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old man in a tizzy
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January 07, 2010, 09:54:11 AM »
by
milner place
the cold
not in
the bones
not yet
but still
there is a winter
feel
to now
there is
a craving
for mulled wine
for strawberries
cream
of full summer
and attendant
lips
shit
a maudlin
passion
is a wasting
of scarce days
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se hace camino al andar'
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January 07, 2010, 11:24:54 AM »
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Tom Riordan
Milner, your N's frankness on the subject of death -- which seems to have moved into the spare room so they can talk to each other through the walls for the next fifteen years -- is become more personal and gripping with this poem. Tom
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January 07, 2010, 12:48:06 PM »
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Peter.R
me sees the delightful play on
mulled wine
.
Des verres du vin
from other life-times to be mulled over, re-tasted
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January 07, 2010, 02:04:42 PM »
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milner place
Not so much else for those two to talk about except the dark of these short winter days, and the snow, Tom.
Happy you picked up on the mulling over the divine juice of the grape, Peter.
Thanks to you both (and the wine).
milner
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January 07, 2010, 03:32:35 PM »
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John Yamrus
milner;
this poem is just what i needed. hey, when are you gonna have a new book out, buddy? i need me some milner for my shelves.
john
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January 07, 2010, 03:36:57 PM »
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John Yamrus
now, this poem is smack dab where it belongs.
jy
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January 07, 2010, 03:38:50 PM »
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David C. Man
Last of the Mulled Wine
- now there's a TV programme I would watch.
This commands respect, Milner. I'll raise a glass to you. Single malt all right?
Cheers
David
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January 07, 2010, 07:50:24 PM »
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Tiko Lewis
simply wonderful. i love the reflective nature, the self-examination.
it feels so honest. real.
thanks,
tiko
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.
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January 07, 2010, 08:42:51 PM »
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Rick Stansberger
Yeah!
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Rick's fifth book is out: Gizmo--love, loss and the passion to know--in the first part of the last century.
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January 08, 2010, 06:15:25 AM »
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milner place
Thanks, John, your opinion so highly valued, as are all voiced on this site. Putting something together now. Thanks also for the pick.
A single malt is fine, David. I respond with just a morning coffee, but nonetheless heartfelt.
A bow, Tiko.
'Yeah' is more than ample, Rick.
Cheers
milner
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se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado
Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc
milnerplace@msn.com
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January 08, 2010, 11:32:23 AM »
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cherylleverette
o my this is awesome, milner.
and I agree with John.
wonderful, delightful job.
cheryl
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January 08, 2010, 08:32:59 PM »
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milner place
Thanks, Cheryl, 'awesome' will do for me!
Maybe it'll do to read at my 80th birthday do on the 25th (if that ain't tempting fate!).
milner
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- Antonio Machado
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January 08, 2010, 08:57:25 PM »
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cherylleverette
Quote from: milner place on January 08, 2010, 08:32:59 PM
Thanks, Cheryl, 'awesome' will do for me!
Maybe it'll do to read at my 80th birthday do on the 25th (if that ain't tempting fate!).
milner
Can't believe you'll be 80 years old, milner. But how cool is it that you're so bright and intelligent, and your memory is still intact. I refuse to believe my mind has to go as my age grows.
My mom will be 87 on the 24th. She's still very intelligent, but her memory, o my, can't describe how frustrating...but I love her.
Happy Birthday, milner,
cheryl
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A poet dares be just so clear and no clearer.... He unzips the veil from beauty, but does not remove it. A poet utterly clear is a trifle glaring. ~E.B. White
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January 10, 2010, 02:11:42 PM »
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milner place
That thought of the brain power rapidly declining, pops into my head from time to time, Cheryl. What boots it with incessant care to deeply contemplate such morbid gloom? (Sorry Mr J. Milton)
Thanks
milner
Don't think on't! :)
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado
Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc
milnerplace@msn.com
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January 22, 2010, 05:43:41 AM »
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Jay Dougherty
Many of the traits that characterize and define the stages of our lives go unnoticed while we're busy living. When we are cognizant enough not only to recognize a trait that defines where we are in life but to capture or define it, that's an event worth celebrating.
On another level here, you've reminded us of the poignancy (or is it panic?) that results when one realizes that one's days are limited and that the things with which one is occupied matter more than ever.
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