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  New Thoughts from a Rusty Mind
« on: June 22, 2010, 01:27:29 PM » by Scott Douglas
a child in Burkina Faso is talked to in the womb
with the minds of the village women

its name is sung as it leaves the mother
and it laughs

arms are flung into the air
and dancing forms circles  


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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2010, 01:49:52 PM » by Scott Douglas
he is all arms and legs folded
into a canvas chair

he traded what you have
for a cigarette and the ocean

his memoir is breathed into salt air
much to the benefit of gulls
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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2010, 12:44:04 AM » by silent lotus

he is all arms and legs
folded into a canvas chair

he traded what you have
for a cigarette and the ocean

his memoir is breathed into salt air
much to the benefit of gulls



dear Skaaa Deee

i hope this one will be in your next book !

silent lotus
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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #3 on: June 23, 2010, 10:02:08 AM » by Scott Douglas

or my first one.
:)


thanks Chasan.

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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #4 on: June 23, 2010, 10:11:33 AM » by Scott Douglas
He has a maroon-and-black Studebaker in his driveway.
Girls with bonnets rode on Sunday mornings
and gangsters with tommys flanked on Saturday nights...

...it's big, they must have.


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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #5 on: June 23, 2010, 10:28:22 AM » by silent lotus

He has a maroon-and-black Hudson in his driveway.
Girls with bonnets rode on Sunday mornings
and gangsters with tommys flanked on Saturday nights...

...they must have.




interesting......
i don't seem to recall Hudson's having running boards

regardless .......

nice poeming

silent lotus
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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #6 on: June 23, 2010, 10:40:04 AM » by Scott Douglas

how about Studebaker?
that should do it.
good one.
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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #7 on: June 23, 2010, 03:41:11 PM » by silent lotus

A Canada earthquake shook Toronto and Ottawa at approximately 1:45 p.m. Eastern Time today, June 23, 2010.
The USGS reports the quake had a magnitude of 5.5.


Hope you are safe Skaaa Deee
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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #8 on: June 23, 2010, 08:50:36 PM » by Scott Douglas

thanks Chasan
luckily no injuries or deaths.

I was just about to write a poem about it.

 


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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #9 on: June 25, 2010, 11:03:11 AM » by Scott Douglas
room
shaking

stairwells
running

sidewalk
standing

cellphones
talking
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  Re: New Thoughts for an old Mind
« Reply #10 on: June 28, 2010, 09:46:35 AM » by Scott Douglas
The puddle on the path was in the shape
of a kangaroo. One after another the tikes
hopped into it and over.
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  Re: New Thoughts from an old Mind
« Reply #11 on: June 28, 2010, 12:12:34 PM » by MichelleBethCronk

Absolutely love this image Scott!  M

The puddle on the path was in the shape
of a kangaroo. One after another the tikes
hopped into it and over.
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  Re: New Thoughts from an old Mind
« Reply #12 on: June 28, 2010, 12:42:42 PM » by Scott Douglas

thanks!
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  Re: New Thoughts from an old Mind
« Reply #13 on: June 29, 2010, 09:44:31 AM » by Scott Douglas

some swear by it
but coffee is mostly water
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  Re: New Thoughts from an old Mind
« Reply #14 on: June 29, 2010, 09:46:29 AM » by Scott Douglas
the madman looked in the mirror
and saw himself

himself saw the mirror
and in looked the madman  

*

madman scribbled on scraps swept up
by a confused executor

and placed in an empty Hush Puppy box
someone left just to the right of the window

where humming birds hover today
a little longer than usual


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