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  Re: continuance - clarified
« Reply #15 on: January 28, 2012, 01:30:45 PM » by Roger Fizzerton
Casey

Yes Casey, one blabber is just right!  Thanks for your comments that help me sort out the ambiguities in the ending - it was a classic case of hearing something in your head one way, and not realizing how it works when somebody else reads it. Glad no one will think that I want to do violence to people moving home anymore!

Roger   
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  Re: continuance - clarified
« Reply #16 on: January 28, 2012, 01:37:57 PM » by Roger Fizzerton
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Thanks for having a look - as to re-formating, as Casey says, it's in that form as it represents the blabber/rant nature of the content. It was written extemporaneously - and the form just flowed from that, but I feel it works well for this piece.

Roger


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