, their furnishings and fittings
hide (or reinforce) a set of imperatives
flashbacks, you suitably ironed then press
into folds, a place for everything, sunshine
dust, falls just so, but never figured, quite
how to misplace the moon, why, such an idea is absurd


— Tomas
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« Reply #196 on: August 10, 2008, 08:08:26 AM » by Scott Douglas






Cipher Crystal


The Second Builder, whomever
— stoic embers of humankind:

Preferential Reference Cause

— parabolic, elemental force
stronger than first thought
— effects, delimit infinity


ciao, besos


— zero three



this is pretty.
I believe my cryptography classes are beginning to pay off.
(I mean this in a respectful, self deprecating way)

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« Reply #197 on: August 10, 2008, 10:52:42 AM » by Dax






We


si, si, a philtre mix, things to explore, to contrive
— as an insignificant tyro, nothing more
I wonder, still, how it is so much passes as a game, a peep show
on the end of a pier, what happens, exactly, how on earth does each sunrise
disappear when eyes flit a certain way, awkward and shy before an argot screen sky
or I suspect what fills some heads is mercury, instead of the usual toxic lotion of logic
— to make poets of men and men suffer poets.



— for ski


yevgeny zamyatin
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« Reply #198 on: August 10, 2008, 07:54:12 PM » by Scott Douglas
it's a breathing journal.
fabulous.
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« Reply #199 on: August 11, 2008, 06:47:11 AM » by Dax







sad men


you were nothing
if not whet, about
the doll house

ruins, where lay
a corpse on crisp
white linens, so to

my ashes
what they worth   
dead or alive?

you had it all
romance, ju-ju
of rosé must

— hot potatoes
by the way

the puerile sex thing
— definitely
a strength of yours

not to hawk
 — sober
it's frightening


td
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« Reply #200 on: August 11, 2008, 10:38:51 AM » by Scott Douglas
blueprint

We constantly search lifelines from
irreversibly sinking ships and cling to
desperate chronicles of genius.
words are cheap

 -  junk DNA -

the language still remains
public domain from A to Z
yet
words swimming your blueprint
save.   




- for Tomas



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« Reply #201 on: August 11, 2008, 11:54:33 AM » by Scott Douglas

Please post this in the submit.  I can't pick it from here.

lol  - xo Michelle


... but then you may stop dropping by for dinner.








***************   

pictures of strangers


Oak has a memory
measured in units of quiet
brushed from nursing home walls.

Remembered will be the longing
for her hardwood chair but
not much more. 
Everyday the riverside willow
calls her to its place.

Silence has weight and
descends at the speed of white
becoming grey
in a fog.

She sits among pictures
of strangers and tends rosary beads.
She is not Catholic.



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« Reply #202 on: August 11, 2008, 10:43:36 PM » by Scott Douglas
Damned Straight


Every night
I put the same music on the stereo
as if it were going to change.
Sad notes played by sad men who
bend each note for missed games of little league
and over and around lost lovers.
Sometimes beauty is what's left to
take the highland when everything else
is washed downstream.

Ghosts,
too,
are hung from the walls -
"the women by the window",
for instance
will be forever presenting her back. 
 
But Miles,
biggest presence in the room,
looks straight.
Damned straight.
I move
eyes follow.
always the same,"get your shit together".
challenge,
it's The challenge.

the Expectation of genius leaves no time
for gifts sent through the mail
self-addressed.

it's not pride
or ego
there is something inside worth abandon.
the spotlight demands
change
and it's time to get my shit together.


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« Reply #203 on: August 12, 2008, 10:20:27 AM » by Dax


this is superb, ski
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« Reply #204 on: August 12, 2008, 03:50:36 PM » by Dax






sad men is a worthy cause, someone should start one

*

gitano pantie dropper


 now you sound a siren of cantina chimes; which is not a place to be, believe me,
if there is either mountains of dishes to wash, or women screaming over money;
and were it not for the poor artist in their midst, would have precious little
cantos to cry over; but such an artist, surely, some pundits broker,
would be in the wrong line of work for flamenco; as they, as ever,
sing and stomp over sick dogs and fresh air
— usually, other peoples'

ciao



on stage you never look at a gypsy the same way twice — or off!


td
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« Reply #205 on: August 12, 2008, 07:27:13 PM » by Dax







x


a group of small children in class
took sick with the living of it

— besos —

¡baile!

I ask that the small can
be half-filled
and others clap

words are not enough
sounds of the heart are wanting
seventy small pants and a lifetime of tears

I shake a handful of coins
and begin to tap a desk top with a thumb

lo  lo  lo  lo  lo

w-o-w  w-o-w  w-o-w  w-o-w  w-o-w

lol-ita  lol-ita  lol-ita 

w-o-w-o-w-o


teachers
find their voice
pooling and we dance with wolves
for a good while longer

— besos —

¡baile!


x
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« Reply #206 on: August 12, 2008, 10:55:25 PM » by Scott Douglas

this is superb, ski

thank you Miles.


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Accommodation

He bought his tombstone early
- being hated  -
so friends could piss on it
while he was still alive.

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« Reply #207 on: August 13, 2008, 06:19:45 AM » by Dax







Oxford Master of Fine Arts Paper

1-of-3


— Major Revision Of The Theory of Reformation —

Discuss



Time allow for each part is three (3) hours. Start time: 9am


1.


I read somewhere on Nietzsche, the philosophy of art, depends on the treasure of the humble, the Maeterlinck critique, but Kierkegaard put forth construction of the aesthetic; so romance, I thought, was dead; till McGinn, in a marvellous lecture at a recent piss party in my honour (which most of the academic staff enjoyed), had me convinced otherwise; ethics, evil, and fiction, would never be the same, because meaning of beauty, a theory of aesthetics, not by happenstance, either, had me broker for a while: what is art, by Rand; enough was enough, Anne, I thought, the sense of beauty, being the outlines of aesthetic theory, would be better for my purposes and the lighter Santayana reforms exposé would suffice till some other prick could rise to the occasion and make me think twice about doing anything for myself. I must make a list and invite someone round for a chat about reforms; so at least in practise, I get to hump 50lb bags of paper round my neck and feel the almighty weight of my own miasma.

A--


REMARKS: The candidate seems to have the thrust of the question at heart.
Suggest: "review" due to abscence of any authentic dates — nothing revolutionary here.
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« Reply #208 on: August 13, 2008, 09:59:18 AM » by Scott Douglas
In a flash
of boastful spark
I realize that stars
are just fireworks that ain't
coming back but over
their shoulders
they turn
to laugh.

************************************

Dust
surrounds the generous moon
in a lazy shadow of puppetry.
I pick them out
one by one
night after night.
I'm no one in particular.


**********************************8260
thirsty Kalahari

Streams passed from the tops of mountains
like a solemn line of refugees.
Winds brewed in frantic skies
whip again the passions of the sand.   

The hourglass called the Kalahari endures.

 


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Oxford Master of Fine Arts Paper

1-of-3


— Major Revision Of The Theory of Reformation —

Discuss



Time allow for each part is three (3) hours. Start time: 9am


1.


I read somewhere on Nietzsche, the philosophy of art, depends on the treasure of the humble, the Maeterlinck critique, but Kierkegaard put forth construction of the aesthetic; so romance, I thought, was dead; till McGinn, in a marvellous lecture at a recent piss party in my honour (which most of the academic staff enjoyed), had me convinced otherwise; ethics, evil, and fiction, would never be the same, because meaning of beauty, a theory of aesthetics, not by happenstance, either, had me broker for a while: what is art, by Rand; enough was enough, Anne, I thought, the sense of beauty, being the outlines of aesthetic theory, would be better for my purposes and the lighter Santayana reforms expose would suffice till some other prick could rise to the occasion and make me think twice about doing anything for myself. I must make a list and invite someone round for a chat about reforms; so at least in practise, I get to hump 50lb bags of paper round my neck and feel the almighty weight of my own miasma.

A--


REMARKS: The candidate seems to have the thrust of the question at heart.
Suggest: "review" due to absence of any authentic dates — nothing revolutionary here.


Art Pepper and the Art of Cool.

I'm an ignorant man but I do know a secluded bay
that asks only an afternoon and a trail of dust.
I'll bring the rod - you leave the tackle at home.
This is where ripples whisper unabashedly and
sunbeams make stops on every open hand.
I've got a rainbow in my pocket right now.
Take the I-94 past the 7-11 on the 28th
but leave your numbers behind when I meet you
by the big silver tree near the frog pond.
You can't miss it. 
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« Reply #209 on: August 13, 2008, 10:46:56 AM » by Dax







I'm with you — fukit!
maybe I''d wild a way over to bc and check a few close folk out, or just keep going to saw street blues on A23, lost & lonely— sound like me, vlatko stefanovski, miguel "angel"cortés, dear ol' andro— now they could play a smyphony in a laundry basket

td

 
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« Reply #210 on: August 16, 2008, 07:15:02 AM » by Dax






— Sunrise —


I bathe in a symphony of Beethoven No.7 and frost not in the wastelands of another Napoleonic war. The cost of conscription is too princely a sum, for yet another erotica or Waterloo.



— in writing this symphony Beethoven had been thinking of Buonaparte, but Buonaparte while he was First Consul. At that time Beethoven had the highest esteem for him and compared him to the greatest consuls of ancient Rome. Not only I, but many of Beethoven's closer friends, saw this symphony on his table, beautifully copied in manuscript, with the word "Buonaparte" inscribed at the very top of the title-page and "Ludwig van Beethoven" at the very bottom. …I was the first to tell him the news that Buonaparte had declared himself Emperor, whereupon he broke into a rage and exclaimed, "So he is no more than a common mortal! Now, too, he will tread under foot all the rights of man, indulge only his ambition; now he will think himself superior to all men, become a tyrant!" Beethoven went to the table, seized the top of the title-page, tore it in half and threw it on the floor. The page had to be re-copied and it was only now that the symphony received the title Sinfonia eroica —   


O how such clouds pass slowly, a hundred years or more. Revolution and classics, and the dawn of romance, so it passes. So it goes. 

— Tomas    
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« Reply #211 on: August 16, 2008, 08:31:10 AM » by Scott Douglas
I too love Beethoven and hate war.
Both can infiltrate the veins and inflame
passions but to totally different ends.

I wish there were only one of each.

Very nice poem.
thanks
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« Reply #212 on: August 16, 2008, 08:54:29 AM » by Dax






Today I need to swap my car out at the dealership. Will be out of the loop for the most part, but hope not. The terrible twins, Mozart & Beethoven. What times these were. Will be back to normal soon, Scott. Thank you — mellifluous, but not quite prolix. You're a sweet gem.


Tomas
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« Reply #213 on: August 17, 2008, 03:18:39 AM » by Scott Douglas
hurry back


*******************************

insomnia


It was a brilliant idea, Janis Ian
notwithstanding. Have classmates
pick the teams for highschool basketball.
One by one - it's important to know who
your friends are and is a cunning lesson in life
played out with running shoes and leaders
right in front of everyone although a lesson
understood  by few.
I don't mean to sound bitter here,
nor am I, really. I was a decent athlete but
an even better student.
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« Reply #214 on: August 17, 2008, 06:07:31 AM » by Dax




cristo

I neither need, nor
clarify, nor
signify
dead or alive
— reason
has other plans

jesus crucificado
y vive con nosotros


— miracles
less passion makes
our guilt
worthwhile, nor on
for whom, I
— shall live
tree reflection

the willow stalks high
bows as night flies
winters' nightingales
alone, such thin woods
stood catkin stocking
weeping, with waters
— unfinished, close by

nothingness

— explanations, must terminate somewhere
end where Mr Knott, unsure, makes his bed
Watt it seems, is a strange attribute of fancy
Mr Knott's nemesis, since he never knows Watt
nor more than is necessary, never allowed beyond
Watt is there, waiting, forever in the wings
doomed to failure, Mr Knott, a mere formality —




translation note

 — blind jesus saint
is not an easy aborists'
lot, nor come to think
is samuel beckett's novel
watt —

— Tomas



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« Reply #215 on: August 17, 2008, 01:44:32 PM » by Scott Douglas
extraterrestrial afterbirth


There's a reason men like powertools.
Over eons of earthly time, the yang force
has gathered to itself tiny insights
and advantages necessary to win struggles
over powerful competition, themselves
bursting with triumph over adversity.
I can feel this when I hold a chainsaw.

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« Reply #216 on: August 17, 2008, 03:08:32 PM » by Dax

.


extraterrestrial afterbirth


There's a reason men like powertools.
Over eons of earthly time, the yang force
has gathered to itself tiny insights
and advantages necessary to win struggles
over powerful competition, themselves
bursting with triumph over adversity.
I can feel this when I hold a chainsaw.




see chicken in chains

— in certain circles this would no doubt exhibit
primitive saw charm of a freudian nut-sack complex
so-called tree hackers in remiss of a new pulp forest
before their well-stocked tupperware
boxes appear out of nowhere at noon where the lack
of tuna sparks a sit-down among heavy revolvers —


crimson territory

I read earlier, for a while
Jorge Luis Borges, one poem
in particular, my favourite
spills of Adrogué, a place
the other side of here
its people, dust and jasmine
— you must acquire Dreamtigers
beyond doors, full of holes


— Tomas  
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« Reply #218 on: August 17, 2008, 11:46:44 PM » by Rick Stansberger
I wondered what that chainsaw feeling was!

Rick
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« Reply #219 on: August 17, 2008, 11:49:52 PM » by Scott Douglas

I thought you may like to know.
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« Reply #220 on: August 18, 2008, 04:58:58 AM » by Dax
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I wondered what that chainsaw feeling was!

Rick


Hi Rick

Good of you to drop by. Thank you.

Having myself woke in a few strange forrests throughout my lifetime would say medics see this  phenomena as more than a lot of crabwise superstition, still, one wanders puckish about clean sheets and placebos, it's all I can do to think about such today. I lie — celibacy and a decent cleaner helps.

Tomas    




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« Reply #221 on: August 18, 2008, 01:30:15 PM » by Scott Douglas
the Nocturnal Brilliance of Beethoven


In a frenzied rush through long nights,
candles too quickly burst into morning suns.
Doggedly, dark stars were captured at pen point
and forced into paper cages
to be filed under "C" for
concerto.
I
on the other hand,
was born into a purple haze of rock and roll
where the Stratocaster and Stradivarius
exchange puzzled glances and the car
stereo impetuously tears up the road
behind brilliantly lit
concert halls.


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« Reply #222 on: August 18, 2008, 02:07:05 PM » by Scott Douglas
how to feed the young

My son phoned me today.
The orphaned sparrow chicks
died. We didn't know -
he waited on the other end
of the phone for me
to make it better.
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« Reply #223 on: August 18, 2008, 02:16:20 PM » by Scott Douglas
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— celibacy and a decent cleaner helps.

Tomas    



.



:)
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« Reply #224 on: August 19, 2008, 12:32:00 PM » by Dax








Struldbrugs


morose erudition of teaching methods
handbook and tools

— graveyards —

this a guide to nothing in particular
not many dead souls will pass

— betimes —

impressionistic use of verbs, expressive
discontinuity of syntax, complicated
rhythmical patterns of sentences

— thereupon —

willingly earn the erstwhile respect of fools
destroyers of prohibitions, illusions
Gogol romance, Chekov, Tolstoy in chains

— blandishment —

milestones of psychotic shot
fare no better stake, each blessed heart deserves
say then, to each other

— ad odium —

There are .  .  .
many other secrets of the craft
.  .  .  for the dead to abscond

     

                                                                                                    — Tomas   
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« Reply #225 on: August 19, 2008, 01:38:48 PM » by Dax







fay today


— up to my nuts in water this day. tornado warning till 4pm. which sucks
binmen rush by, sounds of prisa, prisa, prisa, tiny puffs of fukit on the fly
hurricane whiffs hit palms, while tall walls at wal-mart pile empty
shelves upon delivery, short supplies of body wash and other essentials
red cross staff lip-gloss look ready-placed on cameras safe and sound
smart-phone-poised nose-in-ears, "pooling" is the latest buzz word for piss
I smile outside, alone, in the rain and think about Hemmingway in heaven
why, I thought, shoot yourself? silly me, none expects to die and come back
with the right reason why, things just happen to be that way that's all  —


 :)

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« Reply #226 on: August 19, 2008, 01:49:25 PM » by Scott Douglas
hope you see another day
filled with aspirations and lesser struggles
baking in the hot sun deeming hurricanes
a dark mystery lived through without even
a T-shirt for your troubles.
 
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« Reply #227 on: August 19, 2008, 01:55:48 PM » by Scott Douglas
green against bland

boxes huddle as refugees
against extracted value pulled
from the landscape of the common
governmental office complex with conformity
inscrolled as a motto across every square foot
and every round face. the delicious treat
of a colour smuggled under a grayish coat
past security guards and up elevators - I give kudos.
that you, green, not unlike a fine cocoa
from northern Africa that the displaced land
wrestled from the indigenous
should not deter my appreciation of this
delectable flavour.
this land is a calm of boats on a slow stream
heading into a pensioned harbour.
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« Reply #228 on: August 19, 2008, 02:33:31 PM » by Dax








:)


beautiful, beautiful, beautiful
rocking and a rolling, Ski
existential vista mesa

ciao
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« Reply #229 on: August 19, 2008, 03:00:27 PM » by Scott Douglas

such control of the english language
like grabbing the wicked serpent's tail
and writing your name in the sand,
have you.


thank you
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« Reply #230 on: August 20, 2008, 04:40:30 AM » by Dax






fay today


son of a bitch ain't going nowhere fast
canals weep full into no longer shrubs
trees fall come what may and nothing
becomes a foggy swamp that no longer
cares for anyone or anything, gravitas
I now live with stray cats and dogs
found around the only open door in town
the rest lie hid behind fortress stupid
unaware of fish and frogs byways of I-95
my friends eat well, I find, they sleep
as Camus said, to dream before the fall
now all is peace and hell surrounds me
— nothing moves save that infernal fay —



                                          0400 est.
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« Reply #231 on: August 20, 2008, 05:11:54 AM » by Dax








flight of the stormy petrel


beethoven has it down, there scores lie town
a lover back from war, coachman, bruit, ride like hell
devil the knell, ride, ride, fury rattle those bones
shake that bell, horse, let the devil ride well
tonight, all night my friends, we dine in hell
ride, ride, till heavens' gate is but a sadden memory
distant, far, far away a lantern breaks on walls
whores cheer our cold fancy, ride, ride, scoundrel, dogs
let no man spare an innocence, whip while angels hunger



                                                                    — Tomas
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« Reply #232 on: August 20, 2008, 12:30:45 PM » by Scott Douglas





fay today


son of a bitch ain't going nowhere fast
canals weep full into no longer shrubs
trees fall come what may and nothing
becomes a foggy swamp that no longer
cares for anyone or anything, gravitas
I now live with stray cats and dogs
found around the only open door in town
the rest lie hid behind fortress stupid
unaware of fish and frogs byways of I-95
my friends eat well, I find, they sleep
as Camus said, to dream before the fall
now all is peace and hell surrounds me
— nothing moves save that infernal fay —



                                          0400 est.



this is beautiful.

(easy for me to say)

I hope things get back to normal or better soon.

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« Reply #233 on: August 20, 2008, 12:32:54 PM » by Scott Douglas
gravity


I've known a greater god
a more fragrant scent and a softer smile
but your trial means much to me.
I realise your words are not always daggers
but sometimes a child's fascination with boomerangs.

I hover and hope it's not just habit
that pulls me in, although your gravity
has always held to me, attraction.
when we met I saw turmoil
in those dark eyes
as your world
swirled.

you probably wonder why I took flight
around such dangerous pools.
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« Reply #234 on: August 20, 2008, 01:59:28 PM » by Dax







thx, ski

this is good,
more and more bubble,
no in and out
wholeness
poise

x+x

t


fay today with jean-paul satre


parasol of wind and rain, wind and rain
neverending nothingness, relentless miracle
of sadness, tears down littoral shore lines
never mind whose face, claw, night and day
day and night malapropos drops, clouds
redoubt me, I cry inside and out, no there
are no mirrors here, nor pretence, no poet
no clever word that fits this awesome sight
inviting authentic means and end right there
where columbia pictures entertain with black
and whites, edward g stars in the "destroyer"
cheers for more from the national guard, guns
hid low and I guess, most looters have more
savvy than pimp homie missy or face-off storm
— carrousel my deep and lovely fay on and on —


                                                                             1350 est



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« Reply #235 on: August 20, 2008, 02:47:34 PM » by Scott Douglas
glad you're still treading that water.

fay never had such a lover
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« Reply #236 on: August 20, 2008, 08:55:04 PM » by Dax







empty spaces


I imagine picasso prefigures
empty space as much as anyone
in much the same way, I hear
among the poetic silences
BUT

      turn

are you that afraid
now cold stone sober, fuck
the cliché cinnamon smells
sweet nostril pears, words such as

one feels birds are drunk
and face me
no ties


      turn

but I see, you want
the objective monoliths of the past
that now extend, penetrate
completely, this then beyond
more, much more, is this your sequel
to nothing in particular

      turn

flavour the irritating spring 
reserves, talk about its inner functions
ghostly and, if I may
say of that somewhat lethal burn

      turn

say, say what a poem does not, say or filter
once enabled, well I beg an audience
face me, then
    lie still, while I remain cold

who are you really
  and
what did you do
what did you say
  and
what do you think


  .  .  .  face me
still
quite, enough is enough
  write a fine poem
   worship how you want


                                                                                          — Tomas                     
     
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« Reply #237 on: August 22, 2008, 02:40:10 AM » by Dax








dystopian
 pupil



I
— ayes —
grand inquisitors galore
anthrax of excesses are to observe
any evil axis apparent so as not to be seen of course
so as not to concern the elite cursory reference with trivia
save offer credulity an odd smile, or gussie the less well-informed
— as if such methods absolved our prurient inspection by our team of ghosts — 
this is the word of godmanhood lore our saviour monastery optina


                                                                                       — Tomas
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« Reply #238 on: August 22, 2008, 06:15:18 AM » by silent lotus
gravity


I've known a greater god
a more frangrant scent and a softer smile
but your trial means much to me.
I realise your words are not always daggers but
sometimes a child's fascination with boomerangs.

I hover and hope it's not just habit
that pulls me in, although your gravity
has always held to me, attraction.
when we met I saw turmoil
in those dark eyes
as the world
swirled.

you probably wonder why I took flight
around such dangerous pools.

Dear Skaa Dee

Very nice !

silent lotus
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« Reply #239 on: August 22, 2008, 07:14:34 AM » by Dax








smell of carbolic


any life touched by a social worker deserves credit in itself:"vent unto thee their own miserable me." there go the watchwords of anomy and slithers of alienation, and trust. the stuff they never had, or could attain as a child. so now they jump through hoops, leap from boot camp tables and become fledgling probation officers that go unobserved, spy and do other stuff. for the most part, they write hurried trench reports for courts on broken homes and tell kids to seize the day like they did. only they never did kill anyone, not really.

I recall asking a judge what habeas corpus means — but this too, was a plea ignored. the same authorities wanted me to write an entertaining poem. I will if you will, I said. but it doesn't work like that, my anti-social worker insisted. well, fuck you too, a friend piped in. I got locked up, had my mug shot took with the mayor at another banquet for friends of the poor. where he told me he was the real father christmas. on the other hand, save in this case it was his knee, I was the fragrant correction, a case borne carbolic. so was this other way, then, a sick kind of lie? The one I was to mull over later in "no one talks straight spanish to me either" now taken from my own prize-worthy encyclicals .   .   .     
 
                                                                                                         — Tomas
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« Reply #240 on: August 22, 2008, 08:43:45 AM » by Desiree Wright
Scott, 

Enjoyed "Green against Bland".........thank you.  D
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« Reply #241 on: August 24, 2008, 12:10:54 PM » by Scott Douglas

thank you Silent Lotus, Tomas and Desiree.
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« Reply #242 on: August 24, 2008, 12:13:47 PM » by Scott Douglas
crazy busy ...
little league disappointments
parents into generals
dust becomes napalm
bats become silent
survivors party

stag craziness ...
stupid returns
Christan to fornication
big to little
full to empty

dawn to dusk
east to west
sun to moon
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« Reply #243 on: August 24, 2008, 02:22:45 PM » by Scott Douglas
lost but not forgotten tribal patterns
form around a rubber pentagon as
a suited youngster with a bat pounds
the dirt, awaiting the launch.

behind the barriers are seated elders
chanting and prodding with the accumulated
wisdom of war after war and failed attempts
at striking at the world in the million different

ways presented throughout a lifetime.
children ride this emotion in the air and instinctively
lock and load. excited generals ready and rally
the team in formation on the field.  the smack

of the ball sends a missile over the heads of some
and into an open field.  in frenzied panic
the generals and elders goad. the soldier
runs for safety inside enemy territory.
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« Reply #244 on: August 24, 2008, 05:01:10 PM » by Dax








crazy busy ...
little league disappointments
parents into generals
dust becomes napalm
bats become silent
survivors party

stag craziness ...
stupid returns
Christan to fornication
big to little
full to empty

dawn to dusk
east to west
sun to moon



ski

good to have you aboard as the jolly golly unfolds
mirth and mould go hand in hand — err, okay sod it
welcomin' ness bless forninest

tomas
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« Reply #245 on: August 28, 2008, 12:58:55 AM » by Scott Douglas
thanks
good to be back.


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butterflies and prayers


the jingle in my step is not
the coin in my pocket and
is timeless as in only now.

notes surround me in atomic
patterns usually taken only
by butterflies and prayers.

if you see my lips moving
it's not the rant of a madman
but songs rescued from the busy air.

the clang of traffic
and the change of seasons
are nothing more than beats of a drum.

the smile on my face
and the glow in my eyes
is my gift to you.








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« Reply #246 on: August 28, 2008, 06:32:06 AM » by Dax






in dreams, every dawn

petroglyphs, more flaws
the crawl is hard, to tall and bloody
sway heavy palms and heady swords, nuestra
mas, mas señora — los y san, immaculate
man and prefix, don via crucis, delorosa
indri
legions saw no lion or mother roar
for were it not a modest girl, veronica, whose stoop befell
them, all 
a thief, too, by sheer faith did prevail, his quiet
take, this time, no last minute slip, long-gone but not forgotten
chthonic gitano, man on horse
rides wild

HONDO

— of course —




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« Reply #247 on: August 28, 2008, 04:01:38 PM » by Scott Douglas

there


a skeleton
hid in the crawl space
under the stairs where my father
used to keep his fishing rod
and camping gear.

at the
bachelor apartment,
when I needed my own space, across town,
I could hear him there in that broom closet
lapping up light that made its way
under the door.

if you
quickly turn
you can catch a glimpse
of his emaciated body
shyly following.

if only
in the shadows
we did play when
I worked at that music store.
after hours
evening after evening
in the basement.

courageously
his flesh now appears to me
in dreams and is talking like a wise friend
who was always there.
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« Reply #248 on: August 29, 2008, 08:09:22 AM » by Dax







The Comprehensive School


I wander about the practise of using absurd screen names such as "sprinkling" "mak" "turnpike" "hater" and "laser" does anything to preserve the romance of the middle-aged man among such a gang of lying toads — and whether said toads pay for the same distinct sort of piece of mind:

I woke this morning with two poems outlined in my head, one announces, but as usual, will 'procrastinate' till a cow jumps the moon, maybe around noon. Then I'll have sat long enough to get the notion of 'really' out of my head.

Still, toady continues, it gives you the glo-blo to tell us all about the show. You know, the one you missed, had it not been for this clever invitation of yours from home. The one that means, really, 'I am one sad mother sat all alone, with nothing and nowhere to go.' I would, however, really, like to know about the spikes and pricks and kicks — some authentic sign, even if you lie a little.
You could even call it fiction, or somesuch. Imagine the fun of meta-pay-back, and the sheer escape of it all!

You really mean, well, be 'creative' like in books we sometimes look at in shops? That sounds really good advice. I'm sure others will think so, too. I'll ask them later, just in case anyone may think this is some kind of misinformation and dis my last cake recipe. Which anyone is entitled to do, don't get me wrong. Just so long as they really, really have a good mug-shot of me to browse, and 'think of Christmas, suffer neglect, hunger, and tyranny' with such lame quotes in alien tongues that mean anything out of context.

What fantastic news for a hack journalist hard-up for jewels!

I think so, too — it was on the front cover of an old Grub Street mag at the checkout. Anyway, must dash and defer for later — not that choice and deceit has much to say in the matter. Bye. 


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« Reply #249 on: August 29, 2008, 08:33:32 AM » by silent lotus
Well dear Tomas

the front cover of an old Grub Street mag at the checkout.

which publication is that ?

is it fresh ?

or just a recollection of the past ?

or only an opportunity to spike our curiosity ?


silent lotus



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« Reply #250 on: August 29, 2008, 09:52:05 AM » by Dax








My pleasure — Chasan.

I think it could have been a copy of The Sequined Love Nun
one of my black noir redux takes on Parisian chic pauvre
or even one of the latest poetrycircle sex ads for singles
— what Mad Men call, Suck-up crepe de Chine: Alone in Pink.


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« Reply #251 on: August 29, 2008, 09:54:15 AM » by Scott Douglas
I'm pretty sure screen handles are a mask
no different than the anonymity bought into during road rage.
a name is a name and roses and all that but integrity
follows the unknown soldier and is written across his tombstone.
"the Sedition"  involves preservation which will be seen
as selfishness but again by the "other" which can be the "C"
between a journey from "A to B". is it because I see the term
"middle-aged" deeply embedded in this game that
I feel there are enough stars for everyone to follow ?
that said, when given the choice between two things
always take the third. expedience is the conman's Vaseline.
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« Reply #252 on: August 29, 2008, 09:59:04 AM » by silent lotus


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butterflies and prayers


the jingle in my step is not
the coin in my pocket and
is timeless as in only now.

notes surround me in atomic
patterns usually taken only
by butterflies and prayers.

if you see my lips moving
it's not the rant of a madman
but songs rescued from the busy air.

the clang of traffic
and the change of seasons
are nothing more than beats of a drum.

the smile on my face
and the glow in my eyes
is my gift to you.



Dear Skaa Dee

a most wonderful gift this is

thank you for sharing

silent lotus
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« Reply #253 on: August 29, 2008, 10:41:42 AM » by Scott Douglas

you're more than welcome.
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« Reply #254 on: August 29, 2008, 11:50:49 AM » by MichelleBethCronk
lost but not forgotten tribal patterns
form around a rubber pentagon as
a suited youngster with a bat pounds
the dirt awaiting the launch.

behind the fences are seated elders
chanting and prodding with the accumulated
wisdom of war after war and failed attempts
at striking at the world in the million different

ways that we are presented with throughout a lifetime.
children ride the emotion in the air and instinctually
lock in. excited generals ready and rally
the men in formation on the field.  the smack

of the ball sends a missile over the heads of some
and into an open field.  in frenzied panic
the generals and elders lambast. the soldier
runs for safety inside enemy territory.


enjoyed this!

my son played t-ball this last spring and he can't wait to start Farm (machine pitch) next year....lol

xo M
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« Reply #255 on: August 29, 2008, 12:25:23 PM » by Scott Douglas
that's what my little guy plays.
pitch machine.
Highlight of my summer.
it's a learning experience for coaches, parents and players.
 
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« Reply #256 on: August 29, 2008, 01:07:13 PM » by Scott Douglas
I can tell you, I don't talk issues.
not "issues"
those brazen billboards along the highway,
a clear diversion to irrigate cropland
dry as old money.

I'm a refugee by choice.
the city loves sponges not mirrors
and Ed McMahon has my address
in case I should happen to win the big one.
everything else is a neighbour tapping my line
or draining my pool.

don't worry
this house will still be rockin'
with the usual party shenanigans
like octopus lovers in my parents' bed
creating fractal patterns with the sheets
and Led Zeppelin taming the chatter
of a thousand trees falling 
where nobody hears.

so this giant stir frying society,
sizzling every time the pan heats
is not for me. leave me raw.

... but let's, you and me, watch
this humongous ball of salad roll over the edge,

screaming,

"big business
 terrorists
 Ginsu knives".


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« Reply #257 on: August 29, 2008, 04:08:13 PM » by Scott Douglas
embrace the push

stress has a way of pushing the walls
and they give out a creek as if
they never thought they would -
they thought they would be there forever.
don't forget, ever since God said, "let there be light",
nature hates a vacuum.
all sorts of wingless things attempt to fill voids
not unlike pigeons after a french fry.
have you ever noticed neglected bikes
still love being ridden despite rust
or that ice adores spring ?

move.




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« Reply #258 on: September 01, 2008, 12:12:10 AM » by Scott Douglas
a waiting future


the past
could be ropes
flopped into brackish water
gently forgetting
with each nautical mile.

crates
can be pried
and dumped into the sea.

each shoreline would then await
a simple dock.


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« Reply #259 on: September 01, 2008, 11:21:20 PM » by Scott Douglas
maybe you


I was thinking
there is a cove some place
not yet dreamed.

it probably awakes everyday
to the tug of the sun
which drys its tears.

maybe you need someone
like that. your tears fall,
and the sun is not yours.

perhaps your words, too,
are afraid of the dark
and stay silent until morning.

the sun uses tears
to twist animal balloons in the sky.

I was thinking
maybe
you
needed a smile.


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« Reply #260 on: September 02, 2008, 04:05:42 PM » by Scott Douglas
I'm still trying to get this childhood thing down
I'm pretty sure I wasn't abused - no suppressed memories
as far as I know. I come from an over-protective mother
who passed down love, safety and fear and a preoccupied father
who passed down pride, stability and humour.  together
I've become a pampered paranoid, too proud to change
but enjoy the humour of it all.

I've got a date that will end up in bed,
one that I will never be getting out of
and that's if I'm lucky - wishing for one or two more healthy days
to run the fields - swim the locks until the police come.
maybe those bohemians are right - hedonism - now-ism.
but I've tried  that and ended up a confused paranoid, too proud
to ask for help but not too proud to see the humour in it all.

tonight on the way home I may point the bicycle in a different direction
and phone my wife when I get there, poor thing, I've pinned her down
to a boring, stable life of suppressed fears
and she hasn't got half the sense of humour as do I.
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« Reply #261 on: September 03, 2008, 11:18:49 AM » by Scott Douglas
Asian care

wounds were discovered on the Chinese
squash that are growing at the side of the house.
something wild, it seems, also has an appetite 
for this exotic flavour who's seeds, inexplicably,
worked their way here from the other side of the world.
the green and white globes were given a chance, though.
she carefully cut and applied duct tape patches
and lovingly placed each squash on its own bamboo mat.
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« Reply #262 on: September 08, 2008, 03:52:08 PM » by Scott Douglas
jazz
nothing rural
pioneers unfurled
explorers set sail for the shore
jazz is your voice
before it knew words
it's your voice, more surely
than your voice
it broke your silence
before your silence became loud
it's your hope
(stardom, they're all dead and gone)
but hope of this moment
expressed
it's gumbo with what is there
put it all in
blend
it's what comes out the other end.
it's the first thought in the morning before thoughts
remember to be thought
break through the bull
into streets with the running and fleeing
and screaming and piss
it's all there waiting
it's a thousand conversations
as real as just one
it becomes more each day
but it should never have been trapped
with a vinyl spear
because it's in the air
for free.
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« Reply #263 on: September 10, 2008, 02:01:46 PM » by Scott Douglas
you
like many feeling human beings
who value and express creatively
scare me just a bit
so please forgive me my looking-glass thick respect
as I peer through
darkly.
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« Reply #264 on: September 10, 2008, 05:14:44 PM » by Dax









Muddy Waters
by
S. Pimpernel   


There were colleagues and readers who were shocked
by his all encompassing-view of human nature.

He wrote of female homosexuality, transvestites
of priests corrupted by demons, of kitchens sinks
— "truck like that."

In those novels and stories, which seem to retell
his own life, he portrays himself unflatteringly
as the self-centred artistic ruin, yet with a keen
eye for those sufferings and tribulations of others.

This led to the dichotomy between the life his heroes
led and the life they feel they should lead — "drama
in fact, lies all about us in such short-falls."

His themes of witchcraft, mystery and legend draw
not on handy traditional sources that, 'contrast
with a modern and ironic consciousness' but from
within darkened corners and bizarre blind worlds.

You can find him at The Library of America
 — or in exile.




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« Reply #265 on: September 12, 2008, 03:33:18 PM » by Scott Douglas
these are yours

I play life in quarter notes
and rolling slurs on waves of pain
across a field of heat
rising
as if an unearthly dimension 
from the hot, hot ground.
my mirage is a beacon
to the lost in traffic or parched
in Hades seeking an oasis on wetter ground.
it's my sound, which is truth
offered freely, played in whole notes
over lovers and around
empires lost
but essence gained.


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I play life in quarter notes
and rolling slurs on waves
across a field of heat
rising
an unearthly dimension
from the hot, hot ground.

my mirage is a beacon
to the lost in traffic or parched
in Hades seeking an oasis
on wetter ground.

it's my sound
truth
offered freely
played in whole notes
over lovers and around

empires lost
but expression gained.


 
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« Reply #266 on: September 12, 2008, 03:45:21 PM » by Dax


— this is poetry. Well done, Scott. Thank you.
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« Reply #267 on: September 12, 2008, 06:58:01 PM » by Scott Douglas

I'm gonna crack that bottle of wine
and think of you when I drink your portion.

you made my day

thanks
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« Reply #268 on: September 18, 2008, 02:40:28 PM » by Scott Douglas
to liars and tigers everywhere

I plagiarized Shakespeare
but misspelled 2b
and used a Spongebob episode
as the soliloquy
I took my inspiration
from a Beatle's melody
stolen from Dylan
but played in three.

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« Reply #269 on: September 18, 2008, 02:49:32 PM » by Dax



 :D
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« Reply #270 on: September 18, 2008, 02:50:30 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
Double  :D
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« Reply #271 on: September 20, 2008, 08:36:54 AM » by Scott Douglas
hate the title
hate the poem
hate the very thought that someone wasted time
hate the image
as if it mattered
hate the rhythm
thank God no rhyme
but the font
the font
is pretty good


:)
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« Reply #272 on: September 20, 2008, 08:38:37 AM » by Scott Douglas
intoxication for lovers

- a bird's eye view from paradise -

blue jays take that colour
to mate with skies still pure
and thieving, harlot seas

cardinals envy fire
that embraces as it consumes

but the lowly sparrow toils

the meek shall inherit the earth
but to the victor goes the spoils
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« Reply #273 on: September 20, 2008, 10:13:09 AM » by Scott Douglas
don't down the dabbler

covert reason
through overt lies
the sparkling lights
hypnotize
the wild, wild West
waits in trust
sandpipers and whale storms
and pasture filled rage
and gawkers
hold two-by-fours
and swing, baby, swing
don't let go of that
powerful thing
wait in silence
cower in fear
the sounds from my mouth
make rain in Hades
we'll raise these
captives with a clue
as to how to dig
and stroll and wash
we'll give them a clue or two.


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« Reply #274 on: September 20, 2008, 12:33:08 PM » by Dax








Einstein's Crack

English Literature Paper PhD


1

inside me, a lot lies unaccepted, yet I posse
an inner truth, promise to fail better, attend
mass and yip-yogi blow with a rest between stops

11

asked to give a lecture on methodology, a shopping
list of sorts, I wrote: swap this word for secrets
then everyone wakes up, even the Dean
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« Reply #275 on: September 21, 2008, 08:54:14 AM » by Scott Douglas
the wind on the water
and I'm not talking waves.
I paid for chemtrails
in the shape of "Elvis Lives"
but got a mere sonnet.
they're beautiful tonight, though,
against the struggling sun
as the sea monster
in the west, pulls her under.
a real modern version of
Romeo and Juliette
written in cumulus.
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« Reply #276 on: September 21, 2008, 10:04:05 AM » by Dax






— thank you, Scott —


so little of certitude


Sunday morning in the bathhouse, early, not a girl in sight. Still. The sound of a ceaseless fan. Black curtains make fun of the spotlight to my left and right. Yellow paper soak in pools of scribble, red and black and green. My bold as brass uni-balls point nowhere. They seem quite useless without me. They also form the shape of a cross, but such colourful rich gels shall not go there — not today. Logic demands idleness, perversity, and neglect perform a miracle — but then, what does a philistine know .  .  .

The face of Dybbuk in the window looks angry, I say.
— it feels that way too.
Mill and flow, intensity. This is the easy stuff, a few triumphant slips.
— longstanding Slavs, antsy, quips!
Just words — "inkblots."
— and terror lies at the heart of our gothic romance, with its strange odours and tilts.
       


                                                                                                 — Tomas






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« Reply #277 on: September 23, 2008, 03:13:34 PM » by Dax







naked thumbnail pic


would it be okay, do you think
to post a snap of me in the rough
or rather this thing, I call love
— it's quite small and gone wrong

you can even see strips of fibre
glass reinforcement and, near the end
after all these years, has gone black
imagine that before mass, if you dare

                                                                                       — Tomas
 






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« Reply #278 on: September 23, 2008, 04:10:38 PM » by Scott Douglas
we are laid bare in oils
spoken
with each tiny stroke of our mouths
in ways eyes forsook as crass
long before dawn
before man
when birds
still knew the words
the canvass needed no stroke
and stars were unafraid of gawkers.   
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« Reply #279 on: September 23, 2008, 04:11:56 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
A very beautiful poem.
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« Reply #280 on: September 23, 2008, 05:55:03 PM » by Dax


yes, quite beautiful

thx ski
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« Reply #281 on: October 25, 2008, 05:44:37 PM » by Dax










romance in the stones


     if we had only said  .  .  .
our love is more important
than all the plans and promises
and saw falls colour turn to plack
and felt those pleasant days inside
and shared troubles more than most
and held each other day and night
and said to friends another time maybe
and instead of chic chose to kiss
  .  .  .  and never to try again
becomes and this too our biggest folly


                                                — Tomas 






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« Reply #282 on: November 23, 2008, 05:05:26 AM » by Dax










Writing Well


Seduction is not the same lay over and over, but it is to a fly on the wall. You and I need to be medium-intimate, exchange hair-trigger pillow talk, touch, share — such exquisite images. Quite. Words are not enough. At the minute, mere shells. This Hell is complex Heaven.   

Circles!

Imagine you're Alice (a fresh-faced dip recommended), just imagine. Centre. Write from the loins up — let the bells and nods dispel any fears, make things up for fun, whistinkles! Words like disparate may sound clever but are less cunning, love what you hate and hate what you love. See with what you feel — life is like honey with a sick close-encounter. Smile. Weep. Enter. Exit. Hide. Take. Seek, then, such clues to who the how and because as often as you think no. Albeit wasteland or wonderland.

— Always yours!



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« Reply #283 on: November 23, 2008, 06:22:08 AM » by brian_edwards
;)

:o

:)

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« Reply #284 on: December 02, 2008, 04:34:35 AM » by Dax








Grade 2-4


— sir!

water makes us special
lack of water means we die
in droves, good and plenty
is waste and shows talent

— mom said



dr






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« Reply #285 on: December 02, 2008, 11:02:41 AM » by Scott Douglas
you're making me thirsty, man.

:)
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« Reply #286 on: December 02, 2008, 11:03:15 AM » by Scott Douglas
white is all the imagination
the north can muster. the primer
through my window builds and builds
into a nothing crescendo.
what of conifer green like squatters
in the snow. a winter red;
road kill has no season.
blue is a mock hue from an occasional sky
masquerading as a warm. violets, orange,
purple and golds; there are no rainbows now.
only the creative mind sees shades;
grey from black, white from beige, but you
flash skates on the pond with your scarf
in orbit and you in held whirl.
this is only done by one
who knows that white is the colour
that holds them all.
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« Reply #287 on: December 10, 2008, 12:15:00 AM » by Scott Douglas
some poetry
is a secret handshake
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« Reply #288 on: December 10, 2008, 04:34:49 AM » by Dax








:)


tragedian loft, pray a good day
consume not, wallow not the profit
tomorrow may never be the same
consider your idol, your master


march us, then
wind, where no man
leaps, or
willingly
crows, upon high

as cold eyes
when
sick of winter
beg
foreclosure

march us, then
no louder voice
therein lies, are
these rags ill

at ease
amid relics
as I, as we
are not
nor
will ever be

tragedian loft, pray a good day
b ei t quick
— for no one, save me



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« Reply #289 on: December 10, 2008, 10:40:16 AM » by Scott Douglas
I flow where the river flows
without its broader plan;
a busy bricklayer on a stone ark.
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« Reply #290 on: December 24, 2008, 06:48:44 PM » by Dax









  .  .  .  it was fun

                      Happy Xmas
                                          Scott

                                                     ciao
                     
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« Reply #291 on: December 25, 2008, 08:13:44 AM » by silent lotus
I flow where the river flows
without its broader plan;
a busy bricklayer on a stone ark.


Dear SkaaDeee
Nice flow.
silent lotus
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« Reply #292 on: December 26, 2008, 09:46:59 PM » by Scott Douglas
Tomas

I tried to enter your mind
to the point of a plagiarist's pen
and found the harsh energy
that propels.
I arrived as a babe at the doorstep,
this abode took me in,
you were the one that asked,
 "can we keep him ?".


Silent Lotus

you embody subtleness
to the point of formlessness
to me.


I hope you both have a wonderful holiday season.
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« Reply #293 on: December 30, 2008, 11:08:59 PM » by Scott Douglas
your grey is the innocent hush
of a skyline awaking
to its turn beneath the sun.
mist and smoke spurn steam
in the indiscernible grey,
before day.
seen from above, the bay
is a vulnerable calm
and someone in seven-fourteen
has left their porch light on. 
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« Reply #294 on: December 31, 2008, 08:35:38 AM » by silent lotus
your grey is the innocent hush
of a skyline awaking
to its turn beneath the sun.
mist and smoke spurn steam
in the indiscernible grey,
before day.
seen from above, the bay
is a vulnerable calm
and someone in seven-fourteen
has left their porch light on.


Dear Skaa Deeee

Thank you for this little gem !

New Years Eve Smiles
silent lotus
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« Reply #295 on: January 05, 2009, 04:25:43 PM » by Scott Douglas
I hope you had a great holiday season, Silent Lotus
and thanks.


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from me,
lips move while reading.
I'm comic books
and album covers,
book reports with pictures,
information, disinformation
yet I never say die.

the depth and caress of the intricacy of dialect,
guttural lingo, street smart, book dumb
and here I am with a critique
and desire

spill

explode what blocks
disentangle the tangle that runs the body, stuck
like a cardiovascular system in disarray,
red and blue, an electrician's nightmare

the expertise necessary for the crème de la crème
my crude etchings, a travesty
to the ones who have stood before the Taj Mahal of words,
the palace of crystal thought,
a vein of untouched gem stones
and spill their desire
into the inkwell of the writer.
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« Reply #296 on: January 20, 2009, 10:54:23 AM » by Scott Douglas


a new world inauguration


the radio gets me out of bed, effectively.
 
"... and what do you think of the President Elect ?"
"... like, he's totally hot for someone in his forties."

It's a brand new day.





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« Reply #297 on: January 22, 2009, 10:37:57 AM » by Scott Douglas
dead roses on the kitchen counter
she should have asked for more
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