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  it’s all downhill
« on: November 13, 2011, 10:51:16 AM » by milner place

from here
said josh

draining
the last drops
from his pint
in the scar top inn

too true
joe flaherty agreed
there’s just

the angel
farmer’s arms
blue bell
calf’s head
red lion
then
the wharf



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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com

  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #1 on: November 13, 2011, 10:56:33 AM » by R Raymond
Liking the rebirth of Joe here milner.
I presume those are ales and libations in the last stanza. Maybe pubs. My google-fu wasn't that sharp this morning.

Nice.
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  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #2 on: November 13, 2011, 11:50:07 AM » by Tom Riordan
from here
said josh

draining
the last drops
from his pint

too true
joe flaherty agreed
there’s just

the angel
farmer’s arms
blue bell
calf’s head
red lion
then
the wharf
The surface simplicity forces me to think, Milner, about how Joe's to-do list slows down and enlivens his downward progress, as compared to Josh's. Tom
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  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #3 on: November 13, 2011, 02:10:07 PM » by Roger Fizzerton
Hi Milner,

I get a wonderful feel of a dry, gritty, taciturn wit, delivered beetween mouthfulls of beer - probably in a Yorkshire accent!

Very very nice - I can see the whole scene so vividly, smell the beer on soggy bar towels, the card of KP nuts behind the bar - lovely.

Regards,

Roger
   
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Patience is a virtue, they say - but then I never claimed to be virtuous!

  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #4 on: November 14, 2011, 12:31:43 AM » by Matt Masley
i like this a lot. the last S comes off as a tried and true plan that's worked on more than one occasion.  hope i got it right.
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  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #5 on: November 14, 2011, 11:25:21 AM » by milner place
Pubs, Rob. Ta.

These two do meet from time to time for a jar or more, Tom, taking some pleasure from their differences.

Right on, Roger.

Yep, Matt.

Thanks to you all.

milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com

  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #6 on: November 14, 2011, 11:57:15 AM » by Tiko Lewis
what a list of bars!!!!
great concept.  enjoyed.

tiko
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #7 on: November 14, 2011, 12:50:50 PM » by milner place
Thanks, Tiko. Just added another one in S2 to say where they're at.

Cheers

milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com

  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #8 on: November 17, 2011, 05:15:50 PM » by Tom Riordan
puts the pubs in a good progression altitude-wise.
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  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #9 on: November 17, 2011, 06:35:32 PM » by Peter R
This is an absolute delight. 
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  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #10 on: November 18, 2011, 05:43:26 PM » by Michael Ashley
And by the time you get to the top you will be well and truly pished!! Loving this on Milner.
Mike
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  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #11 on: November 19, 2011, 08:55:12 AM » by milner place
Thanks, Tom, Peter, Michael. Pity I couldn't keep up with these two these days.

milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com

  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #12 on: November 19, 2011, 12:21:24 PM » by MichelleBethCronk
Very much enjoyed Milner - M
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  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #13 on: November 21, 2011, 05:48:29 PM » by milner place
Thanks, Michelle, your approval is well received in the Scar Top Inn.

milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com

  Re: it’s all downhill
« Reply #14 on: November 29, 2011, 03:14:53 PM » by Tom Riordan
to picks. Tom
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