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« Reply #15 on: October 31, 2010, 04:26:25 AM » by James Carver
loved the premise of this..much enjpyed

james
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« Reply #16 on: October 31, 2010, 07:26:14 AM » by silent lotus
http://monsterbegood.com/

After 11 years of doing nothing but music, I discovered photography.
And after 4 years of doing nothing but photography, I discovered Bridge.
And after a year of doing nothing but Bridge, I sort of re-discovered reading,
which beget a re-discovery of writing prose, which beget a re-discovery of writing poetry, which beget this blog.

And then I turned 7.


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« Reply #17 on: November 04, 2010, 12:46:49 AM » by Lynn Doiron
Thomas, the way this poem works through myth and into a real closet "where your clothes used to be" makes this a front page choice for me.  For me, all the IFS of the airy celebs of antiquity paired with the "had beens" with imaginative humanizing details brings a power to the final S of mythic proportions. 

lynn
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« Reply #18 on: November 04, 2010, 08:41:46 AM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
Bravo for Front Page Pick!
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« Reply #19 on: November 04, 2010, 08:47:14 AM » by RLR_Continuum
[applause]
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« Reply #20 on: November 04, 2010, 09:22:54 AM » by Tom Riordan
congrats, Thomas. Tom
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« Reply #21 on: November 06, 2010, 07:02:55 AM » by Oskar
It's good to see this one in the shop window. Congratulations, Thomas.
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« Reply #22 on: November 06, 2010, 08:34:47 PM » by maggie flanagan-wilkie
Great choice, Chicky.

The first five lines of this poem blow me away every time I read them.

Maggie

Had Icharus Flown by Night…

 
maybe he'd have been
the first man on the moon.

And had Prometheus never heard of fire,
maybe he'd have been a bird lover
and destroyed his liver the old-fashioned way.

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  Re: Had Icharus Flown by Night…
« Reply #23 on: November 07, 2010, 07:59:57 AM » by silent lotus
dear Thomas

i enjoy how

And had Paris been gay,

could have the double bottom meaning of being city

as it might allude a bit to the film... Paris Is Burning

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paris_Is_Burning_(film)


may the front page bring much confetti & applause

silent lotus

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« Reply #24 on: November 08, 2010, 08:59:00 AM » by Thomas Gabriele Busillo
Wow! Thanks so much for the selection! I'm honored.

I've had a horrible, horrible last two weeks. My dad's been battling Alzheimer's for over a decade and after two recent scares involving a fall and what we thought was a stroke, we hit the point where had to put him in a nursing home. It's been devastating for my mom - who goes there every day, all day - and for me the hurt just isn't seeing him, but seeing how much she's hurting.

Anyway, this really picked me up. Thanks.
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« Reply #25 on: November 08, 2010, 09:30:10 AM » by silent lotus
Wow! Thanks so much for the selection! I'm honored.

I've had a horrible, horrible last two weeks. My dad's been battling Alzheimer's for over a decade and after two recent scares involving a fall and what we thought was a stroke, we hit the point where had to put him in a nursing home. It's been devastating for my mom - who goes there every day, all day - and for me the hurt just isn't seeing him, but seeing how much she's hurting.

Anyway, this really picked me up. Thanks.

dear Thomas

wishing you much inner peace during
this very disharmonious period of life,
it is a blessing that you can be there
for both your parent's
support.


a warm smile
silent lotus
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« Reply #26 on: November 09, 2010, 01:39:55 PM » by Tiko Lewis
one hell of a write.

enjoyed.

tiko
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

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