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  Re: Listening to Renee Fleming
« Reply #15 on: January 22, 2009, 01:59:08 PM » by milner place
I did find a problem in not knowing anything of the singer, and, though I appreciate how well expressed this is, I can't really connect.
In your poem Piero della Francesca, though I didn't know the painter or picture, there were hints in it that allowed me to create a painting of the genre in my head. I couldn't create the voice from this. This leaves me admiring the poem as a tribute, but unable to connect otherwise. I even had to google to find out what kind of a singer she is. Even 'soprano' in the title might have helped some. Therefore, for me, I repeat, for me, the poem has no depths to explore.  But, no doubt, for her fans it will have plenty.

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  Re: Listening to Renee Fleming
« Reply #16 on: January 22, 2009, 02:04:02 PM » by milner place
It's just struck me, that if I ignored the title I could apply it to a skylark. So in a way it has worked. I still think at least 'soprano' should be in the title.

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  Re: Listening to Renee Fleming
« Reply #17 on: January 22, 2009, 02:06:30 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
I'm with Mugs.
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  Re: Listening to Renee Fleming
« Reply #18 on: January 22, 2009, 02:30:40 PM » by a.e.plastic
Other than a second look at the way the first two lines of the piece are punctuated, aep, which I'm sure Ken will consider if and when he revises, I don't believe there is anything slight about a poet's observation of the least of things.

Maggie


It's not the scope of the subject-matter but the treatment which I see as lacking any substance or resonance.
Strands are so often slender and "honeyed sunshine" is just a slight extension of the commonplace "liquid sunshine" and if I recall correctly is  itself part of a slogan for a breakfast cereal.  The connection between gold and sunshine is also wholly unoriginal. So I'm sorry but for me this is eminently forgettable.
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  Re: Listening to Renee Fleming
« Reply #19 on: January 22, 2009, 02:43:42 PM » by Ken Robson
Brian,

Renee Fleming's voice, unlike my poem,
is no little thing. You should listen to it.
The commas slow the reader as the voice,
with the voice, my choice.

                                        Ken
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  Re: Listening to Renee Fleming
« Reply #20 on: January 22, 2009, 06:10:16 PM » by Lynn Doiron
Still gorgeous for me.  Still sings.  I've never listened to, nor have I googled, nor have I any knowledge of Renee Fleming beyond what's appeared in this poem, and in the comment thread -- But, having read the poem initially, I wanted to hear the magic you'd found, Ken, in trying to pen her voice to paper.

I like all of the punctuation in this, from first perioid to last.

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  Re: Listening to Renee Fleming
« Reply #21 on: January 23, 2009, 11:55:00 AM » by Jay Dougherty
Wow. Holding is all we can ask for.
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  Re: Listening to Renee Fleming
« Reply #22 on: January 24, 2009, 01:16:38 PM » by Matt Moseman
is this about spitting?
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  Re: Listening to Renee Fleming
« Reply #23 on: January 25, 2009, 03:58:52 PM » by MichelleBethCronk
I need to add my warm thoughts at seeing this on the front page, Ken.  I weigh in on the side of pure enjoyment - even with no prior knowledge of the singer......these short images are not as easy to make as they seem and this one hit home for me.  xo M
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