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Without A Word
« on: October 25, 2011, 01:49:10 AM » by silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #1 on: October 25, 2011, 08:12:53 AM » by Tom Riordan

How the heck do you come up with these, Silent?
Enjoyed very much. Tom

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #2 on: October 25, 2011, 11:04:45 AM » by Sharon Leigh

This is such a treat! Lovely.

Best,
Sharon

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #3 on: October 25, 2011, 11:08:00 AM » by Tiko Lewis

last stanza is an excellent close
to this, Silent Lotus.

well done!!!

tiko

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #4 on: October 26, 2011, 03:14:31 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Tom Riordan on October 25, 2011, 08:12:53 AM

How the heck do you come up with these, Silent?
Enjoyed very much. Tom

dear Tom

thank you !

a life of wandering
is about as close as i can get to quoting a source from where these have arrived.

in any case you can certainly bet your NJ Tax dollars it did not come from a state paid helicopter ride with Chris Christie
to watch his kid play little league baseball.

smiles from the land of windmills

silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #5 on: October 26, 2011, 03:23:33 PM » by StellaR

I sense dark vapours here. perhaps I should revisit this piece tomorrow

Stell

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #6 on: October 29, 2011, 03:11:37 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Sharon Leigh on October 25, 2011, 11:04:45 AM

This is such a treat! Lovely.

Best,
Sharon

dear Sharon

glad to know this was served up so well.

many thankyuuus
silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #7 on: October 29, 2011, 08:45:23 AM » by milner place

Classic, SL.

milner

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #8 on: October 29, 2011, 08:50:28 AM » by R Raymond

Add me to the list of fans SL, and THIS is a canvas for sure. Great one.

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #9 on: October 29, 2011, 01:28:20 PM » by Michael Ashley

Yummy

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #10 on: October 29, 2011, 01:37:14 PM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Tiko Lewis on October 25, 2011, 11:08:00 AM

last stanza is an excellent close
to this, Silent Lotus.

well done!!!

tiko

dear Tiko

glad to hear the sleeves revealed themselves so well.

many thankyuuus

silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #11 on: October 29, 2011, 01:38:21 PM » by Tom Riordan

In S3, do you mean "affected" or "effected," Silent? Have a niggle that it may be "a-" but not sure. Tom

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #12 on: October 29, 2011, 02:11:31 PM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Tom Riordan on October 29, 2011, 01:38:21 PM

In S3, do you mean "affected" or "effected," Silent? Have a niggle that it may be "a-" but not sure. Tom

dear Tom

thank you ........change has been made !

and hope there won't be too much snow tonight in NJ

silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #13 on: October 29, 2011, 02:16:16 PM » by Tom Riordan

to Picks.

ice laden tree branches dropping like huge flies...

Tom

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #14 on: October 29, 2011, 02:39:22 PM » by R Raymond

Wasn't sure about affected, but one can effect change...

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #15 on: October 29, 2011, 02:42:53 PM » by Tom Riordan

But only God can effect a leaf.

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #16 on: October 29, 2011, 02:43:13 PM » by R Raymond

or a writer...

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #17 on: November 01, 2011, 06:54:31 AM » by Pam Scobie

Lovely. Particularly liked the curve of the curtains stanza. Pam

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #18 on: November 01, 2011, 01:16:00 PM » by silent lotus

Quote from: milner place on October 29, 2011, 08:45:23 AM

Classic, SL.

milner

dear Milner

it does me good to know you had the energy
to get out of bed and sneak around in some poetry

thanks for your kind words

and i hope you will be feeling up to snuff again soon

a warm smile
silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #19 on: November 02, 2011, 02:53:43 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: R L Raymond on October 29, 2011, 08:50:28 AM

Add me to the list of fans SL, and THIS is a canvas for sure. Great one.

dear Rob

many many gesso smiles

silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #20 on: November 06, 2011, 05:10:39 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Michael Ashley on October 29, 2011, 01:28:20 PM

Yummy

dear Michael

a tasty thankyuuuu

silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #21 on: November 07, 2011, 01:58:33 AM » by silent lotus

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Lovely. Particularly liked the curve of the curtains stanza. Pam[/b]

dear Pam

indeed the breeze and what half open curtains hold in or reveal

and my thanks for looking in and commenting on the poem.

smiles

silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #22 on: November 16, 2011, 07:09:14 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: StellaR on October 26, 2011, 03:23:33 PM

I sense dark vapours here. perhaps I should revisit this piece tomorrow

Stell

dear Stella

wondering if the darkness has risen for you on a second visit.

smiles
silent lotus

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #23 on: November 16, 2011, 11:37:40 AM » by Lynn Doiron

Reads like a portrait by one of the Masters. Final S works really well for this reader, including the uneven line breaks and spacing which add to the content of that S.

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Re: Without A Word
« Reply #24 on: November 29, 2011, 01:29:58 PM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Lynn Doiron on November 16, 2011, 11:37:40 AM

Reads like a portrait by one of the Masters.

Final S works really well for this reader,
including the uneven line breaks and spacing which add to the content of that S.

dear Lynn

one could not wish for a finer gift.

a warm smile
silent lotus

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