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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #15 on:
November 25, 2008, 11:16:46 PM »
by
Lavonne Westbrooks
When the time is right.
:)
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #16 on:
November 29, 2008, 10:05:57 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
For your sake and mine,
let the prayers drift by, Pete.
My day of rest is now an inundation.
Omnipotent can't mean I
must
do everything.
I don't want to hear prayers any more,
light firmaments, clothe lilies or feed birds.
A hamster on a wheel,
my motion makes the world go round
but I am only trying not to get bored,
hurling lightning at a tree, parting a cloud.
I want to
go.
The last time I was on a boat
was before Ahab, before Noah--
my honeymoon, when we sailed
to that Rock Resort and Jo swam
ashore for ice; the six-wing seraphs
were in stitches when she got back
with a baggie full of water in her teeth.
I want to retire, with a party.
I want a real watch, carrot cake--
spicy, cream cheese icing, a big
Thanks For Everything
in crimson decorating gel.
Put that ledger down and look at me.
In all these years, have we
talked?
Have you ever been to Cathay? Kitty Hawk?
Aren't you curious? Hey, Pete, what say
we drink some Mount Gay Frozen Daiquiris?
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #17 on:
December 01, 2008, 11:43:26 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
posted to Submit Your Poetry.
Sonnet
unowned perfect
by past round
and red
childless drop
to ask tempts
the cause the tip
is only of your
shallow finger
no line is to offer
the child my lip
nor sire a taste
of circle of ruin
no love and then
sparks your own
nor quenches lips
any fire taste
time is of chard
just blood and liver
still to be God
drawn wet and
cut the thin pins
pomegranate pressed
and see in tailor's
freedom lips
the prize as patient as
a thought a mantis
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #18 on:
December 01, 2008, 11:50:10 PM »
by
Lavonne Westbrooks
Cleverly writ
16 ways to Sunday
this can be read
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #19 on:
December 03, 2008, 09:24:11 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
"kaleidoscopathillogical" posted to Submit Your Poetry 1-1-09
kaleidoscopathy (old draft-key)
gaseous sausage
cheerios screech
prague grapes
sniper prunes
sharpen hairpins
stiff fists kiss skis
mile lime lips slip
calvados avocados
wikipedia kiwifruit
windchimes inchworms
lepers spears
seattle beatles
nascar acorns
canadas sodacan
clutches chiclets
pickpockets chickenpox
somebodies goosebumps
flushes footfalls
boxers reebok
shallots tassles
seaglass sausage
late teal tale
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #20 on:
December 03, 2008, 10:47:53 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
A Wrong Number - Submitted Jan. '09
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #21 on:
December 10, 2008, 11:30:20 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
"Transcript, Antarctica" posted to Submit Your Poetry
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #22 on:
December 13, 2008, 04:33:27 PM »
by
Rick Stansberger
Looks like there's an incomplete sentence in S1 ending iwth "manure." I like the eeriness of this. It's really cool.
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Rick's fifth book is out: Gizmo--love, loss and the passion to know--in the first part of the last century.
Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #23 on:
December 13, 2008, 05:37:05 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
Ah, Rick, thanks for looking in. Yes, I'm just putting this together bit by bit, a lot incomplete but glad to hear there's another nut out there who likes this kind of weird! I'm gonna need you if I ever finish it and post it! -Tom
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #24 on:
December 14, 2008, 05:54:14 PM »
by
EB
Quote from: Tom Riordan on November 23, 2008, 09:18:38 PM
[posted to Submit Your Poetry on nov. 24]:
"DA RAVEN"
by 50 Cento
Christopher Walkin kills the Raven, I play his reading for my kids every halloween at school, love it!
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #25 on:
December 14, 2008, 07:36:41 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
Quote from: EB on December 14, 2008, 05:54:14 PM
Christopher Walkin kills the Raven, I play his reading for my kids every halloween at school, love it!
That sounds just right, who's more eerie than Christopher Walken? Yeek. Tom
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #26 on:
December 15, 2008, 06:23:28 AM »
by
silent lotus
Quote from: Tom Riordan on November 29, 2008, 10:05:57 PM
For your sake and mine,
let the prayers drift by, Pete.
My day of rest is now an inundation.
Omnipotent can't mean I
must
do everything.
I don't want to hear prayers any more,
light firmaments, clothe lilies or feed birds.
A hamster on a wheel,
my motion makes the world go round
but I am only trying not to get bored,
hurling lightning at a tree, parting a cloud.
I want to
go.
The last time I was on a boat
was before Ahab, before Noah--
my honeymoon, when we sailed
to that Rock Resort and Jo swam
ashore for ice; the six-wing seraphs
were in stitches when she got back
with a baggie full of water in her teeth.
I want to retire, with a party.
I want a real watch, carrot cake--
spicy, cream cheese icing, a big
Thanks For Everything
in crimson decorating gel.
Put that ledger down and look at me.
In all these years, have we
talked?
Have you ever been to Cathay? Kitty Hawk?
Aren't you curious? Hey, Pete, what say
we drink some Mount Gay Frozen Daiquiris?
Dear Tom
I feel this as a much enjoyable read.
It is almost as if the reader is listening
to a conversation that is quite intimate yet loud enough
that it must be shared with the ears of others.
And after having been myself in the Caribbean for over 30 years
that mention of Mount Gay at the end is very smooth and expansive.
miles of smiles
silent lotus
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #27 on:
December 15, 2008, 09:13:57 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
Thanks for visiting, Silent. I'm glad you enjoyed. The Mt. Gay was a walk down Memory Lane for me too, though my real vice during my drunken decades was the black Lemon Hart 151. Straight to the afterlife, that! -Tom
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Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #28 on:
December 15, 2008, 06:59:49 PM »
by
Dax
Dear Tom
Thank you
— good to have you here!
keep it coming
ciao
T
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“Always be nice to bankers. Always be nice to pension fund managers. Always be nice to the media. In that order.” - John Gotti
Re: Things in the pipeline
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Reply #29 on:
December 17, 2008, 11:40:01 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
Quote from: Tomas on December 15, 2008, 06:59:49 PM
Dear Tom
Thank you
good to have you here!
keep it coming
ciao
T
Thanks for the welcome, T. I am very happy to have found This Circle. Tom
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