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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #15 on: April 18, 2009, 11:26:50 AM » by Tom Riordan

Quote from: Jose MarGuerr on April 17, 2009, 07:15:36 AM

Mr. Tom I don't really see that there needs to be a shift there? Three animals, three names and perhaps any order will do actually. Sound wise they sound about the same to me where ever I put them. The first placement suits me for now. ;D But thanks for taking the time you did. ;D

If it were just "three animals, three names," you're right, any order might do, Jose. But it's animal/medicinehat/animal/animal, and that makes it more complicated, to me. But of course, it should be as you want it. Tom

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #16 on: April 19, 2009, 07:13:31 AM » by Jose MarGuerr

I don't really get what it is your tyring to convince me of Mr. Tom. BUT! I seperated the 'o's' and sound wise that seems to work for me too. ;D Actually, I sort of like it that way better for sound now. heh ;D
JMG

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #17 on: April 30, 2009, 05:51:22 AM » by milner place

The usual difficulty in making a choice, but this kept pulling me back to it, and I think it well worthy of this spot.

milner

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #18 on: April 30, 2009, 07:33:42 AM » by Jose MarGuerr

Señor Milner! Now this I did not expect and to awaken this morning to find this here is a proud moment ahah. ;D Thank you. No more speech, just rosy cheeks to burn all day. heh ;D wow...
JMG

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #19 on: April 30, 2009, 07:54:26 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: silent lotus on April 15, 2009, 08:53:02 AM

Dear José

This may very well one day find its way to 'the front page'.

Beautiful !

silent lotus

On the last day of April i send you again congratulations !

silent lotus

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #20 on: April 30, 2009, 08:26:34 AM » by Scott Douglas

good to see your words up on the billboard,Jose.

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #21 on: April 30, 2009, 10:08:54 AM » by Tom Riordan

Hey, Jose! Congrats! Tom

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #22 on: April 30, 2009, 10:14:22 AM » by Sherry Thrasher

This is the first time that I have read your work and I am not at all disappointed. Very fine indeed. Congratulations for your well deserved placement.

Sherry

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #23 on: April 30, 2009, 11:43:51 AM » by Lynn Doiron

Applauding here! Congratulations on front page pick, Jose!

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« Reply #24 on: April 30, 2009, 01:55:25 PM » by StellaR

muchas felicitaciones!! (correcto?)
many congratulations, Jose. well-deserved honour!

Stella

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #25 on: May 01, 2009, 08:29:13 AM » by Jose MarGuerr

Gracias, Merci, Danke too! and salamat and gratsie and in every language i can think of to you ladies and gentlemen. heh ;D Ms. Stella si, you said it right ahah. Bien hecho. ;D Nice to meet you too Ms. Sherry. All-a yous thanks again por el honor. ;D OH and Mr. Lotus, thanks to you too. ;D
JMG

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #26 on: May 01, 2009, 04:24:48 PM » by maggie flanagan-wilkie

Just enjoyed this again, Jose. Maggie

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #27 on: May 01, 2009, 07:14:52 PM » by Jay Dougherty

There's wonderful music in this, Jose:

They suck the marrow from the bone,
the bell and all that was the bell.

Well deserved pick for front page.

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #28 on: May 02, 2009, 07:04:08 AM » by jamesthomashoward

Superb poem, Jose. Well worthy of the front page.

James

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Re: Saddle on a Wooden Horse
« Reply #29 on: May 06, 2009, 09:15:53 PM » by Mike Barrett

Been enjoying this all week, great work, Jose.

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