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Re: And Then
« Reply #15 on: September 06, 2010, 04:54:34 PM » by Aaron

"he kissed her prince and he became a frog.
It amazed her how many princes that happened to."
Pulse??? Pulse???????? What, kiss? Prince?? frog????? I'm not amazed and I couldn't give a shit how many princes that happened to.

The point of the poem; to characterise woman as sluts who kiss lots o princes. Hmmm. What a pulse. When you say pulse, do you actually mean abyss?

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