lynn , kevin, rashmi, and tiko so glad this hit spot on for you.  thanks for leaving comments, a stroll down memory lane is always fun here and there, especially if it takes you to that backseat one more time!
-lawrence

Lg, another very funny, clever poem.  love the plunge-line.  ;)

cheryl

I like the form and I like the tone, but many of the lines are just too cryptic for me to become fully engaged in whatever "story" it is you're telling.