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  Re: BottleTops & Ashtrays
« Reply #15 on: December 03, 2011, 03:00:34 AM » by Tiko Lewis
the last stanza is
so lovely.

tiko
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« Reply #16 on: December 05, 2011, 12:04:33 PM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Tiko Lewis on December 03, 2011, 03:00:34 AM
the last stanza is
so lovely.

tiko

dear Tiko

thanks for letting me know this one resonated

a warm smile
silent lotus

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  Re: BottleTops & Ashtrays
« Reply #17 on: December 05, 2011, 03:01:49 PM » by Stewart Grant
Silent--Each of your pieces are ones I can continually come back to and each time I find a new meaning or layer in them. This one, for me, captures the uncertainty of life as a positive and moving facet of existence. It reminds us of how small and fragile we are without making us feel bad about it. Much enjoyed.
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« Reply #18 on: December 07, 2011, 11:05:26 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Stewart Grant on December 05, 2011, 03:01:49 PM

Silent--Each of your pieces are ones I can continually come back to and each time I find a new meaning or layer in them.

This one, for me, captures the uncertainty of life as a positive and moving facet of existence.

It reminds us of how small and fragile we are without making us feel bad about it.

Much enjoyed.

dear Stewart

i am truly grateful for you kindness of reply
it brings sunshine to a rainy day.

silent lotus

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  Re: BottleTops & Ashtrays
« Reply #19 on: December 07, 2011, 12:56:25 PM » by StellaR


your work has a restorative quality, silent.

Stella
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« Reply #20 on: December 09, 2011, 11:24:11 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: StellaR on December 07, 2011, 12:56:25 PM

your work has a restorative quality, silent.

Stella

dear Stella

thank you for your sunshine !

silent lotus

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  Re: BottleTops & Ashtrays
« Reply #21 on: December 13, 2011, 09:37:35 AM » by Tom Riordan
to picks. Tom
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« Reply #22 on: December 17, 2011, 08:18:30 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Tom Riordan on December 13, 2011, 09:37:35 AM
to picks. Tom

dear Tom

thank you , thank you thank U

silent lotus

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