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BottleTops & Ashtrays
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November 19, 2011, 01:07:40 PM »
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silent lotus
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November 19, 2011, 01:18:33 PM »
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Tom Riordan
Nice, Silent! Like this. Tom
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November 20, 2011, 06:49:17 AM »
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silent lotus
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dear Tom
the autodidactic art of being
is indeed a multidimensional universe of innocence
it does me good to hear this poem spoke so well to you.
a warm smile
silent lotus
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November 22, 2011, 07:44:02 AM »
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silent lotus
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some interesting
Outsider Art
http://www.avam.org/stuff-everyone-asks/what-is-visionary-art.shtml
Like love, you know it when you see it.
But here's the longer definition, straight out of our Mission Statement:
"Visionary art as defined for the purposes of the
American Visionary Art Museum
refers to art produced by self-taught individuals,
usually without formal training, whose works arise from an innate personal vision that revels foremost in the creative act itself."
In short, visionary art begins by listening to the inner voices of the soul, and often may not even be thought of as 'art' by its creator.
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November 22, 2011, 11:46:36 AM »
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Ross Johnson
the last s in very nice SL, nice read.
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November 23, 2011, 07:55:28 AM »
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Roger Fizzerton
Hi Silent,
Really like this, but dont quite no why - which is great.
Regards,
Roger
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Patience is a virtue, they say - but then I never claimed to be virtuous!
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November 23, 2011, 09:43:31 AM »
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milner place
Very, very fine, SL.
milner
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November 23, 2011, 01:01:19 PM »
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Peter R
Enjoyed this, Silent. I love the title & how it re-illuminates the last stanza too. Should it be
when
rather than
where
the weather report
or is it just me?
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November 23, 2011, 08:46:09 PM »
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Rohith
I like it.
"There were years
where the weather report
was enigmatic."
These lines took me to the point where you are saying. And then the remaining process continued. Good one. I like the process.
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November 24, 2011, 01:50:18 PM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: Ross Johnson on November 22, 2011, 11:46:36 AM
the last s in very nice SL, nice read.
dear Ross
glad to hear this reached your north sea island
with fair winds.
many many thankyuuus
silent lotus
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November 24, 2011, 11:18:00 PM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: Roger Fenton on November 23, 2011, 07:55:28 AM
Hi Silent,
Really like this, but dont quite no why - which is great.
Regards,
Roger
dear Roger
not knowing why is a wonderful knowing.
many thankyuuus
silent lotus
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November 24, 2011, 11:42:33 PM »
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Peter R
Re-reading, I'm being a pedant (erroneous one too :)) with the when/where thing. I'm realising, of course, one can mean years as a place in the sense of looking back over a life, a diary etc. A timescape. And you having used
when
in the later stanza, it gives it a nice variety with the
when
&
where.
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November 26, 2011, 08:19:28 AM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: milner place on November 23, 2011, 09:43:31 AM
Very, very fine, SL.
milner
dear Milner
it does me good to feel that you share in this one.
a warm smile
silent lotus
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November 29, 2011, 07:51:17 AM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: Peter R on November 24, 2011, 11:42:33 PM
Re-reading, I'm being a pedant (erroneous one too :)) with the when/where thing. I'm realising, of course, one can mean years as a place in the sense of looking back over a life, a diary etc. A timescape. And you having used
when
in the later stanza, it gives it a nice variety with the
when
&
where.
dear Peter
i am grateful for your coming back to visit and for your kindness
of such thoughtful reply, i am appreciative for your sharing of the possibilities
of perspectives.
many many thankyuuus as it is certainly not always just only one way or the other.
a warm smile
silent lotus
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November 30, 2011, 06:06:21 PM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: Rohith on November 23, 2011, 08:46:09 PM
I like it.
"There were years
where the weather report
was enigmatic."
These lines took me to the point where you are saying. And then the remaining process continued.
Good one.
I like the process.
dear Rohith
process is an interesting phenomena that remains
something or other
to all of us
and is as freeing as we let it be.
thank you for looking in and sharing
silent lotus
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December 03, 2011, 03:00:34 AM »
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Tiko Lewis
the last stanza is
so lovely.
tiko
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December 05, 2011, 12:04:33 PM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: Tiko Lewis on December 03, 2011, 03:00:34 AM
the last stanza is
so lovely.
tiko
dear Tiko
thanks for letting me know this one resonated
a warm smile
silent lotus
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December 05, 2011, 03:01:49 PM »
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Stewart Grant
Silent--Each of your pieces are ones I can continually come back to and each time I find a new meaning or layer in them. This one, for me, captures the uncertainty of life as a positive and moving facet of existence. It reminds us of how small and fragile we are without making us feel bad about it. Much enjoyed.
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December 07, 2011, 11:05:26 AM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: Stewart Grant on December 05, 2011, 03:01:49 PM
Silent--Each of your pieces are ones I can continually come back to and each time I find a new meaning or layer in them.
This one, for me, captures the uncertainty of life as a positive and moving facet of existence.
It reminds us of how small and fragile we are without making us feel bad about it.
Much enjoyed.
dear Stewart
i am truly grateful for you kindness of reply
it brings sunshine to a rainy day.
silent lotus
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December 07, 2011, 12:56:25 PM »
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StellaR
your work has a restorative quality, silent.
Stella
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December 09, 2011, 11:24:11 AM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: StellaR on December 07, 2011, 12:56:25 PM
your work has a restorative quality, silent.
Stella
dear Stella
thank you for your sunshine !
silent lotus
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December 13, 2011, 09:37:35 AM »
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Tom Riordan
to picks. Tom
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December 17, 2011, 08:18:30 AM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: Tom Riordan on December 13, 2011, 09:37:35 AM
to picks. Tom
dear Tom
thank you , thank you thank U
silent lotus
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