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don't ask
« on: June 23, 2009, 11:35:09 AM » by StellaR

don’t ask,
how I am; not today.
shadows confound
and I do not ascertain true forms
among them

why we choose
such a moment to unwind

so cruel, so unwise

but that is the way

we row or paddle
stroke the surface
then find momentum from
a deeper wave

we stop for a moment
breathe moistened air

and prepare
to be carried

Stella Read
June 23, 2009

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“Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.” Robert Graves

Re: don't ask
« Reply #1 on: June 23, 2009, 11:39:32 AM » by Tiko Lewis

Stella, I'm liking this a great deal. Not sure if you wanted this in Prose, but that's where it is.

Thanks,

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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

Re: don't ask
« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2009, 11:43:04 AM » by StellaR

nope! thanks Tiko. am moving it now.

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“Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.” Robert Graves

Re: don't ask
« Reply #3 on: June 23, 2009, 11:45:53 AM » by John Yamrus

nicely done. this is different. and new. and different and new is good.

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Re: don't ask
« Reply #4 on: June 23, 2009, 11:50:17 AM » by StellaR

thanks, John
just reposted in poetry, thanks to Tiko for pointing out my mistake.

Stella

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