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Re: on the downfalls of weak coffee
« Reply #15 on: June 21, 2009, 07:25:48 PM » by maggie flanagan-wilkie

First read was a wow, Stella.

Back later. Maggie

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Re: on the downfalls of weak coffee
« Reply #16 on: July 02, 2009, 11:57:09 AM » by maggie flanagan-wilkie

Back for that other read, Stella, and I still say, Wow!!

My only thought would be to suggest moving risk up to the previous line.

Very Wow, Stella. Very Wow!!

Maggie

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Re: on the downfalls of weak coffee
« Reply #17 on: January 13, 2012, 08:19:57 AM » by silent lotus

dear Stella

your weak coffee here remains strong

still enjoying

silent lotus

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Re: on the downfalls of weak coffee
« Reply #18 on: January 13, 2012, 09:26:38 AM » by Roger Fizzerton

Stella - this is just so great - I'm so glad somebody commented on it again. Just love it.

Roger

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Patience is a virtue, they say - but then I never claimed to be virtuous!

Re: on the downfalls of weak coffee
« Reply #19 on: January 13, 2012, 10:25:59 AM » by StellaR

silent, I see you are enjoying a romp through the archives!! thanks for pulling this one up too!

Roger, thank you for your kind words. always nice to have an old post brought forward.

Stella

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“Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.” Robert Graves

Re: on the downfalls of weak coffee
« Reply #20 on: January 17, 2012, 12:06:52 PM » by Griffin Smith

It reads well aloud too. Kudos.

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Re: on the downfalls of weak coffee
« Reply #21 on: January 18, 2012, 07:54:58 AM » by Desiree Wright

Hot Java. More refills.

D

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Re: on the downfalls of weak coffee
« Reply #22 on: January 18, 2012, 09:07:27 AM » by StellaR

thank you kindly, Griffin
made me smile, Desiree! thanks!

Stella

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“Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.” Robert Graves

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