Re: A Farewell To A Farm Cat
« Reply #15 on: December 14, 2007, 11:57:28 PM » by Jonathan Bracker
The writing is very fine and every word well chosen but I had some difficulty because I wanted to know why you are leaving (that is, I wanted you to tell the cat that or say to it why you couldn't explain) and I didn't entirely get it when you told the cat what to do, whereas the idea seems to be that the cat will be afraid -- and I don't think you reassure it. And I'm not sure why a cat would need to be told to remember a favorite spot. So...there is a great deal of mystery here for me, which I cannot demystify by rereading the poem. Finally I wondeer: is this a poem which wants to be about you, or about the cat, or both? Funny, the writing is so very appealing and yet I did have problems with it. I hope I have expressed this reaction with tact.
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