congrats, Tom. 
 

tiko

congrats, Tom! Tom

I knew He'd be busy in a hurly burly way.
This universe ain't gettin' any smaller.

Nicely done.

very refreshing and with lots of surprising, exact, imagery.  I did have a little trouble with "tipping" -- it is so close to "tripping"...

I missed this when it was first posted
cool pen, tom

congratulations!

Stella

Hi, Tom

I love the quirky humour, especially the reference to "a lot of sugar" - I expect He likes a few beers too.
Let's face it He's not got to watch his BMI, has he?  :)

The light/water swap is a wonderful idea.
I expect that you are British (like me) because I am inferring references to the colloquialisms
"it's raining cats and dogs" and "it's tipping it down".

Plaudits
Geoff

Thank you, Tom
Good to have you here.
Splendid.


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