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swimming with whales
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August 20, 2010, 05:14:10 PM »
by
milner place
in memory of Todd Moore
there’s ever a time
for the sea mew’s cry
ever a roll
to the ocean’s skin
always a sleep
for the dreams
of the dead
to sail
to the home
of all winds
NB.If any should be curious as to why I wrote this poem using this imagery, and dedicated it to Todd Moore, perhaps that may be resolved by reading the end of this essay:
http://outlawpoetry.com/2009/09/01/the-sea-the-poem-and-the-house-of-all-possible-myths-the-poetry-of-milner-place/
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se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado
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August 20, 2010, 05:23:45 PM »
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milner place
If any should be curious as to why I wrote this poem in these terms, and dedicated it to Todd Moore, perhaps that may be resolved by reading the end of this essay:
http://outlawpoetry.com/2009/09/01/the-sea-the-poem-and-the-house-of-all-possible-myths-the-poetry-of-milner-place/
milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado
Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc
milnerplace@msn.com
Re: swimming with whales
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August 20, 2010, 05:30:55 PM »
by
MichelleBethCronk
I'm just going to sit here quietly for awhile and imagine a place that is "the home / of all winds". - M
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August 21, 2010, 01:44:12 AM »
by
Tiko Lewis
love the rhythm.
love the write.
moved it
because
it moved
me.
tiko
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Re: swimming with whales
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August 21, 2010, 05:55:53 AM »
by
milner place
Thanks, Michelle. Hope you'd a rewarding reverie. Perhaps to the house of all possible myths?
Then it worked, Tiko. Mil Gracias.
milner
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- Antonio Machado
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August 21, 2010, 06:00:37 AM »
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silent lotus
dear Milner
the ethereal substance here
reminds me of your words
i wish
to be buried
in brotherhood
from
Death Song Of August Wentworthy
its silence
feather brushed
from
Where And Whither Away
the threads of an outlaw beyond the ins and outs of silk and thimble
that keep vagabond vividness alive
and friendship...
truth
a warm smile
silent lotus
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August 21, 2010, 10:22:06 AM »
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milner place
'the threads of an outlaw beyond the ins and outs of silk and thimble
that keep vagabond vividness alive
and friendship...
truth'
Thanks so for that SL. I think maybe you have the birth of a poem in those lines
My friendshipp with Todd was all to brief.
milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado
Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc
milnerplace@msn.com
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August 21, 2010, 12:07:00 PM »
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milner place
Outlaw Poetry have front paged this with an amazing pic:
http://outlawpoetry.com/
milner
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se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado
Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc
milnerplace@msn.com
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August 21, 2010, 12:42:06 PM »
by
StellaR
beautiful tribute, milner
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August 21, 2010, 05:30:02 PM »
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Tom Riordan
Feel the rolling of the swells, very nice indeed, Milner! Tom
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August 21, 2010, 07:02:09 PM »
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silent lotus
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August 22, 2010, 05:28:18 AM »
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milner place
Thanks, Stella, Tom.
Yes, Sl, that's the pic Outlaw Poetry chose to go with this. A brilliant choice, in my view.
Cheers
milner
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- Antonio Machado
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milnerplace@msn.com
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August 22, 2010, 03:26:10 PM »
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Lynn Doiron
I find myself very moved by this poem, milner. I wish I could say how much.
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August 23, 2010, 05:36:26 AM »
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milner place
That you're the second person to say they were 'moved' by this, Lynn (Tiko the other), really makes me feel that this is doing its job. Many thanks
milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado
Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc
milnerplace@msn.com
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August 23, 2010, 07:28:35 AM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: milner place on August 21, 2010, 10:22:06 AM
'the threads of an outlaw beyond the ins and outs of silk and thimble
that keep vagabond vividness alive
and friendship...
truth'
Thanks so for that SL.
I think maybe you have the birth of a poem in those lines
My friendshipp with Todd was all to brief.
milner
dear Milner
seriously, i have never song fado together with anyone before
would you care to collaborate ?
we could ask Jay Dougherty for the key to the back room
where he keeps the porto and pens.
if sounds interesting send a pm.
vagabond smiles
silent lotus
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