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Bright Red Flag
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January 18, 2012, 07:58:23 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
Single cells
reproduce by budding—
offspring cells
that break off
and live independently.
The first step
of evolving into
multicellular organisms
is offspring
that don't separate.
Consider this
a bright red flag
for doting parents
who permit the children
to return home
after university
because temporary
economic conditions
make independent
living difficult.
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January 18, 2012, 08:02:59 PM »
by
Lavonne Westbrooks
This sticks a knife in my craw. Not because it is to difficult to accept but because it is all too true. You have a way of defining an issue Tom.
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January 18, 2012, 08:05:46 PM »
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Tom Riordan
Lavonne, thank you, I'm glad it meant something to you (not necessarily a knife in the craw, though).
Some of my best friends are multicellular. LOL. Tom
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January 19, 2012, 03:37:03 AM »
by
Sue Lozynskyj
Lovely Tom. The title made this the first read of the morning for me. No nits yet, but i'll be back!
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January 19, 2012, 07:44:48 AM »
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Tom Riordan
Thanks, Sue.
Look forward to the nits! Tom
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January 19, 2012, 07:59:14 AM »
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Roger Fizzerton
Tom,
Very nicely done - somehow, an image of a basking shark - mouth open - springs to mind. Personally, one of my greatest hopes is to host one, just to watch it swim past my armchair now and then - quite a bargain for the price of a little krill!
Roger
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Reply #6 on:
January 19, 2012, 09:38:44 AM »
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Tom Riordan
If I understand your statement correctly, Roger...you a one evil mo'fo! Tom
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January 19, 2012, 10:26:19 AM »
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Roger Fizzerton
Tom,
LOL!
No, I think we must be at cross purposes (or should that be cross porpoises?) - all I meant is that I hope my son
does
come back home after university!
(I meant to say 'bargain for
a
little krill', BTW)
Regards,
Roger
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January 19, 2012, 10:45:29 AM »
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Tom Riordan
Oh, then it's me who's evilminded. I thought the shark was there to vacuum off the krilldren!
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January 19, 2012, 11:00:20 AM »
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Roger Fizzerton
Krilldren !! I'm sat in the canteen, now people think I've blown a fuse laughing!
Roger
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January 19, 2012, 11:21:01 AM »
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Tom Riordan
How's that meat pie & beans, though?
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January 19, 2012, 11:51:38 AM »
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Roger Fizzerton
Ha! Being a good boy now - back on salad sandwiches again!
Roger
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January 19, 2012, 12:59:29 PM »
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milner place
How this grew scales is creepy, Tom. Very sharp and provoking. Excellent.
milner
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January 19, 2012, 01:05:04 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
Thanks for looking in, Milner.
Listen, I have to get all my creepiness exercised before the kids & wife get home!
Tom
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January 20, 2012, 04:14:01 PM »
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Michael Ashley
Oooo biology, I like biology... it is the title of my favorite Girls Aloud song. Haha!
Sociology is my passion though - a nice blend here
Enjoyed this Tom.
Mike
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