Vasile!  haven't seen you around here for a while!  how's the writing going?  and milner...thanks for your thoughts on my new book.  i'm 58 years old and am as excited about this book as i was about my first...40 god damn years ago!
john

:)

john,  you know i don't always "get" your poems..... this i get.   and some.

great front page,

k

Enjoyed the piece
you teach how form can shape
how the emotions come through.
It is my weakest area.
The implication is the feeling of poem, the thoughts
then the words have an idea form.
My question is what helps you make that judgement.
Why quantrains and not lines of five,
Enjoyed the piece

Mel

Good question, Mel! You make me want to rearrange it with different stanza breaks and see what happens. Tom

I like.

"i never knew it
until
a minute ago."

This one didn't come across as good as the rest though, altough it certainly works.

Oh John. Really felt this one. Somehow those close to us don't always understand. What a write.

Sharon