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  Re: New Thoughts from a Rusty Mind
« Reply #45 on: July 29, 2010, 09:59:28 PM » by Scott Douglas
fist in the sky

the setting sun cast
into cumulus
until it could pull no more

vibrant gave way
to yellow
then grey

bright children came out to play
 
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  Re: New Thoughts from a Rusty Mind
« Reply #46 on: July 30, 2010, 09:27:19 AM » by silent lotus
the hearing impaired man
was cock sure the Greek would inherit the earth
so he moved his family to Crete
Wisconson


nice roll of the dice !
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  Re: New Thoughts from a Rusty Mind
« Reply #47 on: August 16, 2010, 01:17:37 PM » by Scott Douglas
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remember a time
we'd bend over to pick up a nickel?

remember a time I actually could
she said

ten pounds pressed
into a five pound bag



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  Re: New Thoughts from a Rusty Mind
« Reply #48 on: August 16, 2010, 01:18:35 PM » by Scott Douglas
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  Re: New Thoughts from a Rusty Mind
« Reply #49 on: September 04, 2010, 04:13:33 PM » by Scott Douglas
she wanted that moment
of axe blade to wood

a shriek to an unknown
unknown to her


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  Re: New Thoughts from a Rusty Mind
« Reply #50 on: October 20, 2010, 08:23:31 AM » by silent lotus

there will be flowers

he said your writing has really progressed
it's gone from shit to compost

i thought that was clever, smiled
and quickly jotted it down
as soon as he left




Great series here.....

patiently await more !

silent lotus
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  Re: New Thoughts from a Rusty Mind
« Reply #51 on: October 29, 2010, 10:49:40 PM » by Scott Douglas
to Falco
regarding Rock Me Amadeus

why? don't misunderstand, i love it
but why? what possessed you to sing in hiccup German
with legato chorus men singing "Amadeus" smoothly in the background
like a couple of shirtless Village People and a bridge
sung by the Pips "baby, baby do it 'til you rock me"
and then quietly disappear.

is why not the answer? why not?
that's genius





I haven't posted for awhile.
I've discovered Windows Movie Maker
and see no bottom.

I thought if anyone liked this poem
they may enjoy this.



 
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