PoetryCircle
Contemporary
Poetry
Forum
Welcome,
Guest
. Please
login
or
register
.
«
PoetryCircle
•
The Writing
•
Submit your poetry
• Topic:
continuance - clarified
»
Thread
Tools
Print
(Read 986 times)
1
[
2
]
All
Re: continuance - clarified
«
Reply #15 on:
January 28, 2012, 01:30:45 PM »
by
Roger Fizzerton
Casey
Yes Casey, one blabber is just right! Thanks for your comments that help me sort out the ambiguities in the ending - it was a classic case of hearing something in your head one way, and not realizing how it works when somebody else reads it. Glad no one will think that I want to do violence to people moving home anymore!
Roger
Logged
Patience is a virtue, they say - but then I never claimed to be virtuous!
Re: continuance - clarified
«
Reply #16 on:
January 28, 2012, 01:37:57 PM »
by
Roger Fizzerton
D
Thanks for having a look - as to re-formating, as Casey says, it's in that form as it represents the blabber/rant nature of the content. It was written extemporaneously - and the form just flowed from that, but I feel it works well for this piece.
Roger
Logged
Patience is a virtue, they say - but then I never claimed to be virtuous!
(Read 986 times)
1
[
2
]
All
Jump to:
Please select a destination:
-----------------------------
The Writing
-----------------------------
=> Editors' picks
=> Submit your poetry
=> Submit your prose
=> Challenges
=> Journalese
=> Front page
===> Front page archive
===> Archive 2010
===> - Archive 2011
-----------------------------
The Community
-----------------------------
=> Introductions
=> Discussions
=> Off topic
=> Interviews
=> Sights and sounds
=> Notices
-----------------------------
The Site
-----------------------------
=> Editors
=> Questions
Member
Tools
Home
Help
Calendar
Members List
Statistics
Login
Register
Latest
News
Get PoetryCircle on your smartphone or tablet.
Site
Stats
191339
Posts
18135
Topics
1518
Members
Latest Member:
William F Dougherty
Support PoetryCircle
PoetryCircle | Powered by
SMF 1.1.15
.
© 2005,
Simple Machines
. All Rights Reserved.
Simplicity
design by
BlocWeb