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Re: An Absence Of Studied Concern
« Reply #15 on: March 21, 2010, 07:00:04 PM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Sue Lozynskyj on March 20, 2010, 04:35:56 PM

I much prefer the 2nd Draft, Silent Lotus. I love the title.

I like the position of the dawn of a waveless ocean in the centre of the poem,
the shape of the poem like the light drifting in to those coffee drinkers...Fab.

I'm picking this.

dear Sue

i am very grateful for your detailed response of what made the poem agreeable
and how the 2nd version expanded in its reach.

it is always a pleasure to receive your discerning comments & suggestions
and today an extra thank you for having
waved your editorial magic wand
and to find the poem now in the
nest.

a warm smile
silent lotus

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Re: An Absence Of Studied Concern
« Reply #16 on: March 22, 2010, 07:21:55 AM » by Sue Lozynskyj

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Chance favours the prepared mind: Louis Pasteur

Re: An Absence Of Studied Concern
« Reply #17 on: March 23, 2010, 06:50:22 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Rick Stansberger on March 20, 2010, 09:15:06 PM

You never mention it, but the poem oozes stultifying heat. I really like that.

dear Rick

i'm glad that climate reached out to you
and appreciate your exposing it in such a unique way.

smiles
silent lotus

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Re: An Absence Of Studied Concern
« Reply #18 on: March 23, 2010, 08:40:53 AM » by Tiko Lewis

Silent Lotus,

lovely. i enjoyed.

tiko

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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

Re: An Absence Of Studied Concern
« Reply #19 on: March 26, 2010, 08:40:28 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Tiko Lewis on March 23, 2010, 08:40:53 AM

Silent Lotus,

lovely. i enjoyed.

tiko

dear Tiko

glad this one reached out so well

hope spring comes soon to texas

march morning smiles
silent lotus

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