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  Can you tell?
« on: March 07, 2010, 08:20:12 PM » by joseph lofgren
An Irish coffee
     in the afternoon,

makes a sane man
     in the evening.

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  Re: Can you tell?
« Reply #1 on: March 07, 2010, 10:06:40 PM » by Tom Riordan
An Irish coffee
     in the afternoon,

makes a sane man
     in the evening.


very pleasing form and voice, joe. tom
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« Reply #2 on: March 10, 2010, 04:57:27 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Sounds like something somebody's Dad would say.  I like it.  It's got a homey (not homie) feel to it.
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  Re: Can you tell?
« Reply #3 on: March 10, 2010, 10:17:01 PM » by joseph lofgren
Ha, I like that. It gives an old man with a comb over feel to it. Maybe I should re-title to Dad's Motto?
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  Re: Can you tell?
« Reply #4 on: March 11, 2010, 04:32:05 PM » by Lawrence Gladeview
joseph you have managed to borrow your words into my head, something i don't mind.  there is an old saying that a drunk man's words are a sober man's thoughts.  will be amending my afternoon cup of joe.  understand the title, just not sure if it is the strongest choice.  enjoyed -lawrence
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