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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #15 on: October 29, 2011, 02:42:53 PM » by Tom Riordan

But only God can effect a leaf.

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #16 on: October 29, 2011, 02:43:13 PM » by R Raymond

or a writer...

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #17 on: November 01, 2011, 06:54:31 AM » by Pam Scobie

Lovely. Particularly liked the curve of the curtains stanza. Pam

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #18 on: November 01, 2011, 01:16:00 PM » by silent lotus

Quote from: milner place on October 29, 2011, 08:45:23 AM

Classic, SL.

milner

dear Milner

it does me good to know you had the energy
to get out of bed and sneak around in some poetry

thanks for your kind words

and i hope you will be feeling up to snuff again soon

a warm smile
silent lotus

~

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #19 on: November 02, 2011, 02:53:43 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: R L Raymond on October 29, 2011, 08:50:28 AM

Add me to the list of fans SL, and THIS is a canvas for sure. Great one.

dear Rob

many many gesso smiles

silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #20 on: November 06, 2011, 05:10:39 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Michael Ashley on October 29, 2011, 01:28:20 PM

Yummy

dear Michael

a tasty thankyuuuu

silent lotus

~

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #21 on: November 07, 2011, 01:58:33 AM » by silent lotus

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Lovely. Particularly liked the curve of the curtains stanza. Pam[/b]

dear Pam

indeed the breeze and what half open curtains hold in or reveal

and my thanks for looking in and commenting on the poem.

smiles

silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #22 on: November 16, 2011, 07:09:14 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: StellaR on October 26, 2011, 03:23:33 PM

I sense dark vapours here. perhaps I should revisit this piece tomorrow

Stell

dear Stella

wondering if the darkness has risen for you on a second visit.

smiles
silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #23 on: November 16, 2011, 11:37:40 AM » by Lynn Doiron

Reads like a portrait by one of the Masters. Final S works really well for this reader, including the uneven line breaks and spacing which add to the content of that S.

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #24 on: November 29, 2011, 01:29:58 PM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Lynn Doiron on November 16, 2011, 11:37:40 AM

Reads like a portrait by one of the Masters.

Final S works really well for this reader,
including the uneven line breaks and spacing which add to the content of that S.

dear Lynn

one could not wish for a finer gift.

a warm smile
silent lotus

~

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