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demagnetized
« on: January 06, 2012, 09:17:30 AM » by StellaR

perhaps it signalled
an impending
polar switch

inexplicably,
she found
her intentions
redirected,
north to south,

her equator
frozen

Stella Read
January 7, 2012

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2012, 09:19:47 AM » by James Carver

much enjoyed stella
even our best intentions seems to come back and bite us in the you know what

all the best

james

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2012, 09:32:02 AM » by Tom Riordan

Quote from: StellaR on January 06, 2012, 09:17:30 AM

perhaps it signalled
an impending
polar switch

inexplicably,
she found
her intentions
redirected,
north to south,

her equator
frozen

Like this, Stella! Vividly evocative. Tom

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« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2012, 10:25:06 AM » by wkamen

I really like this

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2012, 01:12:53 PM » by Casey Powers

Very cleverly done and unique. I like this.

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Casey Powers

Re: demagnetized
« Reply #5 on: January 08, 2012, 08:37:22 AM » by StellaR

thank you, James. pleased you enjoyed

merci, Tom. appreciated.

thanks for looking in, wk.

Casey, thank you!

Stella

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #6 on: January 08, 2012, 01:15:39 PM » by Tiko Lewis

this is a pick for me,
Stella! nicely done.

tiko

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #7 on: January 08, 2012, 06:36:58 PM » by Rick Stansberger

Nice one, Stella. It's hard to do extended meta4s, and you pull it off skillfully.

Rick

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #8 on: January 09, 2012, 10:08:15 AM » by silent lotus

dear Stella

i like the universal macro / micro association here

another StellaR read !

silent lotus

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #9 on: January 09, 2012, 12:26:59 PM » by Rohith

"her equator
frozen "

love this part :)

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #10 on: January 10, 2012, 08:45:30 PM » by StellaR

well thank you, tiko!!

Rick, I really appreciate those words. thanks!

very kind of you, silent

pleased you enjoyed, Rohith!

Stella

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« Reply #11 on: January 12, 2012, 06:24:09 PM » by Tiko Lewis

congrats, Stella.

tiko

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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

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« Reply #12 on: January 12, 2012, 07:13:37 PM » by Tom Riordan

and from me too, Stella! Tom

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #13 on: January 13, 2012, 02:06:40 AM » by Roger Fizzerton

Stella,

Many congrats, and as silent says, I find the global/personsal scale is very fine.

Roger

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Re: demagnetized
« Reply #14 on: January 13, 2012, 06:21:28 AM » by milner place

Bravo, Stella.

milner

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