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September 08, 2010, 01:16:37 PM »
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maggie flanagan-wilkie
Mornings are full of moods.
You're invited to walk but all talk
must be kept in your head.
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September 08, 2010, 01:35:52 PM »
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Re: Filed under U for Universal
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September 08, 2010, 01:45:03 PM »
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Tom Riordan
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September 08, 2010, 02:06:52 PM »
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Tom Riordan
makes me think simultaneously of silent early-morning excercise walk partners, and morning itself, when you're alone - night stubbornly clinging to some of its stillness. a nice meditation, maggie. I also think about how one silently "walks" with a poem. -tom
Quote from: maggie flanagan-wilkie on September 08, 2010, 01:16:37 PM
Mornings are full of moods.
You're invited to walk but all talk
must be kept in your head.
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Re: Filed under U for Universal
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September 08, 2010, 10:35:14 PM »
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Tiko Lewis
interesting.
could be verbal
body language
or habit.
good write.
tiko
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September 10, 2010, 09:13:23 PM »
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Tom Riordan
Something inside-out haiku-ish about this too, Maggie. A haiku of u. Tom
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September 12, 2010, 09:35:29 PM »
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Tom Riordan
One of the things I like about this is that there is something universal: if you replace "Mornings" with "Winters" or "Raincoats," it continues to be a rewarding read. To Picks. Tom
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September 13, 2010, 08:54:52 PM »
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maggie flanagan-wilkie
Thanks, Tom, Tiko.
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