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  At One Remove Fugue
« on: August 17, 2006, 05:24:23 PM » by Eric Elshtain

“...the pregnant fact of Isabel.”
—Herman Melville


Keep talking to
that young boy eating morning
glories crying blue

An afterlift of chlorophyll.
This orchid is enough parasite
to outdo the terrarium’s moss
Isabel removes her sweater of—
As she bares her—

& used to treat me 
as her red philosophy
never did, her hand;
I help her find a drop of glass

now she is unadorned
now she the red brain
that makes the fall of birds

A rhythm is an appearance
turned into an expression
the voltage humming a hand
becoming the other

white while we arrive soft
early morning, Isabel,
thoroughly not given to thinking—
& she

a domestic zodiac, a freezing goldfinch

stop     (all is leaf)

          wings     (all is leaf)

                    blossom     (all is leaf)

back to its heart

But why so many
demands on pastured rhythms?
Because the world is a commitment,
a hinge between laws,
orders to remove the uneven sleep

thinking the girl in the moss
girl in the moss knows
a bird working circles & dying of noticing


I lived.  Don’t care what you do early 
Just notice that we’re blurred,
flown into the sources of altitude bees whir;
she’s got one in her Wernicke’s
becoming a spell, Isabel,
far away Isabel, can’t help

(a blue brain, a selection of reeds
the flying afternoons ricochet between
vulnerable eel grass
that girl on the porch and her cat)

Crawls in the hymn, Isabel
All those garbled nails
I have no sense for equators
so your future
the damaged red mind collects
in wild laughter
the tangled rock

anyone’s brain in a fugitive
word for until:  re-moves her.
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  Re: At One Remove Fugue
« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2006, 05:49:24 PM » by Desiree Wright
Loved world as hinge between laws, but isn't it more science than a poet should dare? lol.

Also engaged by the ( all is leaf ) segment. Thanks.
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  Re: At One Remove Fugue
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2006, 07:22:59 PM » by milner place
Am developing a strong love for this, Eric, and in so short a time. Confident it will deepen with re-readings.

milner
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  Re: At One Remove Fugue
« Reply #3 on: August 17, 2006, 11:37:22 PM » by MichelleBethCronk
Fasinating.....I was interested after the first three lines.....the fourth hooked me.

need to re-read it more times, but wanted to say (see above)

lol

xo Michelle
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  Re: At One Remove Fugue
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2006, 05:00:41 AM » by milner place
Moved this because I rate it so highly - a beautiful many-layered poem.

milner
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se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com

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