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  Darrell Petit's The Kiss
« on: August 30, 2010, 03:06:08 AM » by Ken Robson

earth unearths
her underthings

when stones
first touch
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The craft of angling is catching fish. The art of angling is a
receptiveness to those connections, the art of letting one
thing lead to another until, if only locally and momentarily,
you realize some small completeness.

                                  Ted Leeson
  Re: Darrell Petit's The Kiss
« Reply #1 on: August 31, 2010, 09:24:16 PM » by Lynn Doiron
How did this slip all the way back to page 2 of Submit without a comment? 
Eleven words and the reality of sensual rock is revealed!
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  Re: Darrell Petit's The Kiss
« Reply #2 on: August 31, 2010, 10:47:06 PM » by Ken Robson
Lynn,

This beautiful piece is at Storm King in N.Y.
Stony Creek granite. Wonder full.

                             Ken
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The craft of angling is catching fish. The art of angling is a
receptiveness to those connections, the art of letting one
thing lead to another until, if only locally and momentarily,
you realize some small completeness.

                                  Ted Leeson
  Re: Darrell Petit's The Kiss
« Reply #3 on: August 31, 2010, 11:06:12 PM » by Tiko Lewis
good question, Lynn.
i'm glad to have seen this, Ken.

it is wonder full.

tiko
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.
  Re: Darrell Petit's The Kiss
« Reply #4 on: September 01, 2010, 01:14:11 AM » by Ken Robson
Tiko,

Many thanks!

                Ken
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The craft of angling is catching fish. The art of angling is a
receptiveness to those connections, the art of letting one
thing lead to another until, if only locally and momentarily,
you realize some small completeness.

                                  Ted Leeson
  Re: Darrell Petit's The Kiss
« Reply #5 on: September 01, 2010, 09:22:42 AM » by Tom Riordan
S1 strong and novel, Ken, but S2 in comparison seems a bit too glib to me. Tom
Quote from: Ken Robson on August 30, 2010, 03:06:08 AM
earth bares her underthings
when stones can touch--

and sing
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  Re: Darrell Petit's The Kiss
« Reply #6 on: September 01, 2010, 05:11:47 PM » by Ken Robson
Tom,

see revision
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The craft of angling is catching fish. The art of angling is a
receptiveness to those connections, the art of letting one
thing lead to another until, if only locally and momentarily,
you realize some small completeness.

                                  Ted Leeson
  Re: Darrell Petit's The Kiss
« Reply #7 on: September 01, 2010, 06:38:49 PM » by Lynn Doiron
hmm.  i liked the sing.  i miss the song.  oh well.  won't be the first, or last, time.   
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