Kevin,

Thank you so much. Yeats, you think Yeats.
Then I'll stop here, horseman, pass by!

                                       Ken

Ken, your work on this is most deliberate and the result quite sharp. I've one needling thought about 'know'; the red poppies know. Know seems to be almost too exact given the McCrae source. It works, but I wonder if there is something else that would also reverberate with witness. Just a thought and definitely not critical. My earlier concern with aim stemmed from my thoughts about the age of those 'crooked' men. But on second thought and the context of the battle it is quite appropriate.

Not a mere painting, but a mural indeed.

larry

Thank you, Larry.

      Ken

Larry,

On re-reading I find "know" is somehow fatuous.
I'm back to what feels right, and real.

            Ken

Grow is it. It plays more with seed. Nice piece of work, Ken.   Needs to move up.

larry

Thanks for your jostle!

                   Ken

Ken,

excellent.

tiko