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Re: Mezzotint
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Reply #15 on:
August 23, 2010, 11:03:28 PM »
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Tiko Lewis
it works well, but then you have 'in'
starting S2. when read aloud, given
the right pause, i'm sure it's easily
traversed, but visually, it stands out.
yet, i still enjoyed!
thanks,
tiko
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.
Re: Mezzotint
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Reply #16 on:
August 24, 2010, 12:22:36 AM »
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James Carver
simply delightful with a perfect ending
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Enjoy the fruits of labour but never forget to honour the roots of the tree – James Carver
Re: Mezzotint
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Reply #17 on:
August 24, 2010, 11:18:57 AM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: Dax on August 19, 2010, 07:57:17 AM
Heaven above, Chasan
— takes me back a bit.
Love the feel
of its weightlessness and depth,
quite remarkable, I think. Splendid.
D
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dear Dax
i am grateful for such words arriving while you are on the front page !
it is always gift to know you have stopped in
a warm smile
silent lotus
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Unhid Bio
July 30, 2010, 07:13:18 AM by Dax
Unhid Bio
The poem is a poem, not a shadow. Please, refrain from running after me. Alas, I am nowhere to be found.
A-head, then, on an empty wallet
rooms fill with literati, worse still
playboys and bottles of plasma
— gems, from far away fields
I was joined at the hip by a dress
one that whispers out loud, her best interests
lay between the law and a crook
— a crook like me, in a crowd
I was in a rat-hole for lunch
with a flock of guilty pleasures, all
drawn from dark places to greet their real-live
stud, then keep him on life-support
till the boy child wrangles such ill-gotten gains
— no questions asked
Is it that simple, so regular, so bright as to unlock such secrets as to fill a throne, that, which would have most down as pickpockets and charlatans, then, poet, save me from myself.
dr
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Re: Mezzotint
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August 25, 2010, 10:12:10 PM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: James Carver on August 24, 2010, 12:22:36 AM
simply delightful with a perfect ending
dear James
i welcome your reply and appreciate your visit
many thankyuuus
silent lotus
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Re: Mezzotint
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September 01, 2010, 09:30:31 AM »
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silent lotus
Quote from: Tom Riordan on August 21, 2010, 05:06:11 PM
Your characters are accumulating in my mind, Silent, and I'm starting to see them in the same place, interacting.
It's a consistent alternative world, its inhabitants displaying their unusual dimensions. Really like that. -Tom
dear Tom
i appreciate your sharing that other worlds have a welcome home
only lets hope that a category 4 Earl will not shake things up tooo much when it storms it's way over Jersey on Friday.
hurricane smiles
silent lotus
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