where
did
the
sky
get
its
blue

was
it
gifted
stolen

found

rented
or
loaned

won
in a
game
of
pitching
pennies

was
it
earned

cleaning
pools
on
saturdays

for me, Tiko, goes great till near the end. I'd be tempted to continue from "earned" for an ending

was
it
earned

in a
........
......
.....

or something like that. Tom

Tom,

i hear you.  change made
to see how it flows/works.
could stay, could be changed
to something else, but i like
the idea.

thanks,

tiko

Just a thought, Tiko. 

where
did
the
sky
get
its
blue

was
it
gifted
stolen

found

rented
or
loaned

won
in a
game
of
pitching
pennies

was
it
earned

cleaning
pools
on
saturdays

Maggie,

thanks.  changes have been made.

tiko

I like this. 

:)
thanks,
Lynn

tiko

Tiko,

These words sure stick out. Think about editing them out.

Maggie

discovered
intelligently-designed

agree. "discovered" covered earlier by "found," more or less, and "intelligently-designed" can be broken like this and read as 2 items and as one:

intelligent
designed

thanks, guys.
i opted to remove.

tiko