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cheap smokes
« on: August 30, 2010, 11:02:16 PM » by Tiko Lewis

king
Edward

lean
to
my
flame

fill
me
with
stolen
nobility

dawdle

let
us
make
peace

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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #1 on: August 30, 2010, 11:10:49 PM » by Tom Riordan

nice, Tiko. like the end especially. out of left field, but not really, Edward the "Peacemaker". Tom

Quote from: Tiko Lewis on August 30, 2010, 11:02:16 PM

king
Edward

lean
to
my
flame

fill
me
with
stolen
nobility

dawdle

let
us
make
peace

Logged

Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2010, 11:21:37 PM » by Tiko Lewis

thanks again.

:)

tiko

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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #3 on: August 31, 2010, 06:42:36 AM » by Dax

Great. Thank you. D

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Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #4 on: September 01, 2010, 03:05:34 PM » by Rick Stansberger

nice

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Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #5 on: September 03, 2010, 06:04:04 PM » by bodkin

Nicely contemplative.

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Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #6 on: September 03, 2010, 06:13:53 PM » by Sue Lozynskyj

I like this but don't get the King edward reference...unless you are smoking a potato?! ;)

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Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #7 on: September 03, 2010, 08:06:03 PM » by Tiko Lewis

Ian,

thanks,

Sue,

King Edwards are a cheap machine made cigar.
i've never smoked one; but i was thinking of
my grandfather as he used to smoke Prince
Albert pipe tobacco.

thanks,

tiko

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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #8 on: September 04, 2010, 04:31:27 PM » by Sue Lozynskyj

I remember them now they had a picture of him on the cigar band...

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Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #9 on: September 07, 2010, 10:41:34 AM » by Tom Riordan

Something perfect about this, Tiko. Am putting it in Picks now. Just realizing today the American Indian component. It's so nice how you capture the feeling one can bestow on oneself by settling down to a good smoke. Tom

Quote from: Tiko Lewis on August 30, 2010, 11:02:16 PM

king
Edward

lean
to
my
flame

fill
me
with
stolen
nobility

dawdle

let
us
make
peace

Logged

Re: cheap smokes
« Reply #10 on: September 07, 2010, 11:17:12 AM » by Tiko Lewis

thanks, Tom.

glad you enjoyed
the spirit of his one.

tiko

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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

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