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  The Interpreter's Note
« on: August 25, 2010, 09:52:14 AM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2010, 09:56:27 AM » by milner place
An absolute delight, SL.

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« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2010, 10:24:35 AM » by Tiko Lewis
well crafted, Silent Lotus.
much enjoyed!

tiko
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« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2010, 10:28:48 AM » by Tom Riordan
I also love this, Silent.
As a group, your goddesses are unique, consistent, mysterious, beguiling. Within that universe, each individual portrait is also unique, surprising.
--Tom
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« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2010, 10:49:03 PM » by silent lotus
Quote from: milner place on August 25, 2010, 09:56:27 AM

An absolute delight, SL.

milner


dear Milner

many thankyuus

smiles
silent lotus
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« Reply #5 on: August 26, 2010, 06:53:46 AM » by James Carver
simply beautiful and well executed.

cheers

james
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« Reply #6 on: August 26, 2010, 10:09:23 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Tiko Lewis on August 25, 2010, 10:24:35 AM

well crafted, Silent Lotus.
much enjoyed!

tiko

dear Tiko

a pleasure to know this reached the lone star state
without serious bruises.

miles of smiles
silent lotus
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« Reply #7 on: August 26, 2010, 05:04:23 PM » by larry jordan
The juxtapositions of images are quite effective. I find them to echo with great definition. Lovely.

larry
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« Reply #8 on: August 26, 2010, 10:20:58 PM » by Tom Riordan
to Picks.
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« Reply #9 on: August 27, 2010, 07:52:23 PM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Tom Riordan on August 25, 2010, 10:28:48 AM

I also love this, Silent.

As a group, your goddesses are unique, consistent, mysterious, beguiling.

Within that universe, each individual portrait is also unique, surprising.
--Tom

dear Tom

the depth and breadth of your reply is a true gift
and thank you for the cherry on top of the editorial icing.

summer smiles
silent lotus
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« Reply #10 on: August 29, 2010, 11:24:34 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: James Carver on August 26, 2010, 06:53:46 AM

simply beautiful and well executed.

cheers

james


thank you James !

silent lotus
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« Reply #11 on: September 03, 2010, 11:59:39 PM » by Jonathan Bracker
I do not understand the use of "funds" or why the mother has "three" gravestones, but the poem does present a touching picture.
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« Reply #12 on: September 11, 2010, 09:54:10 PM » by tom mccoy
Very smooth, very filling. Excellent.  Though, the first time through I missed the
last stanaza and liked it better that way.

                                                    tom mccoy
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« Reply #13 on: September 12, 2010, 11:29:40 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Jonathan Bracker on September 03, 2010, 11:59:39 PM

I do not understand the use of "funds" or why the mother has "three" gravestones,

but the poem does present a touching picture.

dear Jonathan

of course there are myriads of interpretations

yet one might be that the 'funds' are 'the where with all' to finally find
a way to put her mothers influence in her life to rest.

glad that you raised the question

smiles
silent lotus
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« Reply #14 on: September 16, 2010, 10:34:46 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: tom mccoy on September 11, 2010, 09:54:10 PM

Very smooth, very filling. Excellent.  Though, the first time through I missed the
last stanaza and liked it better that way.

                                                    tom mccoy

dear Tom

i am enjoying getting to know your pen here at the Circle
and appreciate your creating the time to sit with my poem through more than one read
thank you for the kindness of your reply

a warm smile
silent lotus
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