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  Filed under U for Universal
« on: September 08, 2010, 01:16:37 PM » by maggie flanagan-wilkie
Mornings are full of moods.
You're invited to walk but all talk
must be kept in your head.
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  Re: Filed under U for Universal
« Reply #1 on: September 08, 2010, 01:35:52 PM » by milner place


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  Re: Filed under U for Universal
« Reply #2 on: September 08, 2010, 01:45:03 PM » by Tom Riordan
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  Re: Filed under U for Universal
« Reply #3 on: September 08, 2010, 02:06:52 PM » by Tom Riordan
makes me think simultaneously of silent early-morning excercise walk partners, and morning itself, when you're alone - night stubbornly clinging to some of its stillness. a nice meditation, maggie. I also think about how one silently "walks" with a poem. -tom
Mornings are full of moods.
You're invited to walk but all talk
must be kept in your head.

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  Re: Filed under U for Universal
« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2010, 10:35:14 PM » by Tiko Lewis
interesting.
could be verbal
body language
or habit.

good write.

tiko
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  Re: Filed under U for Universal
« Reply #5 on: September 10, 2010, 09:13:23 PM » by Tom Riordan
Something inside-out haiku-ish about this too, Maggie. A haiku of u. Tom
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  Re: Filed under U for Universal
« Reply #6 on: September 12, 2010, 09:35:29 PM » by Tom Riordan
One of the things I like about this is that there is something universal: if you replace "Mornings" with "Winters" or "Raincoats," it continues to be a rewarding read. To Picks. Tom
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  Re: Filed under U for Universal
« Reply #7 on: September 13, 2010, 08:54:52 PM » by maggie flanagan-wilkie
Thanks, Tom, Tiko.
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