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  Re: man and horse
« Reply #15 on: March 19, 2008, 05:37:05 PM » by milner place
Have the idea this will be a 3 or 4 parter - how's it going? Please.

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  Re: man and horse 1-4
« Reply #16 on: March 19, 2008, 06:57:16 PM » by milner place
Ignore that last, except for the 'please'. Think I've about nailed it.

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- Antonio Machado

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  Re: man and horse 1-4
« Reply #17 on: March 19, 2008, 08:07:15 PM » by Dale McLain
Milner~ I like work that transports and this poem certainly fits the bill. I wouldn't change a word.
take care~dale
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« Reply #18 on: March 19, 2008, 10:00:27 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Wow!  I like how this has all come together.  I especially like the description of what happens when the fish leaps.  Some wonderful writing in here!  I stayed on the whole time and didn't get bucked off.

Rick
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  Re: man and horse 1-4
« Reply #19 on: March 20, 2008, 05:21:13 AM » by milner place
Climbed the stairs to bed happy, Dale, last night, after reading your comment. Thanks for the nightcap.

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- Antonio Machado

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  Re: man and horse 1-4
« Reply #20 on: March 20, 2008, 08:15:56 AM » by milner place
Thanks, Rick, no saddle sores either, I trust.

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'Caminante, no hay camino,
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- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com
  Re: man and horse 1-4
« Reply #21 on: March 20, 2008, 07:03:01 PM » by milner place
Just touched up the no 1. Think that'll do it.

Cheers

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'Caminante, no hay camino,
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- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com
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