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Re: There/Here
« Reply #15 on: October 23, 2009, 05:51:01 AM » by Sue Lozynskyj

Hi Lynn, Mmmm. love this. It's like a painting with perspective. Very calming and in the moment.

I've a suggestion for S2 L2...metaphor instead of simile?...

and wide kelp blemishes

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« Reply #16 on: October 23, 2009, 06:12:38 AM » by jamesthomashoward

Wonderful, lynn.

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« Reply #17 on: October 23, 2009, 08:39:25 AM » by Mike Barrett

This is indeed lovely Lynn. I see you've made some changes after a break from it - and what a difference some time apart can make - a great edit.

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« Reply #18 on: November 05, 2009, 06:35:30 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks

Bravo!

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« Reply #19 on: November 05, 2009, 06:36:58 PM » by Scott Douglas

quite beautiful

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« Reply #20 on: November 05, 2009, 08:43:02 PM » by Tom Riordan

Hey, congrats Miss Lynn! Good to read this again. Tom

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« Reply #21 on: November 05, 2009, 09:53:54 PM » by larry jordan

Good to see this here.

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« Reply #22 on: November 05, 2009, 10:17:56 PM » by Lynn Doiron

How did this happen?
Holy cow.
Thanks Larry, Tom, Lavonne, and Scott or lovely comments today.
And thank you Mike, James and Cheryl for comments from other days that I somehow missed . . . Much, much appreciated -- each and all, Thanks!

Stunned and grateful to see this here.

lynn

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« Reply #23 on: November 06, 2009, 03:42:07 AM » by ca.leverette

Lynn, so glad to see your poems on the front page; and with this one, the same.

cheryl

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Re: There/Here
« Reply #24 on: November 06, 2009, 07:26:00 AM » by milner place

No finer choice than this for the Front page.

milner

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Re: There/Here
« Reply #25 on: November 06, 2009, 09:18:45 AM » by StellaR

so pleased to see this showcased, Lynn

congratulations!

Stella

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Re: There/Here
« Reply #26 on: November 06, 2009, 05:37:48 PM » by Lynn Doiron

Thanks cheryl, milner, stella. And I've just found the email with John Yamrus' name attached to the move information. Thank you, John. Such an honor.

And thank you also to those who helped me hone this one down from where it began. Much much appreciated.

lynn

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Re: There/Here
« Reply #27 on: November 07, 2009, 08:03:50 AM » by Vasile Baghiu

The tone, the rhythm and the lyricism, in a substantial combination, make a very good poem here... there..., Lynn. Excelent!
Vasile

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« Reply #28 on: November 07, 2009, 09:00:27 AM » by Lynn Doiron

Vasile! You stranger, you -- thank you for reading and comment above.

lynn

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Re: There/Here
« Reply #29 on: November 12, 2009, 01:36:21 PM » by Sherry Thrasher

I haven't been here in forever but am happy that I did so today.

Sherry

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