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Re: Portrait of an old man
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Reply #15 on:
February 12, 2009, 01:06:25 AM »
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Timothy Juhl
Way to go, Michael!
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If you live to be 100, I hope I live to be 100 minus 1 day, so I never have to live without you.
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February 12, 2009, 02:11:28 AM »
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maggie flanagan-wilkie
Excellent choice for the Front Page, Lynn.
Maggie
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February 12, 2009, 06:18:10 AM »
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Michael Savage
Congrats for making the front page.
Michael
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A smile goes a long way.
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February 12, 2009, 03:09:41 PM »
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Michael T. Mayo
Thank you very much. I am honored. Thank you to everyone who read and commented. I will enjoy posting on this site in the future.
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February 12, 2009, 04:19:09 PM »
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Sherry Thrasher
Congratulations, Michael T. Mayo.
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It snowed last year too: I made a snowman and my brother knocked it down and I knocked my brother down and then we had tea.
~Dylan Thomas
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February 12, 2009, 06:10:18 PM »
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brian_edwards
Quote from: Lynn Doiron on February 11, 2009, 11:46:33 PM
This week, I intentionally skipped re-reading many of my favorite poets here on the site with a goal in mind of finding the less often exposed writers and their work.
This should be applauded. Good for you Lynn. And good on you for picking up the gauntlet thrown down by O.
B.
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February 13, 2009, 02:33:28 AM »
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BerryvanHagen
Rather melancholic and sad poem. You describe the scene vividly. I like the connection of the artist missing a bottom tooth and in the last line the cavity in the heart of the city. Very clever.
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February 14, 2009, 07:50:10 AM »
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Mel McEvoy
Enjoyed the piece and feedback.
Great work
mel
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February 18, 2009, 02:14:50 PM »
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Vasile Baghiu
Michael, I like very much your poem. Congratulations for the front page!
Vasile
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