dear Tiko & Milner

many thankyuuus
silent lotus


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wow! congratulations
well deserved, silent!
pleased to see this on the Front Page


Stella




Stella

dear Michael

laughter is certainly a sharp instrument


many many thankyuuus

silent lotus


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dear Pam

i shall never inquire as to how blood thirsty your dreams have really been.

silent lotus

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dear Lavonne

thank you for the read and warm words


silent lotus


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dear DeeDar

glad it went so far

for you


many thankyuuuus
silent lotus

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perhaps the circumcision was what the editor did to her work ?

and maybe Rick is right it is time for more blue ink rather than red


thanks for looking in Rashmi


silent lotus

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Definitely! And the debate over the merits of circumcision echoes the pros and cons of so many editing suggestions.

dear Stella

it does me good to know this reached your doorstep and passed the morning coffee quiz


smiles
silent lotus


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should perhaps the Workshop category on all poetry forums be re named Circumcision ?


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silent all apologies for arriving late to the party.  i never grade in red as they say it draws attention to all the wrong parts and shatters confidence.  if only editors were as considerate!  but then again, there's something to be said for a woman's number written in corvette red lipstick.  lawrence