32. “The so-called freedom you're constantly blabbering about is nothing”

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Re: 32. “The so-called freedom you're constantly blabbering about is nothing”
« Reply #15 on: August 29, 2010, 11:25:20 AM » by Tom Riordan

which reminds me, when is "silverbrite" season -- the one affordable wild fresh salmon?

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Re: 32. “The so-called freedom you're constantly blabbering about is nothing”
« Reply #16 on: August 29, 2010, 11:31:50 AM » by milner place

Like it much, Tom, but think it works without that last stanza.

milner

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Re: 32. “The so-called freedom you're constantly blabbering about is nothing”
« Reply #17 on: August 29, 2010, 11:38:28 AM » by Tom Riordan

You're absolutely right, Milner, thank you.
There a few revisions in S1 to cut S2, but will get to work on that as soon as I can.
Tom

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