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  Without A Word
« on: October 25, 2011, 01:49:10 AM » by silent lotus
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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #1 on: October 25, 2011, 08:12:53 AM » by Tom Riordan
How the heck do you come up with these, Silent?
Enjoyed very much. Tom
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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #2 on: October 25, 2011, 11:04:45 AM » by Sharon Leigh
This is such a treat! Lovely.

Best,
Sharon
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"Maybe it's what we don't say/that saves us..."
-Dorianne Laux

  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #3 on: October 25, 2011, 11:08:00 AM » by Tiko Lewis
last stanza is an excellent close
to this, Silent Lotus. 

well done!!!


tiko
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #4 on: October 26, 2011, 03:14:31 AM » by silent lotus
How the heck do you come up with these, Silent?
Enjoyed very much. Tom




dear Tom

thank you !

a life of wandering
is about as close as i can get to quoting a source from where these have arrived.

in any case you can certainly bet your NJ Tax dollars it did not come from a state paid helicopter ride with Chris Christie
to watch his kid play little league baseball.


smiles from the land of windmills

silent lotus

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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #5 on: October 26, 2011, 03:23:33 PM » by StellaR



I sense dark vapours here. perhaps I should revisit this piece tomorrow

Stell
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“Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.” Robert Graves

  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #6 on: October 29, 2011, 03:11:37 AM » by silent lotus
This is such a treat! Lovely.

Best,
Sharon


dear Sharon

glad to know this was served up so well.

many thankyuuus
silent lotus

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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #7 on: October 29, 2011, 08:45:23 AM » by milner place
Classic, SL.

milner
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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #8 on: October 29, 2011, 08:50:28 AM » by R Raymond
Add me to the list of fans SL, and THIS is a canvas for sure. Great one.
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« Reply #9 on: October 29, 2011, 01:28:20 PM » by Michael Ashley
Yummy
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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #10 on: October 29, 2011, 01:37:14 PM » by silent lotus

last stanza is an excellent close
to this, Silent Lotus. 

well done!!!


tiko


dear Tiko

glad to hear the sleeves revealed themselves so well.

many thankyuuus

silent lotus



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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #11 on: October 29, 2011, 01:38:21 PM » by Tom Riordan
In S3, do you mean "affected" or "effected," Silent? Have a niggle that it may be "a-" but not sure. Tom
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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #12 on: October 29, 2011, 02:11:31 PM » by silent lotus
In S3, do you mean "affected" or "effected," Silent? Have a niggle that it may be "a-" but not sure. Tom

dear Tom

thank you ........change has been made !

and hope there won't be too much snow tonight in NJ


silent lotus

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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #13 on: October 29, 2011, 02:16:16 PM » by Tom Riordan
to Picks.

ice laden tree branches dropping like huge flies...

Tom
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  Re: Without A Word
« Reply #14 on: October 29, 2011, 02:39:22 PM » by R Raymond
Wasn't sure about affected, but one can effect change...
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