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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #15 on: November 25, 2008, 11:16:46 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
When the time is right.

:)
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #16 on: November 29, 2008, 10:05:57 PM » by Tom Riordan
For your sake and mine,
let the prayers drift by, Pete.
My day of rest is now an inundation.
Omnipotent can't mean I must do everything.
I don't want to hear prayers any more,
light firmaments, clothe lilies or feed birds.

A hamster on a wheel,
my motion makes the world go round
but I am only trying not to get bored,
hurling lightning at a tree, parting a cloud.
I want to go.
The last time I was on a boat
was before Ahab, before Noah--
my honeymoon, when we sailed
to that Rock Resort and Jo swam
ashore for ice; the six-wing seraphs
were in stitches when she got back
with a baggie full of water in her teeth.

I want to retire, with a party.
I want a real watch, carrot cake--
spicy, cream cheese icing, a big
Thanks For Everything
in crimson decorating gel.

Put that ledger down and look at me.
In all these years, have we talked?
Have you ever been to Cathay? Kitty Hawk?
Aren't you curious? Hey, Pete, what say
we drink some Mount Gay Frozen Daiquiris?

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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #17 on: December 01, 2008, 11:43:26 PM » by Tom Riordan
posted to Submit Your Poetry.

                Sonnet

      unowned     perfect
        by past     round
             and     red
        childless     drop

          to ask     tempts
     the cause     the tip
          is only     of your
         shallow     finger

       no line is     to offer
       the child     my lip
        nor sire     a taste
        of circle     of ruin

        no love     and then
         sparks     your own
nor quenches     lips
        any fire     taste

         time is     of chard
     just blood     and liver
      still to be     God
          drawn     wet and

        cut the     thin pins
pomegranate     pressed
       and see     in tailor's
      freedom     lips

      the prize     as patient as
     a thought     a mantis



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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #18 on: December 01, 2008, 11:50:10 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
Cleverly writ
16 ways to Sunday
this can be read
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #19 on: December 03, 2008, 09:24:11 AM » by Tom Riordan
"kaleidoscopathillogical" posted to Submit Your Poetry 1-1-09

kaleidoscopathy (old draft-key)

gaseous sausage
cheerios screech
prague grapes
sniper prunes
sharpen hairpins
stiff fists kiss skis
mile lime lips slip
calvados avocados
wikipedia kiwifruit
windchimes inchworms
lepers spears
seattle beatles
nascar acorns
canadas sodacan
clutches chiclets
pickpockets chickenpox
somebodies goosebumps
flushes footfalls
boxers reebok
shallots tassles
seaglass sausage
late teal tale
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #20 on: December 03, 2008, 10:47:53 AM » by Tom Riordan
A Wrong Number - Submitted Jan. '09
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #21 on: December 10, 2008, 11:30:20 PM » by Tom Riordan
"Transcript, Antarctica" posted to Submit Your Poetry
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #22 on: December 13, 2008, 04:33:27 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Looks like there's an incomplete sentence in S1 ending iwth "manure."  I like the eeriness of this.  It's really cool.
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Rick's fifth book is out:  Gizmo--love, loss and the passion to know--in the first part of the last century.

  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #23 on: December 13, 2008, 05:37:05 PM » by Tom Riordan
Ah, Rick, thanks for looking in. Yes, I'm just putting this together bit by bit, a lot incomplete but glad to hear there's another nut out there who likes this kind of weird! I'm gonna need you if I ever finish it and post it! -Tom
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #24 on: December 14, 2008, 05:54:14 PM » by EB
[posted to Submit Your Poetry on nov. 24]:
 "DA RAVEN"   by 50 Cento

Christopher Walkin kills the Raven, I play his reading for my kids every halloween at school, love it!
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #25 on: December 14, 2008, 07:36:41 PM » by Tom Riordan
Christopher Walkin kills the Raven, I play his reading for my kids every halloween at school, love it!
That sounds just right, who's more eerie than Christopher Walken? Yeek. Tom
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #26 on: December 15, 2008, 06:23:28 AM » by silent lotus
For your sake and mine,
let the prayers drift by, Pete.
My day of rest is now an inundation.
Omnipotent can't mean I must do everything.
I don't want to hear prayers any more,
light firmaments, clothe lilies or feed birds.

A hamster on a wheel,
my motion makes the world go round
but I am only trying not to get bored,
hurling lightning at a tree, parting a cloud.
I want to go.
The last time I was on a boat
was before Ahab, before Noah--
my honeymoon, when we sailed
to that Rock Resort and Jo swam
ashore for ice; the six-wing seraphs
were in stitches when she got back
with a baggie full of water in her teeth.

I want to retire, with a party.
I want a real watch, carrot cake--
spicy, cream cheese icing, a big
Thanks For Everything
in crimson decorating gel.

Put that ledger down and look at me.
In all these years, have we talked?
Have you ever been to Cathay? Kitty Hawk?
Aren't you curious? Hey, Pete, what say
we drink some Mount Gay Frozen Daiquiris?



Dear Tom
I feel this as a much enjoyable read.
 
It is almost as if the reader is listening
to a conversation that is quite intimate yet loud enough
that it must be shared with the ears of others.

And after having been myself in the Caribbean for over 30 years
that mention of Mount Gay at the end is very smooth and expansive.

miles of smiles
silent lotus
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #27 on: December 15, 2008, 09:13:57 AM » by Tom Riordan
Thanks for visiting, Silent. I'm glad you enjoyed. The Mt. Gay was a walk down Memory Lane for me too, though my real vice during my drunken decades was the black Lemon Hart 151. Straight to the afterlife, that! -Tom
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #28 on: December 15, 2008, 06:59:49 PM » by Dax



Dear Tom

Thank you
— good to have you here!
keep it coming


ciao


T
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  Re: Things in the pipeline
« Reply #29 on: December 17, 2008, 11:40:01 AM » by Tom Riordan
Dear Tom
Thank you
— good to have you here!
keep it coming
ciao
T
Thanks for the welcome, T. I am very happy to have found This Circle. Tom
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