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  Re: where they grow the weed,
« Reply #15 on: December 11, 2011, 12:32:49 PM » by Tom Riordan
Lawrence, good to see you in the neighborhood! Thanks for the good word.
The Greek Dope Board paid me for this one.
Tom
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  Re: where they grow the weed,
« Reply #16 on: December 11, 2011, 01:28:09 PM » by silent lotus

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  Re: where they grow the weed,
« Reply #17 on: December 12, 2011, 06:34:37 PM » by Brendan Christopher
tom,

 this one sings...terrific work.....
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  Re: where they grow the weed,
« Reply #18 on: December 12, 2011, 06:56:59 PM » by Tom Riordan
Silent & Brendan thank you. Tom
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  Re: where they grow the weed,
« Reply #19 on: January 08, 2012, 06:44:15 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Very nice imagist piece.  Reminds me a little of the best of James Wright.

Rick
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  Re: where they grow the weed,
« Reply #20 on: January 08, 2012, 08:36:10 PM » by Tom Riordan
Thanks, Rick! I gotta figure being a little like his best is better than being a lot like his worst!
What's a favorite.
Here's one I like:

The Secret of Light    

I am sitting contented and alone in a little park near the Palazzo Scaligere in Verona, glimpsing the mists of early autumn as they shift and fade among the pines and city battlements on the hills above the river Adige.

The river has recovered from this morning's rainfall. It is now restoring to its shapely body its own secret light, a color of faintly cloudy green and pearl.

Directly in front of my bench, perhaps thirty yards away from me, there is a startling woman. Her hair is black as the inmost secret of light in a perfectly cut diamond, a perilous black, a secret light that must have been studied for many years before the anxious and disciplined craftsman could achieve the necessary balance between courage and skill to stroke the strange stone and take the one chance he would ever have to bring that secret to light.

While I was trying to compose the preceding sentence, the woman rose from her park bench and walked away. I am afraid her secret might never come to light in my lifetime. But my lifetime is not the only one. I will never see her again. I hope she brings some other man's secret face to light, as somebody brought mine. I am startled to discover that I am not afraid. I am free to give a blessing out of my silence into that woman's black hair. I trust her to go on living. I believe in her black hair, her diamond that is still asleep. I would close my eyes to daydream about her. But those silent companions who watch over me from the insides of my eyelids are too brilliant for me to meet face to face.

The very emptiness of the park bench in front of mine is what makes me happy. Somewhere else in Verona at just this moment, a woman is sitting or walking or standing still upright. Surely two careful and accurate hands, total strangers to me, measure the invisible idea of the secret vein in her hair. They are waiting patiently until they know what they alone can ever know: that time when her life will pause in mid-flight for a split second. The hands will touch her black hair very gently. A wind off the river Adige will flutter past her. She will turn around, smile a welcome, and place a flawless and fully formed Italian daybreak into the hands.

I don't have any idea what his face will look like. The light still hidden inside his body is no business of mine. I am happy enough to sit in this park alone now. I turn my own face toward the river Adige. A little wind flutters off the water and brushes past me and returns.

It is all right with me to know that my life is only one life. I feel like the light of the river Adige.

By this time, we are both an open secret.
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  Re: where they grow the weed,
« Reply #21 on: January 08, 2012, 09:50:33 PM » by Rick Stansberger
A good one, Tom  but a little thinky for my taste.  Here's my favorite of his:

Lying in a Hammock at William Duffy’s Farm in Pine Island, Minnesota

 
Over my head, I see the bronze butterfly,   
Asleep on the black trunk,
Blowing like a leaf in green shadow.   
Down the ravine behind the empty house,   
The cowbells follow one another   
Into the distances of the afternoon.   
To my right,
In a field of sunlight between two pines,   
The droppings of last year’s horses   
Blaze up into golden stones.
I lean back, as the evening darkens and comes on.   
A chicken hawk floats over, looking for home.
I have wasted my life.
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  Re: where they grow the weed,
« Reply #22 on: January 08, 2012, 10:33:12 PM » by Tom Riordan
I copied it and pasted it onto a page alongside Rilke's "Archaic Torso of Apollo" but accidentally put the wrong title to each. Interesting! - Tom
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